Update Backstories.xml

Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml

@@ -3802,7 +3802,7 @@
     <!-- EN: med helper -->
     <titleShort>医科助手</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] traveled between rimworlds with [PAWN_possessive] family. [PAWN_nameDef]'s mother, a renowned doctor, often delivered lectures from the hull of their retrofitted cargo/medical ship.\n\nSometimes, the family took on difficult long-term medical work with especially needy patients, and [PAWN_nameDef] helped where [PAWN_pronoun] could. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]时常和[PAWN_possessive]家人们在边缘世界之间旅行。[PAWN_nameDef]'s母亲是一位闻名于世的医生r，她时常站在他们那艘改装过的货船/医疗船上教授课程。\n\n有时候，当家人们给有特殊需求的病人做困难且长时间的手术时，[PAWN_nameDef]会帮忙做一些力所能及的事。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]时常和[PAWN_possessive]家人们在边缘世界之间旅行。[PAWN_nameDef]的母亲是一位闻名于世的医生，她经常站在他们那艘改装过的货船/医疗船上教授课程。\n\n有时候，当家人们给有特殊需求的病人做困难且长时间的手术时，[PAWN_nameDef]会帮忙做一些力所能及的事。</desc>
   </MedicalHelper27>
   
   <MedicalScientist16>
@@ -4130,7 +4130,7 @@
     <!-- EN: sketcher -->
     <titleShort>素描家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born into a loving but poor family.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] discovered [PAWN_pronoun] had an artistic talent which [PAWN_pronoun] inherited from [PAWN_possessive] father. [PAWN_possessive] mother taught [PAWN_objective] the benefits of hard work and determination. As [PAWN_pronoun] grew older, [PAWN_nameDef] developed a fascination with technology and military history. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个充满爱的，但家境贫寒。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]发现他有一个艺术才能，他继承自[PAWN_possessive]父亲。 HI的母亲教他辛苦工作和决心的好处。 随着年龄的增长，[PAWN_nameDef]开始对技术和军事历史的迷恋。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个充满爱的，但家境贫寒的家庭。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]从[PAWN_pronoun]父亲那里遗传到了艺术天赋。 [PAWN_pronoun]的母亲教他努力工作和决心的好处。 随着年龄的增长，[PAWN_nameDef]开始对技术和军事历史产生迷恋。</desc>
   </MidworldSketcher71>
   
   <MilitantChild49>
@@ -4910,7 +4910,7 @@
     <!-- EN: activist -->
     <titleShort>活动家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was involved with a radical political faction which worked against [PAWN_possessive] homeworld's government.\n\nThe guerilla tactics training that [PAWN_nameDef] received from [PAWN_possessive] associates gave [PAWN_objective] the skills to fight, but also drove [PAWN_objective] to compromise [PAWN_possessive] own beliefs. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDe加入了一个极端反政府的政治组织。\n\n 在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]得到游击战术训练，战斗技能得到提高, 也意味着[PAWN_pronoun]对自己的信仰进行了妥协。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]加入了一个激进反政府的政治组织。\n\n 在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]得到游击战术训练，战斗技能得到提高, 也意味着[PAWN_pronoun]对自己的信仰进行了妥协。</desc>
   </PoliticalActivist20>
   
   <PoliticalAssassin46>
@@ -6609,7 +6609,7 @@
     <!-- EN: tech kid -->
     <titleShort>科技小子</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved nothing more then to forget the world around [PAWN_objective] and focus on the task at hand. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]最喜欢抛开走位的一切，忘情于手中的事物。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]最喜欢抛开周围的一切，忘情于手中的事物。</desc>
   </TechnicalKid1>
   
   <Technician9>