diff --git a/Royalty/Keyed/Letters.xml b/Royalty/Keyed/Letters.xml
index eaf2e356..d0e94378 100644
--- a/Royalty/Keyed/Letters.xml
+++ b/Royalty/Keyed/Letters.xml
@@ -167,9 +167,9 @@
   <LetterTextBestowingCeremonyTitleUpdated>{TARGET_definite}在授勋仪式安排后获得了新的头衔。为了配合新头衔的授予，另一个仪式将很快被安排。\n\n新的授予仪式将包括所有尚未授予的头衔的启灵装置奖励。</LetterTextBestowingCeremonyTitleUpdated>
   
   <!-- EN: {PAWN_labelShort} received {1} honor as a sign of respect from {FACTION_name}, for gathering {3} spectators. -->
-  <LetterPartBestowingExtraHonor>{PAWN_labelShort}获得了{1}x荣誉点数， 以示对{FACTION_name}的尊重， 因为他聚集了{3}x观众。</LetterPartBestowingExtraHonor>
+  <LetterPartBestowingExtraHonor>由于{PAWN_labelShort}聚集了{3}名观众，{FACTION_name}授予了{PAWN_pronoun}{1}x荣誉点数以示尊重。</LetterPartBestowingExtraHonor>
   <!-- EN: {PAWN_labelShort} received no extra honor since there weren't many spectators. -->
-  <LetterPartNoExtraHonor>{PAWN_labelShort}没有获得额外的荣誉，因为没有多少观众。</LetterPartNoExtraHonor>
+  <LetterPartNoExtraHonor>因为没有多少观众，{PAWN_labelShort}没有获得额外的荣誉。</LetterPartNoExtraHonor>
   <!-- EN: All viewers of the ceremony received a mood bonus. -->
   <LetterPartMoodBonus>仪式的所有观众都获得了心情奖励。</LetterPartMoodBonus>