diff --git a/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml b/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
index c8ccfe9f..4f4fe924 100644
--- a/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
+++ b/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
     <!-- EN: orphan -->
     <titleShort>孤儿</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Abandoned at birth, young [PAWN_nameDef] started [PAWN_possessive] life in an orphanage.\n\nA rascal and a scoundrel, [PAWN_pronoun] became a clever troublemaker. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在出生时被遗弃，[PAWN_possessive]生活从孤儿院开始。调皮且捣蛋，[PAWN_pronoun]很快的成为了一个聪明的麻烦制造者。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在出生时被遗弃，[PAWN_possessive]生活从孤儿院开始。调皮且捣蛋，[PAWN_pronoun]很快地成为了一个聪明的麻烦制造者。</desc>
   </AbandonedOrphan61>
   
   <Abductee43>
@@ -3802,7 +3802,7 @@
     <!-- EN: med helper -->
     <titleShort>医科助手</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] traveled between rimworlds with [PAWN_possessive] family. [PAWN_nameDef]'s mother, a renowned doctor, often delivered lectures from the hull of their retrofitted cargo/medical ship.\n\nSometimes, the family took on difficult long-term medical work with especially needy patients, and [PAWN_nameDef] helped where [PAWN_pronoun] could. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]时常和[PAWN_possessive]家人们在边缘世界之间旅行。[PAWN_nameDef]'s母亲是一位闻名于世的医生r，她时常站在他们那艘改装过的货船/医疗船上教授课程。\n\n有时候，当家人们给有特殊需求的病人做困难且长时间的手术时，[PAWN_nameDef]会帮忙做一些力所能及的事。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]时常和[PAWN_possessive]家人们在边缘世界之间旅行。[PAWN_nameDef]的母亲是一位闻名于世的医生，她经常站在他们那艘改装过的货船/医疗船上教授课程。\n\n有时候，当家人们给有特殊需求的病人做困难且长时间的手术时，[PAWN_nameDef]会帮忙做一些力所能及的事。</desc>
   </MedicalHelper27>
   
   <MedicalScientist16>
@@ -3966,7 +3966,7 @@
     <!-- EN: menagerie keeper -->
     <title>动物饲养员</title>
     <!-- EN: zookeeper -->
-    <titleShort>饲养</titleShort>
+    <titleShort>饲养员</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] managed the royal menagerie of a powerful family at their estate.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]'s job saw [PAWN_pronoun] feeding elephants, tranquilizing lions, and training birds to display their plumage to titled visitors. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是皇家动物园的管理员。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]每天的工作主要就是喂养大象、安抚狮子、训练鸟类演出等。</desc>
   </MenagerieKeeper1>
@@ -4130,7 +4130,7 @@
     <!-- EN: sketcher -->
     <titleShort>素描家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born into a loving but poor family.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] discovered [PAWN_pronoun] had an artistic talent which [PAWN_pronoun] inherited from [PAWN_possessive] father. [PAWN_possessive] mother taught [PAWN_objective] the benefits of hard work and determination. As [PAWN_pronoun] grew older, [PAWN_nameDef] developed a fascination with technology and military history. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个充满爱的，但家境贫寒。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]发现他有一个艺术才能，他继承自[PAWN_possessive]父亲。 HI的母亲教他辛苦工作和决心的好处。 随着年龄的增长，[PAWN_nameDef]开始对技术和军事历史的迷恋。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个充满爱的，但家境贫寒的家庭。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]从[PAWN_pronoun]父亲那里遗传到了艺术天赋。 [PAWN_pronoun]的母亲教他努力工作和决心的好处。 随着年龄的增长，[PAWN_nameDef]开始对技术和军事历史产生迷恋。</desc>
   </MidworldSketcher71>
   
   <MilitantChild49>
@@ -4910,7 +4910,7 @@
     <!-- EN: activist -->
     <titleShort>活动家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was involved with a radical political faction which worked against [PAWN_possessive] homeworld's government.\n\nThe guerilla tactics training that [PAWN_nameDef] received from [PAWN_possessive] associates gave [PAWN_objective] the skills to fight, but also drove [PAWN_objective] to compromise [PAWN_possessive] own beliefs. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDe加入了一个极端反政府的政治组织。\n\n 在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]得到游击战术训练，战斗技能得到提高, 也意味着[PAWN_pronoun]对自己的信仰进行了妥协。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]加入了一个激进反政府的政治组织。\n\n 在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]得到游击战术训练，战斗技能得到提高, 也意味着[PAWN_pronoun]对自己的信仰进行了妥协。</desc>
   </PoliticalActivist20>
   
   <PoliticalAssassin46>
@@ -6609,7 +6609,7 @@
     <!-- EN: tech kid -->
     <titleShort>科技小子</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved nothing more then to forget the world around [PAWN_objective] and focus on the task at hand. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]最喜欢抛开走位的一切，忘情于手中的事物。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]最喜欢抛开周围的一切，忘情于手中的事物。</desc>
   </TechnicalKid1>
   
   <Technician9>
@@ -6762,7 +6762,7 @@
     <!-- EN: toxic -->
     <titleShort>中毒的孩子</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Growing up on a an industrial planet, [PAWN_nameDef] started working in a chemical plant at age of six. Years of exposure to industrial toxins left [PAWN_objective] mentally scarred.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] eventually blew up the facility and escaped the planet in a stolen cargo ship. -->
-    <desc>在一个工业星球上长大，[PAWN_nameDef]开始在六岁的化工厂工作。 多年接触工业毒物的他精神上伤痕累累。\n\n他最终炸毁了这个设施，偷了一条飞船逃离了这个星球。</desc>
+    <desc>在一个工业星球上长大，[PAWN_nameDef]六岁就开始在化工厂工作。 多年接触工业毒物的[PAWN_pronoun]精神上饱受摧残。\n\n他最终炸了这个工厂，偷了一条货船逃离了这个星球。</desc>
   </ToxicChild96>
   
   <TradersChild62>
@@ -7054,7 +7054,7 @@
     <!-- EN: urchin -->
     <titleShort>流浪儿</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: The urbworlds - ancient and deep industrial cityscapes bursting with humanity and poison. [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in the dark, unwanted reaches of such a place. [PAWN_pronoun] had to fight for every scrap of food. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_pronoun]生于一个都市世界里最漆黑的小巷里。被[PAWN_possessive]的母亲无视，[PAWN_pronoun]学会了如何靠[PAWN_possessive]自己生存，为所看见的每一点食物战斗。\n\n最终，当[PAWN_pronoun]的技能超越了[PAWN_possessive]身边所有人时，[PAWN_possessive]抛下了[PAWN_possessive]的生母，走出了这漆黑的小巷，前往地上的街道里。</desc>
+    <desc>都市世界 - 人性与腐化共同构成了这古老又深邃的工业城市风光。[PAWN_nameDef]在这样一个黑暗的、不受欢迎的地方长大。[PAWN_pronoun]不得不为每一丁点食物而战。</desc>
   </UrbworldUrchin61>
   
   <UrbworldUrchin90>
@@ -7126,7 +7126,7 @@
     <!-- EN: vengeful -->
     <titleShort>复仇者</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: As a child, [PAWN_nameDef] returned to [PAWN_possessive] village to find that it had been wiped out by bandits. [PAWN_pronoun] swore revenge on the attackers and began a violent rampage across the wilderness. -->
-    <desc>童年时代，当[PAWN_nameDef]回到村庄时发现那里已经被强盗洗劫一空。[PAWN_pronoun]发誓要报复这些袭击者，从此开始残暴的横扫荒野。</desc>
+    <desc>童年时代，当[PAWN_nameDef]回到村庄时发现那里已经被强盗洗劫一空。[PAWN_pronoun]发誓要报复这些袭击者，从此开始残暴地横扫荒野。</desc>
   </VengefulChild43>
   
   <VengefulExplorer54>
@@ -7135,7 +7135,7 @@
     <!-- EN: explorer -->
     <titleShort>探险家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: A violent drifter without a home, [PAWN_nameDef] and [PAWN_possessive] father fought many battles across hundreds of years. [PAWN_pronoun] became a grizzled fighter and crack shot.\n\nAfter [PAWN_possessive] father's death in battle, [PAWN_nameDef] began exploring the stars alone, seeking [PAWN_possessive] father's killer, on the hunt for revenge. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个没有家的流浪暴徒，曾和父亲参与了许多的贯穿了数百年的战争。如今的[PAWN_pronoun]是一个头发斑白的战士和神枪手。\n\n在父亲被一场战斗夺去生命之后，[PAWN_nameDef]开始孤独地在星际中探索，寻找着杀害父亲的凶手，以期觅得复仇的机会。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个没有家的流浪暴徒，曾和[PAWN_possessive]父亲在数百年间参与了许多战争。如今的[PAWN_pronoun]是一个头发斑白的战士和神枪手。\n\n在父亲被一场战斗夺去生命之后，[PAWN_nameDef]开始孤独地在星际中探索，寻找着杀害父亲的凶手，以期觅得复仇的机会。</desc>
   </VengefulExplorer54>
   
   <VengefulHunter32>
@@ -7144,7 +7144,7 @@
     <!-- EN: vengeful -->
     <titleShort>复仇者</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Following the death of a close friend by animal attack, [PAWN_nameDef] hunted the beast responsible. [PAWN_pronoun] tracked it to a nearby village, only to find one of the villagers wearing its pelt. -->
-    <desc>在一个好友被野兽杀害以后，[PAWN_nameDef]沿着这头野兽的踪迹追寻下去，直到[PAWN_possessive]在路径最后的一个村庄里看见一个村民早已猎杀了这头野兽，腰上还缠着它的皮。</desc>
+    <desc>在一名密友死于动物袭击之后，[PAWN_nameDef]前往追猎杀死其密友的野兽。[PAWN_pronoun]跟踪野兽到达一个附近的村庄，结果看见一个村民早已猎杀了这头野兽，腰上还缠着它的皮。</desc>
   </VengefulHunter32>
   
   <VengefulNomad67>
@@ -7261,7 +7261,7 @@
     <!-- EN: vR addict -->
     <titleShort>VR沉迷者</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a VR head - someone who is permanently jacked into the virtual gaming universe by [PAWN_possessive] spinal plug. [PAWN_pronoun] moved through [PAWN_possessive] daily tasks barely aware of the physical reality around him. This left [PAWN_objective] nearly unable to socialize. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 是一名长期透过脊椎插头连接入虚拟世界的VR玩家。[PAWN_pronoun]透过虚拟实境来完成和满足[PAWN_possessive]日常需求与工作，几乎无法辨认[PAWN_pronoun]周围真实存在的现实。[PAWN_pronoun]几乎无法与人正常的交流。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 是一名长期透过脊椎插头连接入虚拟世界的VR玩家。[PAWN_pronoun]透过虚拟实境来完成和满足[PAWN_possessive]日常需求与工作，几乎无法辨认[PAWN_pronoun]周围真实存在的现实。[PAWN_pronoun]几乎无法与人正常地交流。</desc>
   </VRAddict29>
   
   <VRDesigner87>
@@ -7387,7 +7387,7 @@
     <!-- EN: captain -->
     <titleShort>舰长</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Years of being commanding officer of an advanced corvette taught [PAWN_nameDef] the art of leadership, the techniques of higher engineering, and how to stay calm while enemies try to kill you.\n\nUnfortunately, [PAWN_nameDef] only very rarely had contact with nature. -->
-    <desc>多年的担任先进小型护卫舰的指挥官教会了[PAWN_nameDef]领导的艺术、高等工程的技术，以及面对试图杀死你的敌人时如何保持冷静。\n\n不幸的是，[PAWN_nameDef]很少接触到大自然。</desc>
+    <desc>担任先进小型护卫舰指挥官的多年经历教会了[PAWN_nameDef]领导的艺术、高等工程的技术，以及面对试图杀死你的敌人时如何保持冷静。\n\n不幸的是，[PAWN_nameDef]很少接触到大自然。</desc>
   </WarshipCaptain67>
   
   <WastelandWanderer81>
@@ -7495,7 +7495,7 @@
     <!-- EN: master -->
     <titleShort>小领袖</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Born to two medics, [PAWN_nameDef] longed for power. [PAWN_possessive] keen intellect and charisma helped [PAWN_objective] gain the respect of [PAWN_possessive] peers.\n\nDeciding that the best way to gain power was to climb the ranks of the imperial military, [PAWN_pronoun] joined at the youngest possible age. -->
-    <desc>虽然出生于医生世家，[PAWN_nameDef]却渴望权力。过人的才智和人格魅力让[PAWN_objective]在同辈中获得了尊重。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]选择了提高帝国军军衔这条获得权力的最佳途径，[PAWN_pronoun]在达到小许可年龄时便应征入伍。</desc>
+    <desc>虽然出生于医生世家，[PAWN_nameDef]却渴望权力。过人的才智和人格魅力让[PAWN_objective]在同辈中获得了尊重。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]选择了提高帝国军军衔这条获得权力的最佳途径，[PAWN_pronoun]在达到最小许可年龄时便应征入伍。</desc>
   </YoungMaster23>
   
   <YoungPirate71>
@@ -7522,7 +7522,7 @@
     <!-- EN: delinquent -->
     <titleShort>犯人</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the only child of celebrity sommeliers. [PAWN_possessive] parents expected [PAWN_objective] to take up the family profession, but after [PAWN_possessive] third admission to a youth detention center, this career path became unlikely.\n\nWhile in detention, [PAWN_nameDef] became skilled at making shanks and developed an interest in ornithology. -->
-    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 是知名调酒师的唯一孩子，[PAWN_possessive]父母希望[PAWN_pronoun]可以继承这个职业，但[PAWN_pronoun]第三次进入看守所之后，接手这份工作变得不太可能。\n\n在拘留期间，[PAWN_nameDef]善于配制各类钥匙，对射击鸟类兴趣昂然。</desc>
+    <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 是知名调酒师的唯一孩子，[PAWN_possessive]父母希望[PAWN_pronoun]可以继承这个职业，但[PAWN_pronoun]第三次进入看守所之后，接手这份工作变得不太可能。\n\n在拘留期间，[PAWN_nameDef]善于配制各类钥匙，对射击鸟类兴趣盎然。</desc>
   </YouthDelinquent30>
   
   <YouthSoldier99>
@@ -7534,4 +7534,4 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个军人家族中，[PAWN_pronoun]遵循先人传统，参与了军事训练计划。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]非常擅长体能训练并且通过陆战队所制定的智商和体能测验。虽然思维算不上敏捷，[PAWN_nameDef]非常善于从努力和受苦中成长。</desc>
   </YouthSoldier99>
   
-</BackstoryTranslations>
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+</BackstoryTranslations>