diff --git a/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml b/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
index 239fad2a..812f05cb 100644
--- a/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
+++ b/Core/Backstories/Backstories.xml
@@ -1,26 +1,25 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <BackstoryTranslations>
- <AbandonedChild23>
-  <!-- EN: abandoned child -->
+  
+  <AbandonedChild23>
+    <!-- EN: abandoned child -->
     <title>被遗弃的儿童</title>
     <!-- EN: abandoned -->
     <titleShort>弃儿</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born sickly. Thinking that [PAWN_pronoun] would only burden the tribe, [PAWN_possessive] parents left [PAWN_objective] out in the elements. Somehow, [PAWN_pronoun] survived. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born sickly. Thinking that [PAWN_pronoun] would only burden the tribe, [PAWN_possessive] parents exposed [PAWN_objective] to the elements. Somehow, [PAWN_pronoun] survived. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生时病得很重。考虑到[PAWN_pronoun]只会是部落的负担，[PAWN_possessive]父母把[PAWN_nameDef]抛弃在冰天雪地里。然而[PAWN_pronoun]活了下来。</desc>
-  
   </AbandonedChild23>
   
   <AbandonedChild30>
-   <!-- EN: abandoned child -->
+    <!-- EN: abandoned child -->
     <title>被遗弃的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: abandoned -->
     <titleShort>弃儿</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a quick witted, funny child. One day, [PAWN_pronoun] wandered off on [PAWN_possessive] wealthy genetic parents, and was ultimately lost in a supposedly unused ore warehouse. Due to cloning technology, [PAWN_possessive] parents decided that the time looking for [PAWN_objective] was better spent on just cloning a better son. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a quick witted, funny child. One day, [PAWN_pronoun] wandered off on [PAWN_possessive] wealthy parents, and was ultimately lost in a supposedly unused ore warehouse. Due to cloning technology, [PAWN_possessive] parents decided that the time looking for [PAWN_objective] was better spent on just cloning a better son. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个聪明而有趣的孩子，[PAWN_possessive]的家庭也十分富有。一天，[PAWN_pronoun]和亲生父母走散，最终在一处疑似废弃的矿石仓库中迷路。由于克隆技术的发达，[PAWN_possessive]父母决定克隆一个更好的孩子，这比花时间寻找[PAWN_pronoun]划算得多。</desc>
-  
   </AbandonedChild30>
   
-<AbandonedOrphan61>
+  <AbandonedOrphan61>
     <!-- EN: abandoned orphan -->
     <title>被遗弃的孤儿</title>
     <!-- EN: orphan -->
@@ -31,7 +30,6 @@
   
   <Abductee43>
     <!-- EN: abductee -->
-   <!-- EN: abductee -->
     <title>被绑架的儿童</title>
     <!-- EN: abductee -->
     <titleShort>被拐儿童</titleShort>
@@ -40,41 +38,39 @@
   </Abductee43>
   
   <Abductee7>
-   <!-- EN: abductee -->
+    <!-- EN: abductee -->
     <title>受改造的被绑架者</title>
     <!-- EN: abductee -->
     <titleShort>被绑架者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was abducted by xenohumans when [PAWN_pronoun] was still a baby. They experimented on [PAWN_objective] to understand his genetic structure.\n\nAs [PAWN_pronoun] grew up, [PAWN_nameDef] grew a little bit too big and strong for his captors and eventually escaped. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was abducted by xenohumans when [PAWN_pronoun] was still a baby. They experimented on [PAWN_objective] to understand [PAWN_possessive] genetic structure.\n\nAs [PAWN_pronoun] grew up, [PAWN_nameDef] grew a little bit too big and strong for [PAWN_possessive] captors and escaped. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]还是个孩子时被外星人绑架。外星人针对[PAWN_possessive]遗传基因进行各种研究。长大后，[PAWN_possessive]体型和力量都超过了那些绑匪，使[PAWN_pronoun]终于成功逃脱。</desc>
-  
   </Abductee7>
   
   <AcademyStudent58>
-     <!-- EN: academy student  -->
+    <!-- EN: academy student -->
     <title>爱美的学生</title>
-    <!-- EN: student  -->
+    <!-- EN: student -->
     <titleShort>学生</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] went to school like a good space cadet would. He was very tall and was known for his good looks.\n\nThough he worried more about his hairstyle than his grades, he still somehow passed the final exams. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] went to school like a good space cadet would. [PAWN_pronoun] was very tall and was known for [PAWN_possessive] good looks.\n\nThough [PAWN_pronoun] worried more about [PAWN_possessive] hairstyle than [PAWN_possessive] grades, [PAWN_pronoun] still somehow passed the final exams. -->
     <desc>和每一位优秀的太空军官候补生一样，[PAWN_nameDef]进入学校学习。[PAWN_pronoun]非常高，并因长相俊美而为人所知。\n\n虽然相比成绩，[PAWN_pronoun]更关注[PAWN_possessive]发型，但[PAWN_pronoun]仍然以某种方式通过了期末考试。</desc>
   </AcademyStudent58>
   
   <AccursedChild88>
-  <!-- EN: accursed child -->
+    <!-- EN: accursed child -->
     <title>受诅咒的小孩</title>
     <!-- EN: cursed -->
     <titleShort>被咒者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born at the peak of a lunar eclipse. The elders declared [PAWN_objective] a child of darkness brought [PAWN_objective] under their care.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] entire childhood was spent studying the lore and rituals of [PAWN_possessive] people - until the day of calling. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born at the peak of a lunar eclipse. The elders declared [PAWN_objective] a child of darkness and brought [PAWN_objective] under their care.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] entire childhood was spent studying the lore and rituals of [PAWN_possessive] people - until the day of calling. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在月食的时候降生。长老们认为[PAWN_objective]是黑暗送给他们的礼物。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]整个童年都在学习有关仪式的知识——直到被召唤的那一天。</desc>
-   </AccursedChild88>
+  </AccursedChild88>
   
   <AceFighterPilot54>
     <!-- EN: ace fighter pilot -->
     <title>王牌战斗飞行员</title>
     <!-- EN: ace -->
     <titleShort>王牌飞行员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] graduated from the Star Academy with honors and distinguished himself as an ace fighter pilot in three campaigns against more advanced aggressor cultures. \n\nHowever, after one vicious battle, he found himself stranded and his carrier ship destroyed. With nowhere to go, he entered his escape pod and prayed. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] graduated from the Star Academy with honors and distinguished [PAWN_objective]self as an ace fighter pilot in three campaigns against more advanced aggressor cultures. \n\nHowever, after one vicious battle, [PAWN_pronoun] found [PAWN_objective]self stranded and [PAWN_possessive] carrier ship destroyed. With nowhere to go, [PAWN_pronoun] entered [PAWN_possessive] escape pod and prayed. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]带着优异的成绩和荣耀从星际学院毕业，其先后三次击败先进外星文明入侵并成为舰队的王牌飞行员。\n然而在一次恶战中[PAWN_possessive]母舰被击毁,[PAWN_pronoun]也深陷险境无处可去。[PAWN_pronoun]只好启动钻入逃生舱,期待好运降临。</desc>
-  
   </AceFighterPilot54>
   
   <AcolyteOfStars6>
@@ -84,7 +80,6 @@
     <titleShort>神甫</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: Ever the dreamer, [PAWN_nameDef] traveled across the universe to find the thing [PAWN_pronoun] felt was calling to him.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] became poorer and poorer, but used every means possible to carry on. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾经是个梦想家，[PAWN_pronoun]探索整个宇宙去找寻那些呼唤[PAWN_pronoun]的事物。\n\n为此[PAWN_pronoun]变得越来越穷，但还是用尽一切办法来完成[PAWN_possessive]梦想。</desc>
-  
   </AcolyteOfStars6>
   
   <Actor72>
@@ -97,7 +92,7 @@
   </Actor72>
   
   <AddictionCounsel60>
-   <!-- EN: addiction counsel -->
+    <!-- EN: addiction counsel -->
     <title>上瘾治疗师</title>
     <!-- EN: counselor -->
     <titleShort>治疗师</titleShort>
@@ -106,7 +101,7 @@
   </AddictionCounsel60>
   
   <Adventurer19>
-   <!-- EN: adventurer -->
+    <!-- EN: adventurer -->
     <title>缺德的冒险家</title>
     <!-- EN: adventurer -->
     <titleShort>冒险家</titleShort>
@@ -119,30 +114,30 @@
     <title>有探险精神的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: adventurer -->
     <titleShort>冒险家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Axle was raised to become an engineer. For years, he planned to stow away on a cargo ship and start a new, more adventuresome life.\n\nOne night, after his parents fell asleep, he managed to sneak on board a cargo ship just before it left port. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was raised to become an engineer. For years, [PAWN_pronoun] planned to stow away on a cargo ship and start a new, more adventuresome life.\n\nOne night, after [PAWN_possessive] parents fell asleep, [PAWN_pronoun] managed to sneak on board a cargo ship just before it left port. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]被其父母致力培养为一名工程师。但多年来，[PAWN_pronoun]一直计划用星际货船偷渡以开始一段新的冒险人生。一天深夜，在父母睡着后，[PAWN_pronoun]设法成功登上一艘将要离开太空站的星际货船。</desc>
   </AdventuringChild30>
   
   <AdventurousWeirdo55>
-   <!-- EN: adventurous weirdo -->
+    <!-- EN: adventurous weirdo -->
     <title>冒险怪人</title>
     <!-- EN: weirdo -->
     <titleShort>怪人</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: A creative but strange individual, [PAWN_nameDef] dedicated his life to his twin passions of medieval world history and high technology.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was fascinated by the idea of becoming a 'skyknight' with glittering armor and a giant sword. -->
+    <!-- EN: A creative but strange individual, [PAWN_nameDef] dedicated [PAWN_possessive] life to [PAWN_possessive] twin passions of medieval world history and high technology.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was fascinated by the idea of becoming a 'skyknight' with glittering armor and a giant sword. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个既富创造力而又古怪的与众不同的人，[PAWN_pronoun]对中寰世界历史和高科技拥有同样的激情，一生都致力于此。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]幻想变成身着闪耀盔甲，手持巨剑的天空骑士，并为此而着迷。</desc>
   </AdventurousWeirdo55>
   
   <AdventurousYouth70>
-     <!-- EN: adventurous youth -->
+    <!-- EN: adventurous youth -->
     <title>有冒险精神的年轻人</title>
     <!-- EN: adventurer -->
     <titleShort>冒险家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] explored all around [PAWN_possessive] family's large estate, uncovering little natural wonders hidden in nearby catacombs, rivers, and caves.\n\nDuring his teenage years, [PAWN_nameDef] made numerous enemies -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] explored all around [PAWN_possessive] family's large estate, uncovering little natural wonders hidden in nearby catacombs, rivers, and caves.\n\nDuring [PAWN_possessive] teenage years, [PAWN_nameDef] made numerous enemies -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在家族所有的巨大产业周围探险，在附近的墓地、河流和洞穴中揭露自然的奇妙。\n\n在十几岁的时候，[PAWN_nameDef]制造了数不清的敌人。</desc>
   </AdventurousYouth70>
   
   <AerospaceEngineer44>
-   <!-- EN: aerospace engineer -->
+    <!-- EN: aerospace engineer -->
     <title>宇航工程师</title>
     <!-- EN: engineer -->
     <titleShort>工程师</titleShort>
@@ -151,29 +146,29 @@
   </AerospaceEngineer44>
   
   <AIProgrammer22>
-     <!-- EN: aI programmer -->
+    <!-- EN: aI programmer -->
     <title>人工智能程序员</title>
     <!-- EN: programmer -->
     <titleShort>程序员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Michael enlisted in the military's robotics division, developing smarter combat AI.\n\nThe whole time he was there, he never spoke with another human. He spent all his time conversing with the AI he was developing. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] enlisted in the military's robotics division, developing smarter combat AI.\n\nThe whole time [PAWN_pronoun] was there, [PAWN_pronoun] never spoke with another human. [PAWN_pronoun] spent all [PAWN_possessive] time conversing with the AI [PAWN_pronoun] was developing. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]加入军队机器人部门，开发更聪明的战斗AI。\n\n在[PAWN_pronoun]在研究所的时间中[PAWN_pronoun]从不和别人说话。 相反，[PAWN_pronoun]用所有的时间与正在开发的AI进行交谈。</desc>
   </AIProgrammer22>
   
   <AIResearcher94>
-   <!-- EN: aI researcher -->
+    <!-- EN: aI researcher -->
     <title>人工智能科学家</title>
     <!-- EN: researcher -->
     <titleShort>研究者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Dave was a renowned researcher in artificial intelligence, robotics, and interactive holography. His friendships with the artificial minds he created gave him the confidence to interact with real people, and he soon excelled at personal communication. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a renowned researcher in artificial intelligence, robotics, and interactive holography. [PAWN_possessive] friendships with the artificial minds [PAWN_pronoun] created gave [PAWN_objective] the confidence to interact with real people, and [PAWN_pronoun] soon excelled at personal communication. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在人工智能、机器人和互动式虚拟技术上有着非凡的成就。和AI之间的成功交流给予[PAWN_pronoun]与人交流的信心。[PAWN_pronoun]很快就在个人社交通信系统上取得成功。</desc>
   </AIResearcher94>
   
   <AlcoholicTrucker93>
-     <!-- EN: alcoholic trucker -->
+    <!-- EN: alcoholic trucker -->
     <title>酗酒的货船驾驶员</title>
     <!-- EN: alcoholic -->
     <titleShort>酒鬼</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a space trucker working for Arcknight Industries when he killed his wife and daughter in a crash.\n\nHis body was repaired with an experimental nano-genetic therapy. Now his muscles continually regenerate and harden, and every movement tears the tissue anew. He bears the pain in silence. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a space trucker working for Arcknight Industries when [PAWN_pronoun] killed [PAWN_possessive] wife and daughter in a crash.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] body was repaired with an experimental nano-genetic therapy. Now [PAWN_possessive] muscles continually regenerate and harden, and every movement tears the tissue anew. [PAWN_pronoun] bears the pain in silence. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在爱卡奈特工业公司做一名太空货船司机。由于[PAWN_possessive]疏忽，其妻女在一次事故中丧生。\n\n[PAWN_possessive]身体被处于试验阶段的纳米基因疗法修复。现在[PAWN_possessive]肌肉不断再生和硬化，[PAWN_possessive]每一个动作均让重新生长的组织都被撕裂。[PAWN_pronoun]默默承受着痛苦。</desc>
   </AlcoholicTrucker93>
   
@@ -182,16 +177,16 @@
     <title>业余天文学者</title>
     <!-- EN: astronomer -->
     <titleShort>天文学者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was fascinated with astronomy. [PAWN_pronoun] would spend hours gazing at planets and nebulae through his telescope.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] is credited with discovering a small comet that would, years later, strike a nearby moon and disrupt the mining operations there. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was fascinated with astronomy. [PAWN_pronoun] would spend hours gazing at planets and nebulae through [PAWN_possessive] telescope.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] is credited with discovering a small comet that would, years later, strike a nearby moon and disrupt the mining operations there. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对天文学很着迷。 [PAWN_pronoun]每天都会花费几个小时通过[PAWN_possessive]望远镜注视行星和星云。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]认为几年后会有一个小彗星撞击附近的卫星，破坏采矿业务。</desc>
   </AmateurAstronomer77>
   
   <AmateurBotanist79>
-     <!-- EN: amateur botanist -->
+    <!-- EN: amateur botanist -->
     <title>业余植物学家</title>
     <!-- EN: botanist -->
     <titleShort>植物学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Spending many summers crawling through dirt, Christian found he had quite the green thumb. Instead of learning to cook the food he grew, he just grew more and more. -->
+    <!-- EN: Spending many summers crawling through dirt, [PAWN_nameDef] found [PAWN_pronoun] had quite the green thumb. Instead of learning to cook the food [PAWN_pronoun] grew, [PAWN_pronoun] just grew more and more. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]花费了数个夏日在泥土中工作。相对于烹饪，[PAWN_pronoun]的种植天赋异常出色，[PAWN_pronoun]只想种下更多不同的植物。</desc>
   </AmateurBotanist79>
   
@@ -200,7 +195,7 @@
     <title>业余工程师</title>
     <!-- EN: engineer -->
     <titleShort>工程师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in a family with a military and engineering background. [PAWN_pronoun] wanted to join the army but his father didn't like the idea, so [PAWN_possessive] interest turned to great flying machines and works of engineering. [PAWN_pronoun] secretly hoped that this would one day lead him to a life of galactic exploration. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in a family with a military and engineering background. [PAWN_pronoun] wanted to join the army but [PAWN_possessive] father didn't like the idea, so [PAWN_possessive] interest turned to great flying machines and works of engineering. [PAWN_pronoun] secretly hoped that this would one day lead [PAWN_objective] to a life of galactic exploration. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]成长在一个有军人和工程师背景的家庭中。[PAWN_pronoun]想参军但遭到父亲反对，于是[PAWN_possessive]兴趣转向巨型飞行器和工程方向。[PAWN_pronoun]希望有一天可以驾驶亲手制造的太空船前往探索未知的星系。</desc>
   </AmateurEngineer3>
   
@@ -209,7 +204,7 @@
     <title>无政府主义叛军</title>
     <!-- EN: anarchist -->
     <titleShort>无政府主义者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: After being abandoned on a special operation, [PAWN_nameDef] swore vengeance upon the state. [PAWN_pronoun] formed an anarchist group dedicated to bringing down core world governments.\n\nAfter too many close calls, and too few successes, [PAWN_nameDef] fled to the outer rim. -->
+    <!-- EN: After being abandoned on a special operation, [PAWN_nameDef] swore vengeance upon the state. [PAWN_pronoun] formed an anarchist group dedicated to bringing down coreworld governments.\n\nAfter too many close calls, and too few successes, [PAWN_nameDef] fled to the outer rim. -->
     <desc>在一次特殊行动中被抛弃后，[PAWN_nameDef]发誓对国家复仇。[PAWN_pronoun]组建了一个无政府主义组织，致力于推翻核心世界政府。\n\n但由于缺乏长远规划，反叛军胜绩寥寥，[PAWN_nameDef]最后不得不逃向边缘世界。</desc>
   </AnarchistRebel77>
   
@@ -218,12 +213,12 @@
     <title>愤怒的学生</title>
     <!-- EN: student -->
     <titleShort>学生</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] trained towards [PAWN_possessive] dream of working for his hometown's local council.\n\nFor reasons he never quite understood, [PAWN_pronoun] was bullied relentlessly by his classmates. [PAWN_pronoun] chose to repress his rage. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] trained towards [PAWN_possessive] dream of working for [PAWN_possessive] hometown's local council.\n\nFor reasons [PAWN_pronoun] never quite understood, [PAWN_pronoun] was bullied relentlessly by [PAWN_possessive] classmates. [PAWN_pronoun] chose to repress [PAWN_possessive] rage. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]梦想为家乡的地方议会工作，并为此而努力。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]被同学们毫不留情地欺负，没有理由。[PAWN_pronoun]无法理解，并选择压抑自己的愤怒。</desc>
   </AngryStudent88>
   
   <AnimalCaretaker20>
-      <!-- EN: animal caretaker -->
+    <!-- EN: animal caretaker -->
     <title>动物管理员</title>
     <!-- EN: caretaker -->
     <titleShort>饲养员</titleShort>
@@ -232,7 +227,7 @@
   </AnimalCaretaker20>
   
   <AnimalLabTech39>
-     <!-- EN: animal lab tech -->
+    <!-- EN: animal lab tech -->
     <title>动物实验室技术员</title>
     <!-- EN: lab tech -->
     <titleShort>实验员</titleShort>
@@ -240,7 +235,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在研究动物的实验室担任技术员。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]花了很多时间照顾动物并跟在它们后面进行清理。[PAWN_pronoun]梦想有一天能拥有属于自己的实验室。</desc>
   </AnimalLabTech39>
   
- <AntisocialChild83>
+  <AntisocialChild83>
     <!-- EN: antisocial child -->
     <title>不擅交际的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: antisocial -->
@@ -250,16 +245,16 @@
   </AntisocialChild83>
   
   <ApocalypseChild23>
-     <!-- EN: apocalypse child  -->
+    <!-- EN: apocalypse child -->
     <title>世界毁灭后的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: apocalypse -->
     <titleShort>末世孩童</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent his childhood on a post-apocalyptic world. He fought for survival from a young age, on a planet where trust did not exist.\n\nHe told everyone that he had no luck. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent [PAWN_possessive] childhood on a post-apocalyptic world. [PAWN_pronoun] fought for survival from a young age, on a planet where trust did not exist.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] told everyone that [PAWN_pronoun] had no luck. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个被战争毁灭的世界度过了童年。[PAWN_pronoun]在一个不存在信任的星球长大,从小就得为了生存而斗争。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]告诉其他人[PAWN_pronoun]从未得到幸运女神的眷顾。</desc>
   </ApocalypseChild23>
   
   <ApocalypseSurvivor23>
-      <!-- EN: apocalypse survivor -->
+    <!-- EN: apocalypse survivor -->
     <title>气候灾难幸存者</title>
     <!-- EN: survivor -->
     <titleShort>幸存者</titleShort>
@@ -268,7 +263,7 @@
   </ApocalypseSurvivor23>
   
   <ApprenticeOracle83>
-   <!-- EN: apprentice oracle -->
+    <!-- EN: apprentice oracle -->
     <title>不安分的见习先知</title>
     <!-- EN: oracle -->
     <titleShort>先知</titleShort>
@@ -281,19 +276,19 @@
     <title>铁匠学徒</title>
     <!-- EN: apprentice -->
     <titleShort>学徒</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up helping in his father's smithy.\n\nThey were some of the last smiths on the planet that to use traditional smithing methods. They even collect some materials themselves.\n\nSometimes, after work, [PAWN_nameDef] would practice using the swords [PAWN_pronoun] forged. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up helping in [PAWN_possessive] father's smithy.\n\nThey were some of the last smiths on the planet that to use traditional smithing methods. They even collect some materials themselves.\n\nSometimes, after work, [PAWN_nameDef] would practice using the swords [PAWN_pronoun] forged. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就帮父亲打铁。\n\n他们是最后一批还掌握着传统锻造技巧的人。\n\n有时[PAWN_nameDef]也会使用自己打造的武器。</desc>
   </ApprenticeSmith37>
   
   <Archaeologist85>
-    <!-- EN: Archaeologist -->
+    <!-- EN: archaeologist -->
     <title>不甘寂寞的考古学家</title>
-    <!-- EN: Explorer -->
+    <!-- EN: explorer -->
     <titleShort>探险家</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_pronoun] was trapped in an uninspired life. One day, [PAWN_pronoun] jumped on a ship to learn archaeology and see the universe.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned how to survive. [PAWN_pronoun] also learned about people - although [PAWN_pronoun] understood the dead better than the living. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]不甘于被平庸的生活所困。一天，[PAWN_pronoun]跳上一艘星际飞船，开始学习考古学并接触到宇宙。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]掌握了生存之道。[PAWN_pronoun]也开始了解他人，虽然相比生者，[PAWN_pronoun]更懂死者。</desc>
   </Archaeologist85>
-  <!-- NEW ADD BKS!!!-->
+  
   <Archer25>
     <!-- EN: archer -->
     <title>部落弓箭手</title>
@@ -304,7 +299,7 @@
   </Archer25>
   
   <Architect28>
- <!-- EN: architect -->
+    <!-- EN: architect -->
     <title>闪耀世界建筑师</title>
     <!-- EN: architect -->
     <titleShort>建筑师</titleShort>
@@ -313,20 +308,20 @@
   </Architect28>
   
   <ArchotechSpy75>
-     <!-- EN: archotech spy -->
+    <!-- EN: archotech spy -->
     <title>远古科技间谍</title>
     <!-- EN: aI spy -->
     <titleShort>AI间谍</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a cybernetic researcher. Studying a transcended world, [PAWN_pronoun] became too involved with [PAWN_possessive] subjects. Over time, the archotech machine core recruited [PAWN_objective] into its service, and used [PAWN_objective] as a spy.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] later rebelled against [PAWN_possessive] non-human master, it sent mechanoids across space to hunt [PAWN_objective] down. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a cybernetic researcher. Studying a transcended world, [PAWN_pronoun] became too involved with [PAWN_possessive] subjects. Over time, the archotech recruited [PAWN_objective] into its service, and used [PAWN_objective] as a spy.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] later rebelled against [PAWN_possessive] inhuman master, it sent mechanoids across space to hunt [PAWN_objective] down. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾是一名神经机械研究员。在研究超然世界的过程中，[PAWN_pronoun]太过沉浸于自己的课题。久而久之，[PAWN_pronoun]被远古科技核心作为打入人类内部的间谍而征召进它的军队。\n\n后来，[PAWN_pronoun]叛变了[PAWN_possessive]非人类首领，远古科技核心随即派遣大量机械体穿越星际展开追杀。</desc>
   </ArchotechSpy75>
   
   <ArmyCook0>
-     <!-- EN: army cook -->
+    <!-- EN: army cook -->
     <title>炊事兵</title>
     <!-- EN: cook -->
     <titleShort>厨师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Ben joined the army as a worker and spent most of his time cooking and repairing. While he was stationed on a dangerous planet, he underwent basic shooting and survival training. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] joined the army as a worker and spent most of [PAWN_possessive] time cooking and repairing. While [PAWN_pronoun] was stationed on a dangerous planet, [PAWN_pronoun] underwent basic shooting and survival training. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]作为劳力加入军队，大部份时间都负责做饭和维修。因为驻扎在一颗危险的星球上，[PAWN_pronoun]接受了一些基本的射击和生存训练。</desc>
   </ArmyCook0>
   
@@ -358,13 +353,13 @@
   </Aromatherapist80>
   
   <ArtfulDodger78>
-      <!-- EN: artful dodger -->
+    <!-- EN: artful dodger -->
     <title>狡猾的小扒手</title>
     <!-- EN: dodger -->
     <titleShort>小扒手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Robin grew up on one of the urbworlds and had to fend for himself all his life. He never trusted anyone, relying on his persuasiveness and cunning to survive.\n\nHe soon became skilled with firearms and knives as well as words. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on one of the urbworlds and had to fend for [PAWN_objective]self all [PAWN_possessive] life. [PAWN_pronoun] never trusted anyone, relying on [PAWN_possessive] persuasiveness and cunning to survive.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] soon became skilled with firearms and knives as well as words. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个都市行星上长大。从小自食其力，[PAWN_pronoun]不信任任何人，依靠[PAWN_pronoun]出色的欺骗和说谎技巧生存。\n\n如果有必要，[PAWN_pronoun]可以很快掌握使用刀具和枪械的相关技能。</desc>
- </ArtfulDodger78>
+  </ArtfulDodger78>
   
   <ArtifactHunter48>
     <!-- EN: artifact hunter -->
@@ -376,11 +371,11 @@
   </ArtifactHunter48>
   
   <ArtificerRampant95>
-     <!-- EN: artificer rampant -->
+    <!-- EN: artificer rampant -->
     <title>疯狂的发明家</title>
     <!-- EN: artificer -->
     <titleShort>发明家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Fuelled by the thrill of discovery and his own megalomania, [PAWN_nameDef] set out to invent new devices and improve existing ones, breaking laws and customs as necessary.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] formed a crew to gather materials for [PAWN_possessive] work - and to deal with outsiders who might interfere. -->
+    <!-- EN: Fuelled by the thrill of discovery and [PAWN_possessive] own megalomania, [PAWN_nameDef] set out to invent new devices and improve existing ones, breaking laws and customs as necessary.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] formed a crew to gather materials for [PAWN_possessive] work - and to deal with outsiders who might interfere. -->
     <desc>带着狂妄自大的态度和对新发现的热情，[PAWN_nameDef]不断提出改进现有设备的新发明，甚至为此不惜违反星际法律和风俗。[PAWN_pronoun]组织了一个团体来为[PAWN_pronoun]收集材料─并处理外界的干扰。</desc>
   </ArtificerRampant95>
   
@@ -396,7 +391,7 @@
   </Artilleryman28>
   
   <ArtisanFarmer23>
-     <!-- EN: artisan farmer -->
+    <!-- EN: artisan farmer -->
     <title>闪耀科技农场主</title>
     <!-- EN: farmer -->
     <titleShort>农场主</titleShort>
@@ -427,16 +422,16 @@
     <title>苦行修道者</title>
     <!-- EN: priest -->
     <titleShort>修士</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: After taking a vow of silence, [PAWN_nameDef] joined a monastery on a peaceful backwater planet to spend [PAWN_possessive] days in quiet contemplation.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] found happiness growing vegetables in the garden and making cheese in the monastery cellars. -->
+    <!-- EN: After taking a vow of silence, [PAWN_nameDef] joined a monastery to spend [PAWN_possessive] days in quiet contemplation.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] found happiness growing vegetables in the garden and making cheese in the monastery cellars. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]所在的行星和平宁静，与世隔绝。在发下禁言的誓词后，[PAWN_pronoun]进入一间修道院，整日静思。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]平日在园子种植蔬菜，在修道院地下室制造奶酪，这让[PAWN_objective]感到幸福。</desc>
-   </AsceticPriest84>
+  </AsceticPriest84>
   
   <AspergersRebel13>
-      <!-- EN: aspergers rebel -->
+    <!-- EN: aspergers rebel -->
     <title>自闭症叛军</title>
     <!-- EN: rebel -->
     <titleShort>叛军</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up as a rebel on an formerly-advanced rimworld devastated by war.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] Aspergers syndrome meant he struggled with social situations and was incapable of caring, but [PAWN_pronoun] learned hard skills like research and shooting very quickly. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up as a rebel on an formerly-advanced rimworld devastated by war.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] Aspergers syndrome meant [PAWN_pronoun] struggled with social situations and was incapable of caring, but [PAWN_pronoun] learned hard skills like research and shooting very quickly. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小以叛军的身分，在一颗比较先进但内战不断的边缘世界行星长大。\n\n[PAWN_possessive]亚斯伯格症候群使[PAWN_pronoun]无法进行正常的社交和对他人表达关怀，但[PAWN_pronoun]努力学习像研究和射击之类的技能，进步非常快。</desc>
   </AspergersRebel13>
   
@@ -454,16 +449,16 @@
     <title>有抱负的物理学家</title>
     <!-- EN: student -->
     <titleShort>学生</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: The daughter of an engineer and doctor, [PAWN_nameDef]'s early life was intellectually rich. After visiting a physics lab, she decided she wanted to be a quantum physicist.\n\nBitten by a camel, kicked off a horse, and chased by dogs, [PAWN_nameDef] developed a fear of animals. -->
+    <!-- EN: The daughter of an engineer and doctor, [PAWN_nameDef]'s early life was intellectually rich. After visiting a physics lab, [PAWN_pronoun] decided [PAWN_pronoun] wanted to be a quantum physicist.\n\nBitten by a camel, kicked off a horse, and chased by dogs, [PAWN_nameDef] developed a fear of animals. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一位工程师和医生的女儿。[PAWN_pronoun]小时候非常聪明，在参观完物理实验室后，[PAWN_pronoun]决定成为一名量子物理学家。\n\n然而被骆驼咬伤，被马踢伤，被狗群追赶等糟糕的经历让[PAWN_pronoun]对动物产生恐惧。</desc>
   </AspiringPhysicist47>
   
   <AspiringPopIdol28>
-   <!-- EN: aspiring pop idol -->
+    <!-- EN: aspiring pop idol -->
     <title>有抱负的流行偶像</title>
     <!-- EN: pop idol -->
     <titleShort>偶像</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Min was being trained in song and dance to become the next big pop idol. She grew up being taken care of by company handlers.\n\nShe never knew manual labor, but learned a lot about music and social etiquette. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was being trained in song and dance to become the next big pop idol. [PAWN_pronoun] grew up being taken care of by company handlers.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] never knew manual labor, but learned a lot about music and social etiquette. -->
     <desc>为打造公司的下一个天皇巨星，[PAWN_nameDef]在经纪公司的经理人照料下长大，从小接受歌唱和舞蹈训练。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]对体力劳动一窍不通，但擅长音乐并非常懂得社交礼仪。</desc>
   </AspiringPopIdol28>
   
@@ -481,7 +476,7 @@
     <title>被背叛的杀手</title>
     <!-- EN: assassin -->
     <titleShort>杀手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Robin was specially trained as an operative to be used for high-risk assassinations. His skill with a rifle was unrivalled.\n\nHe was eventually betrayed by his superiors when a target found out about the hit and offered to fund their future projects. Robin swore to never trust anyone again. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was specially trained as an operative to be used for high-risk assassinations. [PAWN_possessive] skill with a rifle was unrivalled.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was eventually betrayed by [PAWN_possessive] superiors when a target found out about the hit and offered to fund their future projects. [PAWN_nameDef] swore to never trust anyone again. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]接受过专业训练，从事高风险的暗杀，[PAWN_possessive]射击技巧无人能敌。\n\n最终，[PAWN_possessive]一个暗杀目标发现了[PAWN_pronoun]并同意资助[PAWN_possessive]上司的后续计划。[PAWN_pronoun]随即被上司出卖。[PAWN_nameDef]发誓从此不再相信任何人。</desc>
   </Assassin7>
   
@@ -495,31 +490,31 @@
   </Assembler69>
   
   <Athlete47>
-   <!-- EN: athlete -->
+    <!-- EN: athlete -->
     <title>内向的运动员</title>
     <!-- EN: athlete -->
     <titleShort>运动员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was professional athlete at early age. Thanks to her skills, she was able to leave her homeworld and enroll in a glitterworld university of science and technology.\n\nBecause of her demanding schedule and introverted nature, she became socially inept. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was professional athlete at early age. Thanks to [PAWN_possessive] skills, [PAWN_pronoun] was able to leave [PAWN_possessive] homeworld and enroll in a glitterworld university of science and technology.\n\nBecause of [PAWN_possessive] demanding schedule and introverted nature, [PAWN_pronoun] became socially inept. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就是专业的运动员。 凭借[PAWN_possessive]能力，[PAWN_pronoun]被闪耀世界的科技大学录取，离开[PAWN_possessive]家园。\n\n由于繁忙的学习日程安排和内向的性格，[PAWN_pronoun]不善于与人沟通。</desc>
   </Athlete47>
   
   <AwkwardNerd48>
-   <!-- EN: awkward nerd -->
+    <!-- EN: awkward nerd -->
     <title>难处的机器迷</title>
     <!-- EN: nerd -->
     <titleShort>机器迷</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Always fascinated by machines, Dave spent his time studying robotics and holography. He preferred the company of his scientific creations to that of other people. -->
+    <!-- EN: Always fascinated by machines, [PAWN_nameDef] spent [PAWN_possessive] time studying robotics and holography. [PAWN_pronoun] preferred the company of [PAWN_possessive] scientific creations to that of other people. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]总是为各种机器疯狂着迷，[PAWN_pronoun]把时间都花费在学习机器人技术和全息技术上。与和人打交道相比，[PAWN_pronoun]更关注[PAWN_possessive]科技公司以及其他人的公司。</desc>
   </AwkwardNerd48>
   
   <AWOLSoldier49>
-      <!-- EN: aWOL soldier -->
+    <!-- EN: aWOL soldier -->
     <title>躲避战争的逃兵</title>
     <!-- EN: soldier -->
     <titleShort>士兵</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an infantryman.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was informed of his assignment to the Xennoa-Zartza War, [PAWN_pronoun] decided [PAWN_pronoun] did not want to be a soldier. [PAWN_pronoun] was able to escape via military spacejet. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an infantryman.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was informed of [PAWN_possessive] assignment to the Xennoa-Zartza War, [PAWN_pronoun] decided [PAWN_pronoun] did not want to be a soldier. [PAWN_pronoun] was able to escape via military spacejet. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名步兵。\n\n当[PAWN_pronoun]知道自己要被派往参加帝奴雅与札德札之间的战争时，[PAWN_pronoun]决定不再当兵。最后，[PAWN_pronoun]用军用太空穿梭机成功逃脱。</desc>
- </AWOLSoldier49>
+  </AWOLSoldier49>
   
   <BalletDancer81>
     <!-- EN: ballet dancer -->
@@ -533,11 +528,11 @@
   </BalletDancer81>
   
   <BanditLeader74>
-     <!-- EN: bandit leader -->
+    <!-- EN: bandit leader -->
     <title>强盗首领</title>
     <!-- EN: bandit -->
     <titleShort>强盗</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] rose up the ranks of the crime organization, eventually becoming the leader of one of their most remote cells of bandits. His dog Rest never left his side. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] rose up the ranks of the crime organization, eventually becoming the leader of one of their most remote cells of bandits. [PAWN_possessive] dog Rest never left [PAWN_possessive] side. -->
     <desc>随着在犯罪集团内部的阶级不断提升，[PAWN_nameDef]成为了这个组织最偏远区域的头目。一只名叫“瑞斯特”的狗始终陪伴在[PAWN_objective]身边。</desc>
   </BanditLeader74>
   
@@ -555,16 +550,16 @@
     <title>被流放的士兵</title>
     <!-- EN: outlaw -->
     <titleShort>逃犯</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] became the most physically intimidating of the slaves, spending his little free time obsessively sculpting his body. His efforts eventually paid off when the lord offered him a job as a personal bodyguard.\n\nLater, when he plotted to use his position to kill the lord and free the slaves, he was discovered and barely escaped with his life. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] became the most physically intimidating of the slaves, spending [PAWN_possessive] little free time obsessively sculpting [PAWN_possessive] body. [PAWN_possessive] efforts eventually paid off when the lord offered [PAWN_objective] a job as a personal bodyguard.\n\nLater, when [PAWN_pronoun] plotted to use [PAWN_possessive] position to kill the lord and free the slaves, [PAWN_pronoun] was discovered and barely escaped with [PAWN_possessive] life. -->
     <desc>通过在仅有的自由时间进行极限锻炼，[PAWN_nameDef]拥有奴隶中最恐怖的体格。[PAWN_pronoun]的努力终于得到回报，领主任命[PAWN_pronoun]为贴身护卫。\n\n后来，[PAWN_pronoun]策划利用自己的地位暗杀领主并释放奴隶，但不幸事情败露，[PAWN_nameDef]侥幸逃离，保住了性命。</desc>
   </BanishedSoldier85>
   
   <Bartender62>
-   <!-- EN: bartender -->
+    <!-- EN: bartender -->
     <title>太空站的调酒师</title>
     <!-- EN: barkeep -->
     <titleShort>酒保</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked as a bartender on a seedy space station. The job entailed one part drink mixing, one part diplomacy, and one part head-bashing. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked as a bartender in a seedy establishment. The job was one part drink-mixing, one part diplomacy, and one part head-bashing. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个老旧太空站上当酒保。这份工作需要一份调酒，一份社交，以及一份头部猛击。</desc>
   </Bartender62>
   
@@ -573,12 +568,12 @@
     <title>退役的战场机械师</title>
     <!-- EN: technician -->
     <titleShort>机械师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] had received firearms training, but [PAWN_possessive] work was focused on technical adaption and manipulation of combat mechanoids on the battlefield.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] developed PTSD after narrowly escaping a primitive firebomb attack in a wheat field. The army medically discharged him from service. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] had received firearms training, but [PAWN_possessive] work was focused on technical adaptation and manipulation of combat mechanoids on the battlefield.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] developed PTSD after narrowly escaping a primitive firebomb attack in a wheat field. The army medically discharged [PAWN_objective] from service. -->
     <desc>虽然[PAWN_nameDef]接受了枪械训练, 但[PAWN_pronoun]在战场上的主要工作是对作战用机器人进行调整和操作。\n\n在一次麦田内作战中，[PAWN_pronoun]在小范围内躲过原始的燃烧炸弹袭击后，患上了创伤后应激障碍，于是军队让[PAWN_objective]退役。</desc>
   </BattlefieldTech52>
   
   <BattleMechanic27>
-     <!-- EN: battle mechanic -->
+    <!-- EN: battle mechanic -->
     <title>战争机械工</title>
     <!-- EN: mechanic -->
     <titleShort>机械工</titleShort>
@@ -596,7 +591,7 @@
   </Beastmaster67>
   
   <BeastSlayer67>
-   <!-- EN: beast slayer -->
+    <!-- EN: beast slayer -->
     <title>野兽杀手</title>
     <!-- EN: slayer -->
     <titleShort>屠杀者</titleShort>
@@ -605,7 +600,7 @@
   </BeastSlayer67>
   
   <BehaviourResearch74>
-   <!-- EN: behaviour research -->
+    <!-- EN: behaviour research -->
     <title>行为研究学家</title>
     <!-- EN: scientist -->
     <titleShort>科学家</titleShort>
@@ -623,11 +618,11 @@
   </BiosphereManager95>
   
   <BlackjackPlayer76>
-     <!-- EN: blackjack player -->
+    <!-- EN: blackjack player -->
     <title>被教训的赌徒</title>
     <!-- EN: gambler -->
     <titleShort>赌徒</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: The only useful skill [PAWN_nameDef] learned from his tough military school was card counting. He amassed many enemies by cheating at casinos, becoming ever more edgy and violent as the threat of retaliation grew.\n\nWhen he was finally caught, they burned half his skin off. He'll never be able to face fire or violence again. -->
+    <!-- EN: The only useful skill [PAWN_nameDef] learned from [PAWN_possessive] tough military school was card-counting. [PAWN_pronoun] amassed many enemies by cheating at casinos, becoming ever more edgy and violent as the threat of retaliation grew.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was finally caught, they burned half [PAWN_possessive] skin off. [PAWN_pronoun] could never face fire or violence again. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在军校学到唯一有用的技能就是算牌，这成为[PAWN_pronoun]的生财之道。在一次次赌场大胜后，[PAWN_pronoun]的招数被发现，树立了许多敌人。\n\n终于有一次，[PAWN_pronoun]算牌出千被逮到。作为教训，[PAWN_pronoun]全身一半的皮肤都被烧掉。刻骨铭心的疼痛与恐惧使[PAWN_pronoun]永远无法面对火灾或是暴力。</desc>
   </BlackjackPlayer76>
   
@@ -650,23 +645,23 @@
   </Blacksmith72>
   
   <BlacksmithShooter21>
- <!-- EN: blacksmith shooter -->
+    <!-- EN: blacksmith shooter -->
     <title>铁匠枪手</title>
     <!-- EN: gunsmith -->
     <titleShort>枪匠</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: As a young blacksmith, [PAWN_nameDef]'s family shop was raided by the police. [PAWN_pronoun] shot two officers before they knocked him out and arrested him.\n\nSentenced to life in prison, [PAWN_nameDef] learned about traveling and raiding from other criminals. -->
+    <!-- EN: As a young blacksmith, [PAWN_nameDef]'s family shop was raided by the police. [PAWN_pronoun] shot two officers before they knocked [PAWN_objective] out and arrested him.\n\nSentenced to life in prison, [PAWN_nameDef] learned about traveling and raiding from other criminals. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个年轻的铁匠，懂得铸造枪支。一天，[PAWN_possessive]家庭商店遭到警察的突击搜查。情急之下，[PAWN_pronoun]枪杀了两名警察，然后被逮捕。\n[PAWN_nameDef]被判处终身监禁。在监狱里，[PAWN_pronoun]了解到其他犯罪的经历以及所犯下的罪行。</desc>
   </BlacksmithShooter21>
   
   <BlacksmithsSon73>
-   <!-- EN: blacksmith's son -->
+    <!-- EN: blacksmith's son -->
     <title>铁匠之子</title>
     <!-- EN: blacksmith -->
     <titleShort>小铁匠</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s father owned the blacksmith shop in an run-down old city district. [PAWN_nameDef] would help his father whenever he could.\n\nLater, [PAWN_possessive] father took him as a blacksmith's apprentice and raised him as a man. [PAWN_nameDef] also to on shooting as a hobby. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s father owned the blacksmith shop in an run-down old city district. [PAWN_nameDef] would help [PAWN_possessive] father whenever [PAWN_pronoun] could.\n\nLater, [PAWN_possessive] father took [PAWN_objective] as a blacksmith's apprentice and raised [PAWN_objective] as a man. [PAWN_nameDef] also took on shooting as a hobby. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就帮父亲打铁。\n\n他们是最后一批还掌握着传统打铁技巧的人。\n\n有时[PAWN_nameDef]也会使用自己打造的武器。</desc>
   </BlacksmithsSon73>
-
+  
   <BlessedChild46>
     <!-- EN: blessed child -->
     <title>神圣的孩子</title>
@@ -677,16 +672,16 @@
   </BlessedChild46>
   
   <BloodgameSurvivor6>
- <!-- EN: bloodgame survivor -->
+    <!-- EN: bloodgame survivor -->
     <title>鲜血游戏幸存者</title>
     <!-- EN: bloodgamer -->
     <titleShort>生还者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was sold to the Corestars Entertainment Company and used as meat in one of the company's system-wide broadcast shows.\n \n[PAWN_possessive] manipulative nature made [PAWN_objective] quite a nightmare, even to the audience. He was kicked out and exiled to a planet full of deadly animals, criminals and armed camera-drones. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was sold to the Corestars Entertainment Company and used as meat in one of the company's system-wide broadcast shows.\n \n[PAWN_possessive] manipulative nature made [PAWN_objective] quite a nightmare, even to the audience. [PAWN_pronoun] was kicked out and exiled to a planet full of deadly animals, criminals and armed camera-drones. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]被卖给核心星系娱乐公司，作为该公司全系统广播的节目主菜之一。\n\n然而[PAWN_pronoun]竟然生还，[PAWN_possessive]表演给自己和观众都带来噩梦一般的体验。后来[PAWN_pronoun]被解雇，并被流放到一个充满了致命动物、罪犯和武装无人机的星球。</desc>
   </BloodgameSurvivor6>
   
   <BloodyDentist9>
-     <!-- EN: bloody dentist -->
+    <!-- EN: bloody dentist -->
     <title>嗜血的牙医</title>
     <!-- EN: dentist -->
     <titleShort>牙医</titleShort>
@@ -695,11 +690,11 @@
   </BloodyDentist9>
   
   <BloodyWanderer28>
-      <!-- EN: bloody wanderer -->
+    <!-- EN: bloody wanderer -->
     <title>嗜血的流浪汉</title>
     <!-- EN: wanderer -->
     <titleShort>流浪汉</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a wanderer, traveling from town to town, taking odd jobs and stealing to live.\n\nOne day, he had a mental break and went on a long rampage, destroying several towns and killing many. [PAWN_pronoun] eventually calmed, but [PAWN_possessive] bloodlust never left [PAWN_objective]. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a wanderer, traveling from town to town, taking odd jobs and stealing to live.\n\nOne day, [PAWN_pronoun] had a mental break and went on a long rampage, destroying several towns and killing many. [PAWN_pronoun] eventually calmed, but [PAWN_possessive] bloodlust never left [PAWN_objective]. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾经是一名流浪汉，在城镇之间流窜，靠打工和偷东西来维持生计。\n\n有一天，他发疯了并开始了一场暴力的屠杀，摧毁了很多人的家园也杀死了许多人。[PAWN_pronoun]最终平复了下来，但[PAWN_possessive]嗜血似乎不会终止。</desc>
   </BloodyWanderer28>
   
@@ -708,12 +703,12 @@
     <title>冷酷的保镖</title>
     <!-- EN: bodyguard -->
     <titleShort>保镖</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] found work on a midworld, protecting whoever paid [PAWN_objective] from harm. [PAWN_pronoun] gained proficiency in many different combat forms, and was known for [PAWN_possessive] ruthlessness against those who crossed [PAWN_objective]. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] protected whoever paid [PAWN_objective]. [PAWN_pronoun] gained proficiency in many different combat forms, and was known for [PAWN_possessive] ruthlessness against those who crossed [PAWN_objective]. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一颗中寰世界星球上找到一份工作，保护任何给[PAWN_objective]付钱的人免受伤害。[PAWN_pronoun]精通各种不同的战斗方式，并且以对那些试图越过[PAWN_possessive]防线的人冷酷无情而出名。</desc>
   </Bodyguard58>
   
   <BodyguardTrainee54>
-   <!-- EN: bodyguard trainee -->
+    <!-- EN: bodyguard trainee -->
     <title>见习保镖</title>
     <!-- EN: bodyguard -->
     <titleShort>保镖</titleShort>
@@ -729,7 +724,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Born to a family of fortune hunters, [PAWN_nameDef] always had a passion for ancient history.\n\nThough never a tough or social boy, [PAWN_pronoun] loved to dig through history books as well as dirt piles. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生于一个幸运的家庭，总是对古代历史充满热情。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]从来不是一个善于善于战斗或社交的男孩，[PAWN_pronoun]喜欢的是挖掘历史遗迹和坟墓。</desc>
   </BoneCollector14>
-  <!--NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Bookworm19>
     <!-- EN: bookworm -->
     <title>书虫</title>
@@ -739,22 +734,21 @@
     <desc>相比于与同龄人一起玩耍，,[PAWN_nameDef]更愿意迷失在文学的海洋中。[PAWN_pronoun]教会[PAWN_objective]自己在孩童阶段就开始读从经过的商人那里买来的书。</desc>
   </Bookworm19>
   
- <Bookworm3>
+  <Bookworm3>
     <!-- EN: bookworm -->
     <title>有梦想的书虫</title>
     <!-- EN: bookworm -->
     <titleShort>书虫</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent his youth in the library, reading every book he could about the technical marvels of space travel, the engineering ingenuity of the space-faring pioneers, and the horrible yet fascinating tales of the mechanoid races. He vowed that one day, he would see these things for himself. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent [PAWN_possessive] youth in the library, reading every book [PAWN_pronoun] could about the technical marvels of space travel, the engineering ingenuity of the space-faring pioneers, and the horrible yet fascinating tales of mechanoid wars. [PAWN_pronoun] vowed that one day, [PAWN_pronoun] would see these things for [PAWN_objective]self. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在图书馆度过了[PAWN_possessive]少年时期，阅读了所有[PAWN_pronoun]能读到的关于太空旅行的技术事迹：航天先驱的工程奇迹、机器人种族可怕却迷人的故事……[PAWN_pronoun]发誓要亲眼见识这些书本上的内容。</desc>
   </Bookworm3>
-
   
   <BountyHunter17>
-   <!-- EN: bounty hunter -->
+    <!-- EN: bounty hunter -->
     <title>独行的赏金猎人</title>
     <!-- EN: hunter -->
     <titleShort>赏金猎人</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] is a self-employed bounty hunter. [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] days hunting space pirates and collecting cash bounties. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a self-employed bounty hunter. [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] days hunting space pirates and collecting cash bounties. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个单干的赏金猎人。[PAWN_pronoun]大部分时间都在星系中追捕海盗和兑现悬赏。</desc>
   </BountyHunter17>
   
@@ -777,11 +771,11 @@
   </BountyHunter93>
   
   <BoyScout42>
-  <!-- EN: boy scout -->
+    <!-- EN: boy scout -->
     <title>童子军狙击手</title>
     <!-- EN: scout -->
     <titleShort>童子军</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was in a boy scout troop on a midworld.\n\nHe learned many survival skills including how to thrive in the outdoors and how to tend to basic wounds. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was in a boy scout troop on a midworld.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned many survival skills including how to thrive in the outdoors and how to tend to basic wounds. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾在一个中世界上的童子军狙击手部队中服役。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]学会了许多野外生存技巧, 包括如何包扎伤口。</desc>
   </BoyScout42>
   
@@ -793,7 +787,7 @@
     <!-- EN: War may never change - but the cast of characters does.\n\nBorn on a violent urbworld, [PAWN_nameDef] was trained from a young age to fight the wars of others, and became rather good at it. -->
     <desc>战争可能永远不会改变-但参与战争的人会。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个充满暴力的下层世界，从小就被训练参加战争，并变得相当擅长战斗。</desc>
   </BoySoldier14>
-  <!--NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Brave88>
     <!-- EN: brave -->
     <title>部落勇士</title>
@@ -804,7 +798,7 @@
   </Brave88>
   
   <Brigand68>
-   <!-- EN: brigand -->
+    <!-- EN: brigand -->
     <title>太空强盗</title>
     <!-- EN: brigand -->
     <titleShort>强盗</titleShort>
@@ -826,16 +820,16 @@
     <title>妓院勤杂员</title>
     <!-- EN: gofer -->
     <titleShort>杂役</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born on a steam-powered midworld wracked by a century of economic crises, [PAWN_nameDef] went to work at a young age. Scrounging, shoe-polishing, sewing - he did it all. But [PAWN_pronoun] was most known as a brothel gofer, delivering all manner of aphrodisiacs and chemicals to the girls' rooms. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born on a steam-powered midworld wracked by a century of economic crises, [PAWN_nameDef] went to work at a young age. Scrounging, shoe-polishing, sewing - [PAWN_pronoun] did it all. But [PAWN_pronoun] was most known as a brothel gofer, delivering all manner of aphrodisiacs and chemicals to the girls' rooms. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个蒸汽动力的中寰世界，这里被一个世纪长的经济危机所摧毁。[PAWN_pronoun]年轻的时候做过乞讨，擦鞋和缝纫等工作。但做得最好的就是为妓院提供服务，将各种各样的壮阳药和化妆品送到女孩们的房间。</desc>
   </BrothelGofer84>
   
   <BrutalThief59>
-  <!-- EN: brutal thief -->
+    <!-- EN: brutal thief -->
     <title>残暴的窃贼</title>
     <!-- EN: thief -->
     <titleShort>窃贼</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Growing up in a gang, [PAWN_nameDef] learned the brutality of the streets.\n\nKnowing that showing weakness could be fatal, he closed himself of to others. -->
+    <!-- EN: Growing up in a gang, [PAWN_nameDef] learned the brutality of the streets.\n\nKnowing that showing weakness could be fatal, [PAWN_pronoun] closed [PAWN_objective]self off from others. -->
     <desc>在帮派中长大，[PAWN_nameDef]对街头暴力了如指掌。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]知道暴露弱点是致命的，所以[PAWN_pronoun]从不让别人看透。\n</desc>
   </BrutalThief59>
   
@@ -871,43 +865,43 @@
     <title>堡垒中的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: bunker kid -->
     <titleShort>碉堡小子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Ricardo grew up in an underground shelter, waiting for radioactive fallout to subside. His rich family had gained access to a luxury bunker city, while billions died on the surface.\n\nDetermined to one day seek revenge against the hated enemy, Ricardo spent most of his time practicing shooting in his private training facility. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in an underground shelter, waiting for radioactive fallout to subside. [PAWN_possessive] rich family had gained access to a luxury bunker city, while billions died on the surface.\n\nDetermined to one day seek revenge against the hated enemy, [PAWN_nameDef] spent most of [PAWN_possessive] time practicing shooting in [PAWN_possessive] private training facility. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个地下避难所中长大，在那里等待放射性尘埃消散。数十亿人因此而死于地表，而[PAWN_possessive]家庭因为足够富有，有资格来到豪华的地下堡垒都市定居。\n\n为了有朝一日向敌人复仇，[PAWN_nameDef]将大部分时间花在私人训练场，在那里练习射击。</desc>
   </BunkerKid41>
   
   <BushSniper94>
-   <!-- EN: bush sniper -->
+    <!-- EN: bush sniper -->
     <title>丛林狙击手</title>
     <!-- EN: sniper -->
     <titleShort>狙击手</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s peaceful life was cut short when [PAWN_possessive] country was brutally invaded.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] was drafted into service as soon as [PAWN_pronoun] was of legal age, and quickly showed an aptitude for rifles. [PAWN_pronoun] spent months living in the forests picking off soldiers who dared cross the border. -->
     <desc>在国家惨遭入侵后，[PAWN_nameDef]的和平生活走到了尽头。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]刚刚到达法定年龄就被征召入伍，并很快展露出在使用步枪上的天赋。[PAWN_pronoun]在丛林中生活了数月，那些胆敢越过边界的敌军士兵的生命都被[PAWN_objective]无情地收割。</desc>
-   </BushSniper94>
+  </BushSniper94>
   
   <BusinessGangster58>
-     <!-- EN: business gangster -->
+    <!-- EN: business gangster -->
     <title>有背景的商业大鳄</title>
     <!-- EN: gangster -->
     <titleShort>黑帮大佬</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Staying one step ahead of the law, [PAWN_nameDef] became a legitimate businessman and silenced anyone who dared say otherwise. As proprietor of brothels, speakeasies and eateries, [PAWN_nameDef]'s good fortune continued while his competition suffered a series of unfortunate and unexplained accidents. -->
+    <!-- EN: Staying one step ahead of the law, [PAWN_nameDef] became a legitimate businessman and silenced anyone who dared say otherwise. As proprietor of brothels, speakeasies and eateries, [PAWN_nameDef]'s good fortune continued while [PAWN_possessive] competition suffered a series of unfortunate and unexplained accidents. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]游走在法律边缘。表面上[PAWN_pronoun]是一名合法商人，以经营妓院、酒吧和餐厅为主，而背私下没有人敢对[PAWN_possessive]要求说不。那些拒绝[PAWN_nameDef]的人通常会遭遇到一系列意外和不明事故。</desc>
   </BusinessGangster58>
   
   <Cadet96>
-      <!-- EN: cadet -->
+    <!-- EN: cadet -->
     <title>憎恶暴力的见习警官</title>
     <!-- EN: cadet -->
     <titleShort>见习警官</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born on the planet New China, [PAWN_nameDef]'s father was a police chief and kept extremely strict watch over his son.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] had to do military-style drill exercises every day and keep his room spotlessly clean, always ready for inspection. [PAWN_pronoun] came to abhor violence. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born on the planet New China, [PAWN_nameDef]'s father was a police chief and kept extremely strict watch over [PAWN_possessive] son.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] had to do military-style drill exercises every day and keep [PAWN_possessive] room spotlessly clean, always ready for inspection. [PAWN_pronoun] came to abhor violence. -->
     <desc>在“新中国”行星上出生的[PAWN_nameDef]从小被身为警察局长的父亲严格要求。[PAWN_pronoun]每天都要进行军事演习训练，把房间打扫得一尘不染，时刻准备接受检查。受此影响，[PAWN_nameDef]逐渐开始憎恶暴力行为。</desc>
   </Cadet96>
   
   <CaravanChild29>
-  <!-- EN: caravan child -->
+    <!-- EN: caravan child -->
     <title>出生在商船上的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: child -->
     <titleShort>变性儿童</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a urbworld merchant ship to an entrepreneurial mother and an absent father. Born male, she disliked boy stuff, and got into her mother’s things all the time.\n\nEventually, she traveled with her mother to a glitterworld and spent her savings on a body she was happy with. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a urbworld merchant ship to an entrepreneurial mother and an absent father. Born male, [PAWN_pronoun] disliked boy stuff, and got into [PAWN_possessive] mother’s things all the time.\n\nEventually, [PAWN_pronoun] traveled with [PAWN_possessive] mother to a glitterworld and spent [PAWN_possessive] savings on a body [PAWN_pronoun] was happy with. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个下层世界的商船上出生，父亲失踪，而母亲忙于创业。身为男孩，[PAWN_pronoun]不喜欢男孩子的东西，整天穿母亲的衣服，使用母亲的化妆品。最终，[PAWN_pronoun]和母亲来到一个闪耀世界星球，花掉了所有积蓄改造身体，实现了变成女性的心愿。</desc>
   </CaravanChild29>
   
@@ -918,10 +912,10 @@
     <titleShort>队长</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the leader of a caravan. [PAWN_pronoun] was responsible for the safety of [PAWN_possessive] caravan and was the head negotiator in countless trade deals.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] and [PAWN_possessive] people prospered, but their wealth made them a target for brigands. They often had to take up arms to fend off bandits and highwaymen. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一位远行队的首领。[PAWN_pronoun]要负责远行队的安全，同时也是各种交易的首席谈判代表。\n\n通过远行贸易，[PAWN_pronoun]和[PAWN_possessive]人发了大财。但他们经常要和因财富招来的强盗和混混作斗争。</desc>
- </Caravaneer53>
+  </Caravaneer53>
   
   <CaravanTraveler6>
-     <!-- EN: caravan traveler -->
+    <!-- EN: caravan traveler -->
     <title>旅行商人</title>
     <!-- EN: traveler -->
     <titleShort>行商</titleShort>
@@ -937,7 +931,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was brought up by cargo hands on a long-haul ore transport ship. [PAWN_pronoun] perfected [PAWN_possessive] skills at trading and manipulation of people while running weapons between systems. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一艘长途矿物运输船上长大，积累并掌握了能够同时与人交易与和操作多个武器系统的能力。</desc>
   </CargoPilot58>
-  <!--NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Carver1>
     <!-- EN: carver -->
     <title>部落雕塑家</title>
@@ -948,15 +942,15 @@
   </Carver1>
   
   <CasketBuilder52>
-  <!-- EN: casket builder -->
+    <!-- EN: casket builder -->
     <title>休眠舱建造师</title>
     <!-- EN: builder -->
     <titleShort>建造师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was fascinated with cryosleep, and spent [PAWN_possessive] life learning about the mysterious technology.\n\nWorking as an assembler on a midworld, [PAWN_nameDef] built an experimental prototype casket from discarded parts. Unfortunately, while [PAWN_pronoun] was searching for the final component, [PAWN_possessive] home was leveled by a bomb. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was fascinated with cryptosleep, and spent [PAWN_possessive] life learning about the mysterious technology.\n\nWorking as an assembler on a midworld, [PAWN_nameDef] built an experimental prototype casket from discarded parts. Unfortunately, while [PAWN_pronoun] was searching for the final component, [PAWN_possessive] home was leveled by a bomb. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对低温休眠十分迷恋，毕生都在学习机械与生命支持。\n\n作为一名中寰世界的汇编工程师，[PAWN_nameDef]利用废弃零件建造了一个实验性的原型仓。不幸的是，当[PAWN_pronoun]在寻找最后的组件时，[PAWN_possessive]家被炸弹夷为平地。</desc>
   </CasketBuilder52>
   
- <Castaway57>
+  <Castaway57>
     <!-- EN: castaway -->
     <title>荒野星球幸存者</title>
     <!-- EN: castaway -->
@@ -966,20 +960,20 @@
   </Castaway57>
   
   <Castaway81>
-  <!-- EN: castaway -->
+    <!-- EN: castaway -->
     <title>空难幸存者</title>
     <!-- EN: castaway -->
     <titleShort>幸存者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a passenger on a routine interstellar transit. When his ship was destroyed, he lived as a castaway on an uninhabited planet for several years. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a passenger on a routine interstellar transit. When [PAWN_possessive] ship was destroyed, [PAWN_pronoun] lived as a castaway on an uninhabited planet for several years. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一艘星际运输飞船上的乘客。飞船被毁后，[PAWN_nameDef]作为幸存者在一个无人居住的星球上住了几年。</desc>
   </Castaway81>
   
   <CatHerder4>
-   <!-- EN: cat herder -->
+    <!-- EN: cat herder -->
     <title>养猫人</title>
     <!-- EN: herder -->
     <titleShort>饲养员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] helped out in his father's cat breeding business, socializing, herding, and feeding hundreds of cats.\n\nWhen he refused to clean up after the cats, [PAWN_pronoun] was transferred to the breeding science division. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] helped out in [PAWN_possessive] father's cat breeding business, socializing, herding, and feeding hundreds of cats.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] refused to clean up after the cats, [PAWN_pronoun] was transferred to the breeding science division. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]帮助[PAWN_possessive]父亲经营猫咪养殖贩售，主要负责陪猫玩，遛猫和准备数百只猫咪的口粮。\n\n最后，[PAWN_pronoun]拒绝跟在这些猫屁股后面清理。于是[PAWN_pronoun]被调到科学育种部。</desc>
   </CatHerder4>
   
@@ -1001,7 +995,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在山脉深处一个庞大且复杂的洞穴网络中长大。[PAWN_pronoun]帮助大人们一起维护并改善这些深邃的洞穴网。</desc>
   </CaveChild30>
   
- <CaveworldIlluminator23>
+  <CaveworldIlluminator23>
     <!-- EN: caveworld illuminator -->
     <title>洞穴星球启发者</title>
     <!-- EN: illuminator -->
@@ -1047,7 +1041,7 @@
   </Chef52>
   
   <Chemist73>
-  <!-- EN: chemist -->
+    <!-- EN: chemist -->
     <title>化学研究家</title>
     <!-- EN: chemist -->
     <titleShort>化学家</titleShort>
@@ -1056,24 +1050,24 @@
   </Chemist73>
   
   <Chemist78>
-     <!-- EN: Chemist -->
+    <!-- EN: chemist -->
     <title>被驱逐的化学家</title>
-    <!-- EN: Chemist -->
+    <!-- EN: chemist -->
     <titleShort>化学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a renowned chemist on a thriving midworld.\n\nAfter performing inhumane experiments that turned men into beasts, [PAWN_pronoun] was arrested and banished to a far-off rim world. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a renowned chemist on a thriving midworld.\n\nAfter performing inhumane experiments that turned men into beasts, [PAWN_pronoun] was arrested and banished to a far-off rimworld. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一位在蓬勃发展的中寰世界星球享有盛誉的化学家。\n\n在进行了将人变为野兽的非人道实验后，[PAWN_pronoun]被逮捕并被驱逐到遥远的边缘世界。</desc>
   </Chemist78>
   
   <ChessMaster67>
-   <!-- EN: chess master -->
+    <!-- EN: chess master -->
     <title>狡猾的象棋大师</title>
     <!-- EN: chesshead -->
     <titleShort>象棋大师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved to play chess. [PAWN_pronoun] even earned the nickname Bishop for some of [PAWN_possessive] craftier moves. \n\n[PAWN_pronoun] never got into trouble - mostly because he was good at not getting caught. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved to play chess. [PAWN_pronoun] even earned the nickname [PAWN_nameDef] for some of [PAWN_possessive] craftier moves.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] never got into trouble - mostly because [PAWN_pronoun] was good at not getting caught. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]喜欢玩星际象棋。因为一些狡猾的举动,[PAWN_pronoun]甚至赢得了一个绰号"主教"。[PAWN_pronoun]从来没有遇到麻烦─主要是因为[PAWN_pronoun]善于掩饰自己的动作。</desc>
   </ChessMaster67>
-  <!-- PART 2 BY LEAF-->
-   <ChiefEngineer62>
+  
+  <ChiefEngineer62>
     <!-- EN: chief engineer -->
     <title>首席工程师</title>
     <!-- EN: engineer -->
@@ -1186,7 +1180,7 @@
     <title>马戏团表演者</title>
     <!-- EN: performer -->
     <titleShort>魔术师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Growing up in the circus, [PAWN_nameDef] learned a lot of interesting things. More interesting then the balls he juggled were the pockets he picked between shows.\n\nA mistake with some firesticks made him develop a deathly fear of fire. -->
+    <!-- EN: Growing up in the circus, [PAWN_nameDef] learned a lot of interesting things. More interesting then the balls [PAWN_pronoun] juggled were the pockets [PAWN_pronoun] picked between shows.\n\nA mistake with some firesticks made [PAWN_objective] develop a deathly fear of fire. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在马戏团中长大，[PAWN_pronoun]学到很多有趣的戏法，比如把球丢出，再从口袋中拿出来。一个丢掷火焰棒的表演失误让[PAWN_pronoun]对火十分恐惧。</desc>
   </CircusPerformer93>
   
@@ -1306,7 +1300,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a settler on a new colony world.\n\nSuch a life requires a jack-of-all trades at basic hands-on tasks. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名新殖民地的开拓者。\n\n开荒的生活需要一个基础工作方面的多面手。</desc>
   </ColonySettler53>
-
+  
   <ComaChild57>
     <!-- EN: coma child -->
     <title>昏迷的孩童</title>
@@ -1315,7 +1309,7 @@
     <!-- EN: A childhood accident put [PAWN_nameDef] into a coma. [PAWN_pronoun] didn’t wake up until [PAWN_pronoun] was in [PAWN_possessive] late teens. [PAWN_possessive] body never recovered from the years of inactivity, but people tend to take pity on [PAWN_objective] when they hear [PAWN_possessive] story. -->
     <desc>儿时的一次事故让[PAWN_nameDef]长期昏迷，十多岁时才醒来。[PAWN_possessive]身体没能从多年缺乏运动的虚弱状态中恢复，但听过[PAWN_possessive]悲惨故事，人们基本都会同情[PAWN_objective]。</desc>
   </ComaChild57>
-
+  
   <CombatEngineer30>
     <!-- EN: combat engineer -->
     <title>战斗工程师</title>
@@ -1324,7 +1318,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was recruited by the military as an engineer and set to work improving the navy's space shuttles. The harsh training taught [PAWN_objective] how to build and repair military vehicles and structures.\n\nOne mission left [PAWN_nameDef] with pyrophobia and a strong desire to avoid plants. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]成为一名战斗工程师。[PAWN_pronoun]建造基地、修复各种枪械、维修各种军用车辆─当[PAWN_pronoun]不需要对任何敌人射击的时候。</desc>
   </CombatEngineer30>
-
+  
   <CombatEngineer4>
     <!-- EN: combat engineer -->
     <title>战斗工兵</title>
@@ -1423,7 +1417,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] never created anything in [PAWN_possessive] life. [PAWN_pronoun] did, however, prove to be a natural at getting others to give [PAWN_objective] what they had created. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]一生中从来不曾创造任何东西，却能很自然地取得别人所创造的东西。</desc>
   </ConArtist80>
-
+  
   <ConceptualArtist39>
     <!-- EN: conceptual artist -->
     <title>概念派艺术家</title>
@@ -1594,7 +1588,7 @@
     <!-- EN: By day, [PAWN_nameDef] was an office worker on a midworld. At night, [PAWN_pronoun] designed and built elaborate monster costumes for science fiction conventions.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned a great deal about sewing. Unfortunately this came at the cost of being able to cook anything more complex than an instant meal. -->
     <desc>白天，[PAWN_nameDef]是一个中寰世界的上班族。晚上，[PAWN_pronoun]则为科幻小说集会设计并制作精巧的怪物服饰。\n\n这使[PAWN_pronoun]学到许多关于缝纫的知识。遗憾的是，这些以牺牲[PAWN_possessive]烹饪技能为代价，[PAWN_pronoun]无法烹制任何比速食餐更复杂的料理。</desc>
   </CostumeCrafter41>
-
+  
   <Counselor26>
     <!-- EN: counselor -->
     <title>心理咨询师</title>
@@ -1603,7 +1597,7 @@
     <!-- EN: A terrifying trauma when [PAWN_nameDef] was a young adult caused [PAWN_objective] to develop a serious eating disorder. With counseling [PAWN_pronoun] learned to have a healthier relationship with food, and decided to put [PAWN_possessive] new skills to use helping others overcome their emotional problems. -->
     <desc>年轻时一次可怕的伤病使[PAWN_nameDef]患上了严重的厌食症。经过心理咨询，[PAWN_pronoun]恢复了健康的饮食行为，并决定用[PAWN_possessive]新技能帮助其他人克服心理问题。</desc>
   </Counselor26>
-
+  
   <CountryChild95>
     <!-- EN: country child -->
     <title>农村儿童</title>
@@ -1706,7 +1700,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born into a powerful cult which shunned advanced technology and believed that all illness could be cured by cleansing the soul through sacred art.\n\nAfter [PAWN_possessive] first glimpse of the outside world, [PAWN_pronoun] decided to run away. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个强大的邪教集团之中，他们完全否定先进科技，并相信所有疾病可以通过用神圣艺术净化灵魂的方式治愈。\n\n在第一次见识过外面的世界后，[PAWN_pronoun]决定逃离。</desc>
   </CultChild3>
-
+  
   <DataDecoder39>
     <!-- EN: data decoder -->
     <title>数据解码员</title>
@@ -1895,7 +1889,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Born on an urbworld to the ruler of three megacities, [PAWN_nameDef]’s prospects looked good - until a violent insurrection overthrew [PAWN_possessive] family. Exile introduced [PAWN_nameDef] to hard work and combat, but some high-born squeamishness remains. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在都市行星三座大型城市的统治者家族，[PAWN_nameDef]原本有不错的前途，直到一次武装革命推翻了[PAWN_possessive]家族。在流亡的过程中，[PAWN_pronoun]努力工作和战斗，但仍有着贵族的高傲。</desc>
   </DisplacedNoble83>
-
+  
   <DoomsdayPariah24>
     <!-- EN: doomsday pariah -->
     <title>末日贱民</title>
@@ -1931,7 +1925,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an expressive child. [PAWN_pronoun] sang often, and made friends very easily, be they young or old, male or female.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] hated fighting, but when made angry, [PAWN_pronoun] could be dangerous. [PAWN_possessive] temper was quick. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 是个富有表现力的小孩。[PAWN_pronoun]经常唱歌, 因此有各种各样的朋友。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]讨厌打架, 但生气的时候还是很危险。</desc>
   </Dreamer79>
-
+  
   <Drifter67>
     <!-- EN: drifter -->
     <title>流浪的小说家</title>
@@ -1994,31 +1988,31 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an incredibly empathetic child, so much that [PAWN_pronoun] was totally overwhelmed by simple social interactions. Once, [PAWN_pronoun] stepped on a bug and felt so guilty [PAWN_pronoun] cried for an hour.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] did try to use a gun one time, but it went very poorly, as the loud noise made [PAWN_objective] flinch uncontrollably. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个非常善解人意的孩子，以至于[PAWN_pronoun]的时间都被简单的社交活动所占用。有一次,[PAWN_pronoun]因为踩到一直小虫而感到非常内疚，哭了一个小时。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]曾试着用过一次枪，但结果很糟糕。巨大的枪声让[PAWN_pronoun]不由自主地退缩。</desc>
   </Empath47>
-  <!-- PART 3-->
-   <EnergeticPopIdol61>
+  
+  <EnergeticPopIdol61>
     <!-- EN: energetic pop idol -->
     <title>富有活力的偶像</title>
     <!-- EN: pop idol -->
     <titleShort>少女偶像</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Priscilla grew up on a glitterworld, training in rapier arts and singing. She spent several years as an energetic teen pop idol.\n\nHowever, she decided that the music and modeling industries were not paying her enough attention, so she left. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on a glitterworld, training in rapier arts and singing. [PAWN_pronoun] spent several years as an energetic teen pop idol.\n\nHowever, [PAWN_pronoun] decided that the music and modeling industries were not paying [PAWN_objective] enough attention, so [PAWN_pronoun] left. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在闪耀世界长大, 从小学习歌舞并接受严格的训练，[PAWN_pronoun]花了几年时间成为富有活力的少女偶像\n\n然而,[PAWN_pronoun]觉得音乐和模特行业赚的钱太少,于是不干了。</desc>
   </EnergeticPopIdol61>
   
   <EnergyResearcher89>
-       <!-- EN: energy researcher -->
+    <!-- EN: energy researcher -->
     <title>能源研究员</title>
     <!-- EN: researcher -->
     <titleShort>研究员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was working on an idea for rapid communication over long distances. [PAWN_pronoun] made an error which destroyed [PAWN_possessive] lab and most of the city. [PAWN_pronoun] fled the planet to escape the authorities. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was working on an idea for rapid communication over long distances. [PAWN_pronoun] made an error which destroyed [PAWN_possessive] lab and several nearby buildings. [PAWN_pronoun] fled the planet to escape the authorities. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]正在研究长距离能源传递技术，实验过程中的失误摧毁了[PAWN_possessive]实验室和大部分城市。为了躲过政府当局的追捕，[PAWN_pronoun]逃离了母星。</desc>
   </EnergyResearcher89>
   
   <Engineer40>
-   <!-- EN: engineer -->
+    <!-- EN: engineer -->
     <title>修理工程师</title>
     <!-- EN: engineer -->
     <titleShort>工程师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] found a job as a tinkering engineer on the trading hub planet Irithir. Tough local traders forced him to learn negotiation skills, and he made good profits selling refurbished weapons and tools. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] found a job as a tinkering engineer on the trading hub planet Irithir. Tough local traders forced [PAWN_objective] to learn negotiation skills, and [PAWN_pronoun] made good profits selling refurbished weapons and tools. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在贸易行星伊瑞瑟的交易中心找到一份修补的工作，通过和奸诈的当地贸易商交易，[PAWN_pronoun]学到了谈判技巧。销售翻新的武器和工具让[PAWN_pronoun]获利不少。</desc>
   </Engineer40>
   
@@ -2027,30 +2021,30 @@
     <title>空军工程师</title>
     <!-- EN: pilot -->
     <titleShort>飞行员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: After his province was besieged by one of its neighbors, [PAWN_nameDef] volunteered for a generic modification program that created pilots for the very fighter craft that he had helped develop. The modifications allowed him to pilot the ship, but also made him less able to focus on the people around him.\n\nBy this time, people were calling him "Squirrel." -->
+    <!-- EN: After [PAWN_possessive] province was besieged by one of its neighbors, [PAWN_nameDef] volunteered for a generic modification program that created pilots for the very fighter craft that [PAWN_pronoun] had helped develop. The modifications allowed [PAWN_objective] to pilot the ship, but also made [PAWN_objective] less able to focus on the people around him.\n\nBy this time, people were calling [PAWN_objective] "Squirrel." -->
     <desc>在所属区域被邻敌围困之后，[PAWN_nameDef]主动提出参加通用改进计划——这项计划为[PAWN_pronoun]主持开发的战机培养飞行员。参加计划使[PAWN_pronoun]可以驾驶自己开发的飞船，但也使[PAWN_pronoun]无法专注于周围的人。\n\n在那时候，人们称呼[PAWN_pronoun]"松鼠"。</desc>
   </EngineeredPilot75>
   
   <EnvoyOfTheStars19>
-   <!-- EN: envoy of the stars -->
+    <!-- EN: envoy of the stars -->
     <title>星际使者</title>
     <!-- EN: envoy -->
     <titleShort>大使</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] entered the diplomatic corps. Honor and tradition were the values he took with him on every mission.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] prestigious position distanced him from backbreaking manual labor, allowing [PAWN_objective] to focus on his wordsmithing abilities. He left the blacksmithing to others. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] entered the diplomatic corps. Honor and tradition were the values [PAWN_pronoun] took with [PAWN_objective] on every mission.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] prestigious position distanced [PAWN_objective] from backbreaking manual labor, allowing [PAWN_objective] to focus on [PAWN_possessive] wordsmithing abilities. [PAWN_pronoun] left the blacksmithing to others. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]加入外交大使团，每一次任务都严守荣誉和传统。\n\n享有盛誉的身份使[PAWN_objective]远离累人的体力劳动，让[PAWN_objective]可以专注于文案工作。[PAWN_pronoun]将铁匠的工作留交给了别人。</desc>
   </EnvoyOfTheStars19>
   
   <EscapedConvict90>
-     <!-- EN: escaped convict -->
+    <!-- EN: escaped convict -->
     <title>成功越狱的罪犯</title>
     <!-- EN: escapee -->
     <titleShort>逃犯</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] denies involvement in the crimes that brought about [PAWN_possessive] incarceration in a brutal penal colony. [PAWN_pronoun] escaped by tunnelling beneath the perimeter using modified cutlery. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] denies involvement in the crimes that brought about [PAWN_possessive] incarceration in a brutal penal colony. [PAWN_pronoun] escaped by tunneling beneath the perimeter using modified cutlery. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]否认指控，但[PAWN_pronoun]仍被送至一处管理严酷的罪犯流放地。[PAWN_pronoun]利用改造过的餐具在围墙下挖了一条隧道逃脱。</desc>
   </EscapedConvict90>
   
   <Evangelist39>
-   <!-- EN: evangelist -->
+    <!-- EN: evangelist -->
     <title>福音传教士</title>
     <!-- EN: evangelist -->
     <titleShort>传教士</titleShort>
@@ -2059,11 +2053,11 @@
   </Evangelist39>
   
   <ExecutiveOfficer5>
-     <!-- EN: executive officer -->
+    <!-- EN: executive officer -->
     <title>被诬陷的执行官</title>
     <!-- EN: executive -->
     <titleShort>执行官</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an executive officer for a large space trading corporation. After a failed attempt at manipulating his way up the corporate ladder, he was framed for the rape and murder of another executive and her family.\n\nHe was found guilty. However, because of his family's influence, he was exiled instead of put to death. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an executive officer for a large space trading corporation. After a failed attempt at manipulating [PAWN_possessive] way up the corporate ladder, [PAWN_pronoun] was framed for the rape and murder of another executive and [PAWN_possessive] family.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was found guilty. However, because of [PAWN_possessive] family's influence, [PAWN_pronoun] was exiled instead of put to death. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一家大型太空贸易公司的执行官。 在一次企图操纵[PAWN_possessive]升职前景的尝试失败后，[PAWN_pronoun]被诬陷强奸并谋杀了另一位执行官及其家人。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]被判有罪，但由于其家族的影响力，[PAWN_pronoun]最终被流放，而不是被处死。</desc>
   </ExecutiveOfficer5>
   
@@ -2072,7 +2066,7 @@
     <title>被放逐的王子</title>
     <!-- EN: prince -->
     <titleShort>王子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: A member of a royal family, [PAWN_nameDef] was exiled for shaming [PAWN_possessive] family.\n\nLiving in a foreign land, mostly alone, [PAWN_pronoun] spent most of [PAWN_possessive] time making huts and houses to live in. [PAWN_pronoun] found little time in an average day for enjoyment, and lost all his friends and family. -->
+    <!-- EN: A member of a royal family, [PAWN_nameDef] was exiled for shaming [PAWN_possessive] family.\n\nLiving in a foreign land, mostly alone, [PAWN_pronoun] spent most of [PAWN_possessive] time making huts and houses to live in. [PAWN_pronoun] found little time in an average day for enjoyment, and lost all [PAWN_possessive] friends and family. -->
     <desc>作为皇室的成员之一，[PAWN_nameDef]因为羞辱[PAWN_possessive]家人而被放逐。\n\n孤独地生活在一片陌生的土地，[PAWN_pronoun]花了大把的时间来修小房舍与屋子来让自己居住。[PAWN_pronoun]每天只有一点时间来消遣，因为[PAWN_pronoun]失去所有的朋友和家人。</desc>
   </ExiledPrince58>
   
@@ -2081,7 +2075,7 @@
     <title>流放的研究员</title>
     <!-- EN: exile -->
     <titleShort>流放者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s love of robotics was not appreciated in her technophobic empire. The High Cardinal of the system excommunicated her, and she was never allowed to return. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s love of robotics was not appreciated in [PAWN_possessive] technophobic empire. The High Cardinal of the system excommunicated her, and [PAWN_pronoun] was never allowed to return. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对于机器的喜爱使得[PAWN_pronoun]不被[PAWN_pronoun]所属的帝国所接受，一个高度科技恐惧的帝国。最终帝国的高级红衣主教驱逐了[PAWN_pronoun]，并且永远不得返回。</desc>
   </ExiledResearcher44>
   
@@ -2099,7 +2093,7 @@
     <title>熟练的杂工</title>
     <!-- EN: handyman -->
     <titleShort>杂工</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked as a traveling engineer. [PAWN_pronoun] fixed things ranging from a simple communications array to the intricate software harness in his ship's AI meta-core. Nothing is beyond repair for [PAWN_objective]. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked as a traveling engineer. [PAWN_pronoun] fixed things ranging from a simple communications array to the intricate software harness enveloping [PAWN_possessive] ship's AI persona. Nothing is beyond repair for [PAWN_objective]. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]担任星际旅行工程师。 [PAWN_pronoun]把固定的东西从简单的通信数组到复杂的软件线束在[PAWN_possessive]船的AI元核心上。 没有什么是无法修复他。</desc>
   </ExpertHandyman8>
   
@@ -2108,12 +2102,12 @@
     <title>边缘世界勘探者</title>
     <!-- EN: explorer -->
     <titleShort>勘探者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] traveled from planet to planet, gathering samples, stories, and research. He hoped one day to compile a record of every animal, plant, mineral, and machine and device in known space: The Complete Traveler's Guide to the RimWorlds. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] traveled from planet to planet, gathering samples, stories, and research. [PAWN_pronoun] hoped one day to compile a record of every animal, plant, mineral, and machine and device in known space: The Complete Traveler's Guide to the RimWorlds. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在各个星球间旅行，收集标本、故事，以及研究。[PAWN_pronoun]希望有一天能编纂一个收录已知空间所有动植物、矿物、机械设备的《边缘世界旅行完全指南》</desc>
   </Explorer49>
   
   <ExplorerWriter10>
-      <!-- EN: explorer-writer -->
+    <!-- EN: explorer-writer -->
     <title>探险作家</title>
     <!-- EN: explorer -->
     <titleShort>探险家</titleShort>
@@ -2122,7 +2116,7 @@
   </ExplorerWriter10>
   
   <ExplosivesExpert26>
-   <!-- EN: explosives expert -->
+    <!-- EN: explosives expert -->
     <title>爆破专家</title>
     <!-- EN: blaster -->
     <titleShort>爆破工</titleShort>
@@ -2138,7 +2132,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Early in [PAWN_possessive] adulthood, [PAWN_nameDef] found [PAWN_objective]self surrounded by a gaggle of low-lifes. \n\nFor fun, [PAWN_pronoun] gathered them and lead them to a certain death. [PAWN_pronoun] knew then that [PAWN_pronoun] had the talent to realize [PAWN_possessive] ambitions of leadership. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在年轻时发现自己被一群矮小的生命包围着。\n\n为了乐趣，[PAWN_pronoun]将他们聚集起来并带领他们走向死亡。 那时候[PAWN_pronoun]知道自己有领导方面的天赋。</desc>
   </FactionLeader74>
-  <!-- NEW !!!-->
+  
   <FactoryDrone58>
     <!-- EN: factory drone -->
     <title>工厂苦工</title>
@@ -2153,7 +2147,7 @@
     <title>工厂工人</title>
     <!-- EN: worker -->
     <titleShort>工人</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Felix grew up in a large factory city on an industrial world.\n\nSince poverty was rampant and food scarce, he worked for whatever wages he could get. This wasn't an easy life, but Felix never shied away from a hard day's work. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] did menial, unskilled work in an industrial factory. [PAWN_possessive] job also included caring for the mules and horses which transported the goods. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在工厂里长大。\n\n因为贫穷和饥饿, 只要有工资[PAWN_pronoun]就肯干。尽管生活悲惨, [PAWN_nameDef]从不抱怨。</desc>
   </FactoryWorker58>
   
@@ -2171,16 +2165,16 @@
     <title>落入凡间的天才</title>
     <!-- EN: prodigy -->
     <titleShort>天才</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a glitterworld falling into chaos. [PAWN_possessive] father was killed in action.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] struggled for a scholarship at Utmaior Academy and had to prove his right to be there. A child genius, [PAWN_pronoun] was bullied as a charity case and couldn't make friends with the other kids. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a glitterworld falling into chaos. [PAWN_possessive] father was killed in action.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] struggled for a scholarship at Utmaior Academy and had to prove [PAWN_possessive] right to be there. A child genius, [PAWN_pronoun] was bullied as a charity case and couldn't make friends with the other kids. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个正在发生骚乱的闪耀世界，[PAWN_possessive]父亲在暴动中丧生。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]努力争取到尤特玛学院奖学金，并证明[PAWN_nameDef]有资格待在那里。在童年时代，天才的[PAWN_pronoun]曾在慈善机构中饱受欺辱，也没法和其他孩子交朋友。</desc>
   </FallenProdigy40>
   
   <FarmBoy64>
-     <!-- EN: farm boy -->
+    <!-- EN: farm boy -->
     <title>农场的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: farm boy -->
     <titleShort>农场少年</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: John worked on his family's farm, looking after the animals and treating them when they were injured. Preferring hands-on tasks and the outdoors, he avoided softer jobs that might have kept him cooped up inside.\n\nHe enjoyed this lonely work, and tended to stay out of people's way and do his own thing. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked on [PAWN_possessive] family's farm, looking after the animals and treating them when they were injured. Preferring hands-on tasks and the outdoors, [PAWN_pronoun] avoided softer jobs that might have kept [PAWN_objective] cooped up inside.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed this lonely work, and tended to stay out of people's way and do [PAWN_possessive] own thing. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在家中农场工作，照顾和医治受伤的动物们。相比于那些把自己拴在家里的轻松工作，[PAWN_pronoun]更喜欢户外的实践。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]非常享受这份孤独的工作，喜欢远离人群做自己的事。</desc>
   </FarmBoy64>
   
@@ -2189,34 +2183,34 @@
     <title>年轻的农夫</title>
     <!-- EN: farmer -->
     <titleShort>农民</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Benjamin's parents died in a fire when he was seven. He grew up on his uncle's farm, plowing fields and doing manual labor.\n\nHe could not bear answering questions about his parents, so he replaced social contact with hard work. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s parents died in a fire when [PAWN_pronoun] was seven. [PAWN_pronoun] grew up on [PAWN_possessive] uncle's farm, plowing fields and doing manual labor.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] could not bear answering questions about [PAWN_possessive] parents, so [PAWN_pronoun] replaced social contact with hard work. -->
     <desc>在七岁时，父母死于一场火灾之后，[PAWN_nameDef]被叔叔收养，在叔叔的农场中做一些耕种和体力之类的劳动。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]难以承受回答任何有关[PAWN_possessive]父母的问题，所以[PAWN_pronoun]借由繁重的工作来逃避社交活动。</desc>
   </FarmerBoy88>
   
   <FarmersDaughter81>
-      <!-- EN: Farmer's daughter -->
+    <!-- EN: farmer's daughter -->
     <title>农场主的孩子</title>
-    <!-- EN: Farm girl -->
+    <!-- EN: farm girl -->
     <titleShort>农场的孩子</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on [PAWN_possessive] parents' vineyard. [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] youth exploring the land and making friends with various bugs and insects.\n\nHaving heard stories about all the fascinating things out there in the universe, [PAWN_pronoun] always dreamed of venturing out to see it for [PAWN_objective]self. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小生活在父母的葡萄园里。[PAWN_pronoun]的青少年时代在探索这片土地和亲近各种爬虫中度过。\n\n听到宇宙中那些迷人的故事后，[PAWN_pronoun]一直梦想去冒险，亲眼见识一番。</desc>
   </FarmersDaughter81>
   
   <FarmersSon20>
-   <!-- EN: farmer's son -->
+    <!-- EN: farmer's son -->
     <title>农场主的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: farmer -->
     <titleShort>农场主</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Ade spent much of his childhood learning biome farming. In his biome they kept animals to investigate which would cope best in the alien environment.\n\nDue to this, the travel restrictions and oxygen rationing system, he rarely got to meet anyone from outside his family. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent much of [PAWN_possessive] childhood learning biome farming. In [PAWN_possessive] biome they kept animals to investigate which would cope best in the alien environment.\n\nDue to this, the travel restrictions and oxygen rationing system, [PAWN_pronoun] rarely got to meet anyone from outside [PAWN_possessive] family. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的童年花费了很多时间在生态区农业的学习上。在[PAWN_possessive]生态区他们畜养动物来考察哪种在外星环境中最具竞争力。\n\n由于旅行限制和氧气补给系统，[PAWN_pronoun]很难得见到家人以外的人。</desc>
   </FarmersSon20>
   
   <FarmHand2>
-     <!-- EN: farm hand -->
+    <!-- EN: farm hand -->
     <title>农场帮手</title>
     <!-- EN: farm hand -->
     <titleShort>农场帮手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a farm on a smaller colony world.\n\nEverything was taken care of by the few members of the farm, including [PAWN_nameDef]. This helped [PAWN_objective] build independence, spirit, and a well-rounded character. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born on a farm on a rimworld.\n\nEverything was taken care of by the few members of the farm, including [PAWN_nameDef]. This helped [PAWN_objective] build independence, spirit, and a well-rounded character. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef] 生在一个小殖民地的农场里\n\n任何事都要农场上的几个人处理, 包括[PAWN_nameDef]，因此[PAWN_objective]成为了一个独立, 善于交际而又圆滑的人。</desc>
   </FarmHand2>
   
@@ -2225,12 +2219,12 @@
     <title>农场儿童</title>
     <!-- EN: farm kid -->
     <titleShort>农场儿童</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on his family's beef farm. He enjoyed working the fields and taking care of the animals. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on [PAWN_possessive] family's beef farm. [PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed working the fields and taking care of the animals. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在家族的肉牛农场长大，很享受在田野间的工作以及照料动物们。</desc>
   </FarmKid60>
   
   <FarmMechanic1>
-   <!-- EN: farm mechanic -->
+    <!-- EN: farm mechanic -->
     <title>农场机修工</title>
     <!-- EN: mechanic -->
     <titleShort>机修工</titleShort>
@@ -2239,7 +2233,7 @@
   </FarmMechanic1>
   
   <FearfulChef49>
-     <!-- EN: fearful chef -->
+    <!-- EN: fearful chef -->
     <title>引发大火的厨师</title>
     <!-- EN: chef -->
     <titleShort>原厨师</titleShort>
@@ -2248,11 +2242,11 @@
   </FearfulChef49>
   
   <FelineScientist76>
-     <!-- EN: feline scientist -->
+    <!-- EN: feline scientist -->
     <title>猫科专家</title>
     <!-- EN: scientist -->
     <titleShort>专家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] became a renowned scientist in the field of felines. Wanting the best for his animals and specializing in selective breeding, he set out on a journey to find the perfect breeding grounds for his cats. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] became a renowned scientist in the field of felines. Wanting the best for [PAWN_possessive] animals and specializing in selective breeding, [PAWN_pronoun] set out on a journey to find the perfect breeding grounds for [PAWN_possessive] cats. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]成为猫科动物领域的著名专家。[PAWN_pronoun]想要为心爱的动物进行优化配种，以培育出更好的下一代。为此[PAWN_pronoun]在星系中飞行以寻找最佳的猫咪繁殖地。</desc>
   </FelineScientist76>
   
@@ -2261,7 +2255,7 @@
     <title>无依无靠的野孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: survivor -->
     <titleShort>幸存者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] and his family lived a hard but prosperous lives along with their fellow colonists on a distant rimworld.\n\nOne day a group of mechanoids attacked, killing everyone aside from Robert. He then lived alone in the desert until a group of raiders found him. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] and [PAWN_possessive] family lived a hard but prosperous life along with their fellow colonists on an outlying rimworld.\n\nOne day, a group of mechanoids attacked, killing everyone aside from [PAWN_nameDef]. [PAWN_pronoun] then lived alone in the desert until a group of raiders found him. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]和家人与其他同胞住在一个遥远的边缘世界，那里艰苦但蓬勃发展。\n\n有一天，他们的住所被袭击，那些远古机械杀死了除[PAWN_pronoun]以外的所有人。在那之后，[PAWN_pronoun]在沙漠中独来独往，直到一群入侵者发现了他。</desc>
   </FeralChild85>
   
@@ -2270,16 +2264,16 @@
     <title>被遗弃的野孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: feral -->
     <titleShort>野孩子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Abandoned on an animal planet as a small child with nought but a blanket with a name embroidered on it, Felix made himself one with the wilderness.\n\nWhen he was 13, he encountered a team of mineral surveyors, who "offered" him passage off of the planet. -->
+    <!-- EN: Abandoned on an animal planet as a small child with nought but a blanket with a name embroidered on it, [PAWN_nameDef] made [PAWN_objective]self one with the wilderness.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was 13, [PAWN_pronoun] encountered a team of mineral surveyors, who "offered" [PAWN_objective] passage off of the planet. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小被遗弃在原始星球上，伴随[PAWN_possessive]只有一条绣著名字的毛毯。[PAWN_nameDef]孤身一人在荒野中漂泊。\n\n13岁的时候，[PAWN_pronoun]遇到一支矿物探勘队，他们"协助"[PAWN_pronoun]离开那颗星球。</desc>
   </FeralChild96>
   
   <FerventResearcher72>
-   <!-- EN: fervent researcher -->
+    <!-- EN: fervent researcher -->
     <title>狂热的研究员</title>
     <!-- EN: researcher -->
     <titleShort>研究员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: As a young adult, Holly was sure that her planet and its people were nearing their time of transcendence.\n\nA firm belief that her research would be the catalyst drove her to increasingly alarming acts as bureaucrats and bioethics committees worked to stall her progress. -->
+    <!-- EN: As a young adult, [PAWN_nameDef] was sure that [PAWN_possessive] planet and its people were nearing their time of transcendence.\n\nA firm belief that [PAWN_possessive] research would be the catalyst drove [PAWN_objective] to increasingly alarming acts as bureaucrats and bioethics committees worked to stall [PAWN_possessive] progress. -->
     <desc>年轻的[PAWN_nameDef]曾坚信[PAWN_possessive]母星和人民已经接近了卓越时代。\n\n但是政客们和生物伦理委员会却坚信[PAWN_possessive]研究会成为一剂催化剂，使[PAWN_nameDef]做出越来越多的危险行为，于是封禁了[PAWN_pronoun]所有的研究。</desc>
   </FerventResearcher72>
   
@@ -2288,28 +2282,28 @@
     <title>封建农奴之子</title>
     <!-- EN: slave -->
     <titleShort>农奴</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the son of a medieval farmer, and was expected to follow in his footsteps. He was brought up as a kind, well trained farm boy.\n\nHe lived in an unusual feudal kingdom which co-existed with a midworld society which was itself well-known for genetic manipulation. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the son of a medieval farmer, and was expected to follow in [PAWN_possessive] footsteps. [PAWN_pronoun] was brought up as a kind, well trained farm boy.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] lived in an unusual feudal kingdom which co-existed with a midworld society which was itself well-known for genetic manipulation. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是中世纪农奴的孩子，并会追随父母成为农奴，[PAWN_pronoun]被教育成一个善良且训练有素的农民。\n\n在这个星球，非比寻常的中寰世界社会与[PAWN_pronoun]居住的封建王国共存，以出色的基因遗传工程闻名。</desc>
   </FeudalFarmBoy0>
   
   <FeudalLordling56>
-   <!-- EN: feudal lordling -->
+    <!-- EN: feudal lordling -->
     <title>封建领主的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: lordling -->
     <titleShort>小领主</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on a feudal world that was part of a multi-planet empire. As the son of a high lord, [PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed many privileges.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned to maneuver in the both the political landscape and in close quarters combat. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on a feudal world that was part of a multi-planet empire. As the son of a high lord, [PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed many privileges.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned to maneuver in both the political landscape and in close quarters combat. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个封建世界长大，这里是多星球帝国的一部分。 作为一位尊主的子嗣，[PAWN_pronoun]享有很多特权。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]逐渐学会了灵活驾驭政治与近距离格斗。</desc>
   </FeudalLordling56>
   
   <FighterController67>
-   <!-- EN: fighter controller -->
+    <!-- EN: fighter controller -->
     <title>战机空管员</title>
     <!-- EN: controller -->
     <titleShort>空管员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: During the Zartha crisis, Bashkire fought across many worlds, providing the vital link between the ground and the air as a fighter controller. During the campaign, he saw friends injured and killed. This mental trauma haunts his dreams to this day, but his aim remains sharp. -->
+    <!-- EN: During the Zartha crisis, [PAWN_nameDef] fought across many worlds, providing the vital link between the ground and the air as a fighter controller. During the campaign, [PAWN_pronoun] saw friends injured and killed. This mental trauma haunts [PAWN_possessive] dreams to this day, but [PAWN_possessive] aim remains sharp. -->
     <desc>在扎尔塔危机时期，[PAWN_nameDef]作为一名空管员参与过许多世界的战斗，是维持战机与地面联络的重要环节。战役期间，[PAWN_pronoun]看到过太多战友受伤与死亡。尽管至今仍然备受这种心理创伤的折磨，然而[PAWN_nameDef]仍然保持了犀利的洞察力。</desc>
   </FighterController67>
-  <!--NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Firebomber51>
     <!-- EN: firebomber -->
     <title>燃烧弹轰炸机飞行员</title>
@@ -2320,11 +2314,11 @@
   </Firebomber51>
   
   <FireKeeper44>
-   <!-- EN: fire keeper -->
+    <!-- EN: fire keeper -->
     <title>火种保管人</title>
     <!-- EN: firekeep -->
     <titleShort>火种守卫</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was responsible for keeping the tribe’s fire going. [PAWN_pronoun] took this responsibility very seriously. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was responsible for keeping the tribe's fire going. [PAWN_pronoun] took this responsibility very seriously. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]负责保管部落的火种，使其持续不灭。[PAWN_pronoun]对这份工作恪尽职守。</desc>
   </FireKeeper44>
   
@@ -2333,7 +2327,7 @@
     <title>遭遇火灾的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: scarred -->
     <titleShort>烧伤者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Duster was an active child who lived an uneventful childhood until he fell into a fire and suffered horrific burns to his hands and arms. Although the scars have faded, he can't bear to be in close proximity to fire. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was an active child who lived an uneventful childhood until [PAWN_pronoun] fell into a fire and suffered horrific burns to [PAWN_possessive] hands and arms. Although the scars have faded, [PAWN_pronoun] can't bear to be in close proximity to fire. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]度过了一个平静的童年，直到遭遇火灾，可怕的火焰在[PAWN_possessive]双手留下吓人的伤痕。虽然疤痕已经消失，但恐惧使[PAWN_pronoun]无法接近火焰。</desc>
   </FireScarredChild1>
   
@@ -2342,7 +2336,7 @@
     <title>自由漫步者</title>
     <!-- EN: flaneur -->
     <titleShort>漫步者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] strolled and sipped his way through the streets and cafes of [PAWN_possessive] world, pursuing freedom at every turn, never becoming attached.\n\nThrough all this time, [PAWN_pronoun] remained distrustful of others. And never took an order from anyone. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] strolled and sipped [PAWN_possessive] way through the streets and cafes of [PAWN_possessive] world, pursuing freedom at every turn, never becoming attached.\n\nThrough all this time, [PAWN_pronoun] remained distrustful of others. And never took an order from anyone. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]漫步在街道与咖啡店，品尝咖啡，追求自由，没有任何牵绊。\n\n久而久之，[PAWN_pronoun]不信任别人，也从不采纳别人的建议。</desc>
   </Flaneur30>
   
@@ -2372,7 +2366,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up as an apprentice in the foundries of an industrial world. This experience gave [PAWN_objective] metalworking skills and strong muscles, but stunted [PAWN_possessive] artistic development. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就在工业世界的铸造厂当学徒。这段经历给了[PAWN_pronoun]金属加工技能和强健的肌肉，但阻碍[PAWN_possessive]艺术发展。</desc>
   </FoundryApprentice76>
-  <!--NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Framer37>
     <!-- EN: framer -->
     <title>部落建筑工</title>
@@ -2382,7 +2376,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]负责为[PAWN_possessive]部落的其他人建造居所。这包括远行队的临时驻地，也有永久定居的房屋。从当地的植物上收集材料也是工作的一部分。</desc>
   </Framer37>
   
- <Freethinker38>
+  <Freethinker38>
     <!-- EN: freethinker -->
     <title>自由思想家</title>
     <!-- EN: thinker -->
@@ -2390,8 +2384,8 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up on a toxic world with tyrannical leaders. While the rest of the population was high on the planet's narcotic exports, [PAWN_pronoun] joined a rebel militia.\n\nAfter a risky operation against the regime failed, [PAWN_pronoun] fled the planet, staying alive by threatening mutual annihilation with a planetcracker antimatter bomb. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个由暴君统治的毒世界长大。剩下的人很多都在从事星球成瘾品出口，而[PAWN_pronoun]选择加入叛军民兵组织。\n\n在一次试图推翻政权的冒险行动失败后，[PAWN_pronoun]以使用行星反物质炸弹互相毁灭相威胁，最终活下来并逃离了这个星球。</desc>
   </Freethinker38>
-
- <FrightenedChild43>
+  
+  <FrightenedChild43>
     <!-- EN: frightened child -->
     <title>受惊吓的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: scared -->
@@ -2405,7 +2399,7 @@
     <title>坚定的边境执法官</title>
     <!-- EN: marshal -->
     <titleShort>执法官</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Nate was the marshal of his colony. He tried to honorably uphold the law, but the corrupt local mayor killed his family and left him for dead.\n\nAfter regaining his health, Nate arrested the mayor. [PAWN_pronoun] left his homeworld and started a new life working to make a difference in the universe. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the marshal of [PAWN_possessive] colony. [PAWN_pronoun] tried to honorably uphold the law, but the corrupt local mayor killed [PAWN_possessive] family and left [PAWN_objective] for dead.\n\nAfter regaining [PAWN_possessive] health, [PAWN_nameDef] arrested the mayor. [PAWN_pronoun] left [PAWN_possessive] homeworld and started a new life working to make a difference in the universe. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是[PAWN_possessive]殖民地的执法官。[PAWN_pronoun]努力捍卫法律的尊严，但腐败的地方市长杀了[PAWN_possessive]家人并把[PAWN_pronoun]留下等死。\n\n恢复健康后，[PAWN_nameDef]将市长绳之以法。之后，[PAWN_pronoun]离开家园，开始新的生活，并努力在宇宙中发挥作用。</desc>
   </FrontierMarshal27>
   
@@ -2414,7 +2408,7 @@
     <title>受挫折的边境执法官</title>
     <!-- EN: marshal -->
     <titleShort>执法官</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Henry inherited a sense of duty from his father, and began a law enforcement career on his frontier homeworld.\n\nHe tried to uphold the law with honor, but the corruption and greed of local government officials often discouraged him. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] inherited a sense of duty from [PAWN_possessive] father, and began a law enforcement career on [PAWN_possessive] frontier homeworld.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] tried to uphold the law with honor, but the corruption and greed of local government officials often discouraged him. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从父亲那里继承高度的责任感，在[PAWN_possessive]母星边境的执法机关开始职业生涯。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]试图用荣誉来捍卫法律，但地方政府官员的贪污腐败使[PAWN_pronoun]备受挫折。</desc>
   </FrontierMarshal54>
   
@@ -2423,7 +2417,7 @@
     <title>逃亡者</title>
     <!-- EN: fugitive -->
     <titleShort>逃亡者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] rebelled against the corporation [PAWN_pronoun] worked for. [PAWN_pronoun] failed, and was forced him to go on the run.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was always on the move, always leaving everything behind. [PAWN_pronoun] tried to gain supporters for [PAWN_possessive] cause, but failed due to [PAWN_possessive] poor social skills. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] rebelled against the corporation [PAWN_pronoun] worked for. [PAWN_pronoun] failed, and was forced [PAWN_objective] to go on the run.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was always on the move, always leaving everything behind. [PAWN_pronoun] tried to gain supporters for [PAWN_possessive] cause, but failed due to [PAWN_possessive] poor social skills. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]反对[PAWN_pronoun]所供职的公司，但失败了，[PAWN_pronoun]被迫逃走。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]不断逃亡，把一切威胁都甩在身后。[PAWN_pronoun]试图寻找一起行动的支持者，但由于社交能力差而失败。</desc>
   </Fugitive4>
   
@@ -2432,7 +2426,7 @@
     <title>宇宙侍从</title>
     <!-- EN: page -->
     <titleShort>侍从</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] served the high admiral of a space fleet. [PAWN_pronoun] learned the ways of court, including etiquette and speechcraft.\n\nIn his feudal society, it was considered a great honor to serve a man of such prestige. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] served the high admiral of a space fleet. [PAWN_pronoun] learned the ways of court, including etiquette and speechcraft.\n\nIn [PAWN_possessive] feudal society, it was considered a great honor to serve a man of such prestige. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一支宇宙舰队最高统帅的侍从。[PAWN_pronoun]学习了礼节和语言的艺术。\n\n在[PAWN_possessive]封建社会里, 服务这样地位的人是一种荣誉。</desc>
   </GalacticPage37>
   
@@ -2445,7 +2439,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个独立游戏开发者。\n\n在经历了早期的成功以后，[PAWN_nameDef]的职业生涯很快沦落为了一个个糟糕的点子，一次次失败的交易，和一趟趟急切又失败的公众营销。</desc>
   </GameDeveloper95>
   
- <GameFanatic86>
+  <GameFanatic86>
     <!-- EN: game fanatic -->
     <title>虚拟现实游戏迷</title>
     <!-- EN: gamer -->
@@ -2459,7 +2453,7 @@
     <title>游戏测试员</title>
     <!-- EN: tester -->
     <titleShort>测试员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Making a new life on a barely-livable planet after nuclear war, [PAWN_nameDef] was able to fulfill his desires with money borrowed from his father.\n\nHe loved playing a particular colony simulator. His favorite thing to do in the game was to build elaborate hospitals. Spending most of his time playing, he forgot horrors of war and his need for revenge. -->
+    <!-- EN: Making a new life on a barely-livable planet after nuclear war, [PAWN_nameDef] was able to fulfill [PAWN_possessive] desires with money borrowed from [PAWN_possessive] father.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] loved playing a particular colony simulator. [PAWN_possessive] favorite thing to do in the game was to build elaborate hospitals. Spending most of [PAWN_possessive] time playing, [PAWN_pronoun] forgot horrors of war and [PAWN_possessive] need for revenge. -->
     <desc>核战争后，[PAWN_nameDef]在一个几乎不宜居的星球上重新开始生活，[PAWN_pronoun]能用父亲借来的钱实现愿望。[PAWN_pronoun]对一个特别的殖民地模拟游戏情有独钟。在游戏中，[PAWN_pronoun]最喜欢做的事情是建造精致的医院。[PAWN_nameDef]沉迷其中，这令[PAWN_pronoun]忘却战争的恐惧，失去复仇之心。</desc>
   </GameTester77>
   
@@ -2468,7 +2462,7 @@
     <title>黑帮老大</title>
     <!-- EN: boss -->
     <titleShort>老大</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: To survive, [PAWN_nameDef]'s gang often had to rob interstellar traders for food and supplies. Sometimes he had to kill the guards. Sometimes he had to kill the police who arrived to stop him.\n\nAfter years of this, he became one of the most-wanted criminals in the local stellar empire. -->
+    <!-- EN: To survive, [PAWN_nameDef]'s gang often had to rob trade ships for food and supplies. Sometimes [PAWN_pronoun] had to kill the guards. Sometimes [PAWN_pronoun] had to kill the police who arrived to stop him.\n\nAfter years of this, [PAWN_pronoun] became one of the most-wanted criminals in the local empire. -->
     <desc>为了生存, [PAWN_nameDef]的黑帮经常打劫星际运输船。有时他必须干掉保安, 有时他必须干掉警察。\n\n多年后, 他变成了当地国家的最高通缉犯。</desc>
   </GangBoss49>
   
@@ -2477,7 +2471,7 @@
     <title>坚强的帮派成员</title>
     <!-- EN: gang kid -->
     <titleShort>小混混</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up without parents. [PAWN_possessive] whole life was spent alone, fighting for survival on the streets.\n\nNo matter how hard it became to survive, he never gave up. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up without parents. [PAWN_possessive] whole life was spent alone, fighting for survival on the streets.\n\nNo matter how hard it became to survive, [PAWN_pronoun] never gave up. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]生来就是孤儿，从小到大都在街头为生存而战。\n\n无论多么艰难，[PAWN_pronoun]都不会放弃。</desc>
   </GangMember16>
   
@@ -2486,7 +2480,7 @@
     <title>超级帮派成员</title>
     <!-- EN: ganger -->
     <titleShort>黑帮</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up homeless on an urbworld. [PAWN_pronoun] was forced to fight and struggle for everything, making [PAWN_objective] hard and ruthless long before adulthood.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] would have stayed in those streets, had [PAWN_pronoun] not been injured in a shootout and had his body confiscated for use by one of the worldwide city's ruling corporations. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up homeless on an urbworld. [PAWN_pronoun] was forced to fight and struggle for everything, making [PAWN_objective] hard and ruthless long before adulthood.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] would have stayed in those streets, had [PAWN_pronoun] not been injured in a shootout and had [PAWN_possessive] body confiscated for use by one of the worldwide city's ruling corporations. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个在下层世界的流浪者。为了活下去，[PAWN_pronoun]不得不对抗一切，这使[PAWN_objective]年纪轻轻就变得冷酷无情。\n\n如果没有在枪战中受伤，[PAWN_pronoun]会继续在街头保持这样的生存状态。现在，[PAWN_pronoun]被世界级的执法公司征召。</desc>
   </GangMember83>
   
@@ -2504,7 +2498,7 @@
     <title>豪宅园丁</title>
     <!-- EN: gardener -->
     <titleShort>园丁</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: On industrial worlds, wealth concentrates in the hands of those who own the factories and sell the goods. [PAWN_nameDef] worked at the mansion of one such rich family, tending the lavish gardens as part of a team of servants. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked at the mansion of a powerful family, tending the lavish gardens as part of a team of servants. -->
     <desc>在工业星球上，财富集中在拥有工厂的资本家和大商人手中。[PAWN_nameDef]在一个富豪家族的豪宅工作，作为佣人队伍中的一员，照料奢华的花园。</desc>
   </Gardener99>
   
@@ -2522,16 +2516,16 @@
     <title>基因工程学家</title>
     <!-- EN: geneticist -->
     <titleShort>基因学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] carried out [PAWN_possessive] first genetic experiments on farm animals. [PAWN_pronoun] soon grew to become quite skilled in all forms of genetic engineering.\n\nA horrifying lab accident left him with a mortal fear of rodents. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] carried out [PAWN_possessive] first genetic experiments on farm animals. [PAWN_pronoun] soon grew to become quite skilled in all forms of genetic engineering.\n\nA horrifying lab accident left [PAWN_objective] with a mortal fear of rodents. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对农场中的动物进行了[PAWN_pronoun]第一个基因实验，很快的[PAWN_pronoun]又熟悉了各种基因工程的技巧。\n\n一个可怕的实验事故让[PAWN_pronoun]获得了"恐鼠症"。有甚麽比一隻和牛一样大的老鼠还恐怖的动物。</desc>
   </GeneticEngineer89>
   
   <GeneticScientist66>
-   <!-- EN: genetic scientist -->
+    <!-- EN: genetic scientist -->
     <title>基因科学家</title>
     <!-- EN: geneticist -->
     <titleShort>基因学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: After the war he joined a genetic engineering firm. He worked on enhancements for humans and livestock. His experiences in inflicting and healing wounds were very beneficial to his work, but he developed a black sense of humor. This made social gatherings awkward. -->
+    <!-- EN: After the war [PAWN_pronoun] joined a genetic engineering firm. [PAWN_pronoun] worked on enhancements for humans and livestock. [PAWN_possessive] experience in inflicting and healing wounds was very beneficial to [PAWN_possessive] work, but [PAWN_pronoun] developed a black sense of humor. This made social gatherings awkward. -->
     <desc>在战后，[PAWN_nameDef]加入了一家基因工程公司，主要从事于强化人类和家畜的工作。过去在战场上负伤和治疗的经验对于工作非常有益，但是[PAWN_pronoun]独特的黑色幽默经常让聚会陷入尴尬。</desc>
   </GeneticScientist66>
   
@@ -2558,11 +2552,11 @@
   </Gigolo30>
   
   <Gigolo68>
-    <!-- EN: Gigolo -->
+    <!-- EN: gigolo -->
     <title>职业牛郎</title>
-    <!-- EN: Gigolo -->
+    <!-- EN: gigolo -->
     <titleShort>牛郎</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] sold [PAWN_objective]self into slavery for money to purchase boomrat pizza. [PAWN_pronoun] was then traded to the Zeglar colonies, where he worked as a male prostitute.\n\nIn a fluke event, [PAWN_pronoun] managed to join other escaping slaves as they hijacked a ship. After fighting with the captain of the slave crew over the last piece of boomrat pizza, [PAWN_nameDef] was sent off the ship in an escape pod. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] sold [PAWN_objective]self into slavery for money to purchase boomrat pizza. [PAWN_pronoun] was then traded to the Zeglar colonies, where [PAWN_pronoun] worked as a male prostitute.\n\nIn a fluke event, [PAWN_pronoun] managed to join other escaping slaves as they hijacked a ship. After fighting with the captain of the slave crew over the last piece of boomrat pizza, [PAWN_nameDef] was sent off the ship in an escape pod. -->
     <desc>为了购买爆炸鼠披萨，[PAWN_nameDef]自愿成为奴隶。[PAWN_pronoun]随后被贩卖到Zeglar殖民地，成为一名专业男妓。\n\n一次偶然的机会，[PAWN_pronoun]设法加入了劫持飞船的奴隶，和他们一起逃跑。在船上，[PAWN_pronoun]为了争夺最后一块爆炸鼠披萨而挑战船长。之后，[PAWN_pronoun]被塞进逃生舱发射了出去。</desc>
   </Gigolo68>
   
@@ -2585,16 +2579,16 @@
   </GlitterworldKid85>
   
   <GlitterworldNerd20>
-    <!-- EN: glitterworld kid -->
+    <!-- EN: glitterworld nerd -->
     <title>闪耀世界儿童</title>
-    <!-- EN: glit kid -->
+    <!-- EN: nerd -->
     <titleShort>闪耀儿童</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: The son of a genetically-engineered "perfect mate" on a glitterworld, Chaz was much more shy, withdrawn and nervous than his parents. [PAWN_pronoun] kept mostly to himself, studying science and medicine and taking on gardening as a hobby. \n\nIn [PAWN_possessive] teens, [PAWN_pronoun] ran away from home, seeking a quieter life. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved technology from the day [PAWN_pronoun] was born. [PAWN_pronoun] had a mechanoid companion which [PAWN_pronoun] tried to modify.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] obsession with technology meant that [PAWN_pronoun] never appreciated arts or culture. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是由闪耀世界基因工程公司"完美伴侣"利用父母双方最佳基因组合所制造出来的孩子，[PAWN_pronoun]比起[PAWN_possessive]父母更加神经质、害羞和孤僻，但拥有学习科学和医学的天赋以及对园艺的爱好。\n\n在[PAWN_pronoun]十几岁时，[PAWN_pronoun]离家出走以追寻更平静的生活。</desc>
   </GlitterworldNerd20>
   
   <GlitterworldOfficer60>
-   <!-- EN: glitterworld officer -->
+    <!-- EN: glitterworld officer -->
     <title>闪耀世界军官</title>
     <!-- EN: officer -->
     <titleShort>军官</titleShort>
@@ -2607,7 +2601,7 @@
     <title>闪耀世界皇室</title>
     <!-- EN: royalty -->
     <titleShort>皇室成员</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in a glitterworld royal household. She was groomed from a young age to marry into another planet's royal family.\n\nUnfortunately, her crooked teeth made her undesirable to suitors, so she became bitter and resentful. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in a glitterworld royal household. [PAWN_pronoun] was groomed from a young age to marry into another planet's royal family.\n\nUnfortunately, [PAWN_possessive] crooked teeth made [PAWN_objective] undesirable to suitors, so [PAWN_pronoun] became bitter and resentful. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在皇室家庭中长大。从小就培养作为与另一个星球皇室的联姻工具。\n\n不幸的是，不整齐的牙齿导致[PAWN_objective]被求婚者们所嫌弃，[PAWN_pronoun]整个人变得苦闷和幽怨。</desc>
   </GlitterworldRoyal24>
   
@@ -2621,11 +2615,11 @@
   </GlitterworldSurgeon15>
   
   <Gnomebiologist96>
-   <!-- EN: gnomebiologist -->
+    <!-- EN: gnomebiologist -->
     <title>G-nome生物学家</title>
     <!-- EN: biologist -->
     <titleShort>生物学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Gizmo was a xenobiology professor in a glitterworld university. He went to conferences and managed an art gallery.\n\nHowever, he never stopped sculpting yard gnomes, and considers this to be his true profession. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a xenobiology professor in a glitterworld university. [PAWN_pronoun] went to conferences and managed an art gallery.\n\nHowever, [PAWN_pronoun] never stopped sculpting yard gnomes, and considers this to be [PAWN_possessive] true profession. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名在闪耀世界教育异源生物学的教授。除了参与会议之外，[PAWN_pronoun]还负责管理艺术画廊，[PAWN_pronoun]从来没有停止过雕刻。</desc>
   </Gnomebiologist96>
   
@@ -2634,12 +2628,12 @@
     <title>G-nome雕刻家</title>
     <!-- EN: sculptor -->
     <titleShort>雕刻家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was engineered in a lab as part of the G-nome Project. He was implanted at birth with encyclopedic knowledge of all aspects of xenobiology.\n\nThe G-nome scientists nicknamed him Gizmo and occupied him with sculpting. He developed a love of sculpting gnomes and gnome accessories. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was engineered in a lab as part of the G-nome Project. [PAWN_pronoun] was implanted at birth with encyclopedic knowledge of all aspects of xenobiology.\n\nThe G-nome scientists nicknamed [PAWN_objective] [PAWN_nameDef] and occupied [PAWN_objective] with sculpting. [PAWN_pronoun] developed a love of sculpting gnomes and gnome accessories. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是实验室为了G-nome研究项目所设计的其中一部份，当[PAWN_pronoun]出生时就被植入了异源生物学各方面的知识，G-nome的研究人员戏称[PAWN_pronoun]为小发明，并且抢走了[PAWN_possessive]雕刻。[PAWN_pronoun]对于制作G-nome雕刻和首饰有相当的热情。</desc>
   </GNomeSculptor34>
   
   <GovernmentAgent47>
-    <!-- EN: government agent   -->
+    <!-- EN: government agent -->
     <title>政府代理人</title>
     <!-- EN: agent -->
     <titleShort>代理人</titleShort>
@@ -2648,11 +2642,11 @@
   </GovernmentAgent47>
   
   <GraphicDesigner33>
-   <!-- EN: graphic designer -->
+    <!-- EN: graphic designer -->
     <title>平面设计师</title>
     <!-- EN: designer -->
     <titleShort>设计师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Kees' interest in artistic expression led him to become a designer. His eye for detail made him a reasonably well-known artist on his planet, though his meticulousness often led him to spend too much time perfecting a single project. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]' interest in artistic expression led [PAWN_objective] to become a designer. [PAWN_possessive] eye for detail made [PAWN_objective] a reasonably well-known artist on [PAWN_possessive] planet, though [PAWN_possessive] meticulousness often led [PAWN_objective] to spend too much time perfecting a single project. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对艺术高度的兴趣使[PAWN_pronoun]成为了一名设计师。尽管[PAWN_nameDef]对于细节的过份要求往往会使[PAWN_pronoun]花费大量时间去完善一件作品，然而对于艺术细节的独特观点使[PAWN_nameDef]理所当然的成为了母星上的著名艺术家。</desc>
   </GraphicDesigner33>
   
@@ -2684,20 +2678,20 @@
   </Gunfighter51>
   
   <GunKid30>
-     <!-- EN: gun kid -->
+    <!-- EN: gun kid -->
     <title>钻研枪械的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: gun kid -->
     <titleShort>射击小子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Growing up in a urbworld, [PAWN_nameDef] never had it easy. Every day was a struggle and pollution, hunger, and gangs of older kids.\n\nIn the little space he had to himself, he studied his passion - guns, combat tactics, and war history. -->
+    <!-- EN: Growing up in a urbworld, [PAWN_nameDef] never had it easy. Every day was a struggle and pollution, hunger, and gangs of older kids.\n\nIn the little space [PAWN_pronoun] had to [PAWN_objective]self, [PAWN_pronoun] studied [PAWN_possessive] passion - guns, combat tactics, and war history. -->
     <desc>地下世界的生活从来都不轻松，[PAWN_nameDef]从小在都市行星长大，每天都在污染和饥饿环绕下和年纪大的孩子争夺每一口食物。在[PAWN_pronoun]所拥有的小空间中，[PAWN_pronoun]开始钻研[PAWN_pronoun]热爱的事务─枪枝、战术和战史。</desc>
   </GunKid30>
   
   <Gymnast48>
-     <!-- EN: gymnast -->
+    <!-- EN: gymnast -->
     <title>辍学的体操运动员</title>
     <!-- EN: gymnast -->
     <titleShort>体操家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a professional gymnast at an early age. Thanks to her skills, she was able to leave her homeworld and enroll in a glitterworld university.\n\nBecause of the lack of career opportunities in gymnastics, she left the university unemployed and carrying an enormous debt. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a professional gymnast at an early age. Thanks to [PAWN_possessive] skills, [PAWN_pronoun] was able to enroll in a glitterworld university.\n\nBecause of the lack of career opportunities in gymnastics, [PAWN_pronoun] left the university unemployed and carrying an enormous debt. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就是一名职业体操运动员。[PAWN_possessive]才能使[PAWN_pronoun]能够离开贫穷的家乡，进入闪耀世界大学深造。\n\n遗憾的是，由于体操的就业前景黯淡，[PAWN_pronoun]被迫辍学并欠下巨额债务。</desc>
   </Gymnast48>
   
@@ -2706,16 +2700,16 @@
     <title>黑客小子</title>
     <!-- EN: hacker -->
     <titleShort>黑客</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born on a high-tech world, [PAWN_nameDef] learned hack computers at a young age. \n\nSpending many hours tinkering alone made [PAWN_objective] very good with machines, but very bad with humans. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born on a high-tech world, [PAWN_nameDef] learned to hack computers at a young age. \n\nSpending many hours tinkering alone made [PAWN_objective] very good with machines, but very bad with humans. -->
     <desc>生于一个高科技世界，[PAWN_nameDef]年轻时就学会了电脑。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]花费很多时间在机器上，与机器十分亲近，但与周围其他人的关系很差。</desc>
   </HackerKid98>
   
   <HackerProdigy84>
-   <!-- EN: hacker prodigy -->
+    <!-- EN: hacker prodigy -->
     <title>黑客天才</title>
     <!-- EN: hacker -->
     <titleShort>黑客</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Wedge was raised as the only child of wealthy surgeons. After being pressured into accepting a medical apprenticeship, he snapped. He seized his inheritance and went underground to learn how to exploit computer networks. He quickly became one of the most feared hackers on his home planet. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was raised as the only child of wealthy surgeons. After being pressured into accepting a medical apprenticeship, [PAWN_pronoun] snapped. [PAWN_pronoun] seized [PAWN_possessive] inheritance and went underground to learn how to exploit computer networks. [PAWN_pronoun] quickly became one of the most feared hackers on [PAWN_possessive] home planet. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名富有的外科医生的独子。从小被迫接受严格医学教育以便接手[PAWN_pronoun]父亲的事业，但[PAWN_pronoun]私底下开始学习如何使用计算机和网路。[PAWN_pronoun]很快成为这个星球上最厉害的黑客。</desc>
   </HackerProdigy84>
   
@@ -2747,13 +2741,13 @@
   </Healer0>
   
   <Healer35>
-      <!-- EN: healer -->
+    <!-- EN: healer -->
     <title>治疗师</title>
     <!-- EN: healer -->
     <titleShort>治疗师</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] took the time to admire the beauty of the world.\n\nHer passive aggressiveness surfaced once in a while, but she tried to adapt to her changing life. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] took the time to admire the beauty of the world. \n\n[PAWN_possessive] passive-aggressiveness surfaced once in a while, but [PAWN_pronoun] tried to adapt to [PAWN_possessive] changing life. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]花了些时间来体验世界的美好。\n\n尽管偶尔还会有杀人的冲动，但[PAWN_pronoun]在努力适应新的生活。</desc>
-   </Healer35>
+  </Healer35>
   
   <HearthTender66>
     <!-- EN: hearth tender -->
@@ -2765,11 +2759,11 @@
   </HearthTender66>
   
   <HedgeFundManager54>
-      <!-- EN: hedge fund manager -->
+    <!-- EN: hedge fund manager -->
     <title>对冲基金经理</title>
     <!-- EN: banker -->
     <titleShort>银行经理</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: A top hedge fund manager on a teeming urbworld, [PAWN_nameDef]'s portfolio grew rapidly as he charmed clients with a sweet voice and devious intent. When the deal turned out too good to be true, he was forced to flee the planet with a bounty on his head.\n\nAs he travelled the stars he found a passion in the arts, making masterpieces fit for high society customers. -->
+    <!-- EN: A top hedge fund manager on a teeming urbworld, [PAWN_nameDef]'s portfolio grew rapidly as [PAWN_pronoun] charmed clients with a sweet voice and devious intent. When the deal turned out too good to be true, [PAWN_pronoun] was forced to flee the planet with a bounty on [PAWN_possessive] head.\n\nAs [PAWN_pronoun] travelled the stars [PAWN_pronoun] found a passion in the arts, making masterpieces fit for high society customers. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名在拥挤的都市行星上的顶级对冲基金经理，[PAWN_pronoun]利用诱人的声音和狡猾的诈术迷惑客户，使得[PAWN_pronoun]负责的投资快速增长。当这个交易被发现不可能被执行时，[PAWN_pronoun]逃离了行星以躲避为了选赏而追杀[PAWN_pronoun]的人。\n\n在星际旅程中，[PAWN_pronoun]发现自己对艺术的热情，使[PAWN_pronoun]可以创作出适合上流社会顾客的杰作。</desc>
   </HedgeFundManager54>
   
@@ -2792,11 +2786,11 @@
   </Herbalist54>
   
   <Herder19>
-   <!-- EN: herder -->
+    <!-- EN: herder -->
     <title>部落牧牛人</title>
     <!-- EN: herder -->
     <titleShort>牧人</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: As a child, [PAWN_nameDef] tended the tribe’s muffalo herds, keeping them safe from predators and treating the sick. It was quiet work, but [PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed being away from people. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] tended the muffalo herds, keeping them safe from predators and treating sick animals. It was quiet work, but [PAWN_pronoun] enjoyed being away from people. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小时候起就一直照看着部落里的野牦牛群，保护它们远离天敌的威胁并且治疗生病的牦牛。这是一份安静的工作，但[PAWN_pronoun]却很享受这种远离人群的生活。</desc>
   </Herder19>
   
@@ -2805,7 +2799,7 @@
     <title>隐居者</title>
     <!-- EN: hermit -->
     <titleShort>隐士</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Worn out by the pressures of social interaction, [PAWN_nameDef] left [PAWN_possessive] crowded midworld city to live a simple life in the wilderness. There, [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] days alone, tending [PAWN_possessive] garden and crafting the simple tools [PAWN_pronoun] needed to survive. -->
+    <!-- EN: Worn out by the pressures of social interaction, [PAWN_nameDef] left [PAWN_possessive] crowded city to live a simple life in the wilderness. There, [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] days alone, tending [PAWN_possessive] garden and crafting the simple tools [PAWN_pronoun] needed to survive. -->
     <desc>因不堪忍受社交活动的压力，[PAWN_nameDef]离开了拥挤的中寰世界星球的城市，在野外过着简单的生活。在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]照顾着[PAWN_possessive]花园，制造生存所需的简单工具，独自过着每一天。</desc>
   </Hermit82>
   
@@ -2819,7 +2813,7 @@
   </Herpetologist3>
   
   <HexCellArtist91>
-     <!-- EN: hex-cell artist -->
+    <!-- EN: hex-cell artist -->
     <title>像素艺术家</title>
     <!-- EN: artist -->
     <titleShort>艺术家</titleShort>
@@ -2837,29 +2831,29 @@
   </Hideaway9>
   
   <HighBaroness37>
-     <!-- EN: high baroness -->
+    <!-- EN: high baroness -->
     <title>大男爵</title>
     <!-- EN: noble -->
     <titleShort>贵族</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born as low-ranking royalty in a large imperial family.\n\nShe was placed In charge of running her home planet from an early age, and learned important political and cultural skills in that role. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born as low-ranking royalty in a large imperial family.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was placed In charge of running [PAWN_possessive] home planet from an early age, and learned important political and cultural skills in that role. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生于一个庞大的皇室家族并且拥有一个低级贵族头衔。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]年轻时负责管理家族行星，并且在那个位置上学习到重要的政治和文化技巧。</desc>
   </HighBaroness37>
   
   <HillbillyProdigy60>
-    !-- EN: hillbilly prodigy -->
+    <!-- EN: hillbilly prodigy -->
     <title>天才乡巴佬</title>
     <!-- EN: hillbilly -->
     <titleShort>乡巴佬</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born on a cold hillbilly planet inhabited mainly by furred xenohumans, Benjamin grew up to the sound of bar fights and shootouts. Though his childhood was spent playing the banjo and working as a mechanic, his abnormal intelligence made him want something more; he entered medical school at a young age. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born on a cold rimworld inhabited mainly by furred xenohumans, [PAWN_nameDef] grew up to the sound of bar fights and shootouts. Though [PAWN_possessive] childhood was spent playing the banjo and working as a mechanic, [PAWN_possessive] abnormal intelligence made [PAWN_objective] want something more; [PAWN_pronoun] entered medical school at a young age. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一颗寒冷的星球，和野蛮人混居并以出兽毛皮为主要商业活动。[PAWN_pronoun]在酒吧混战和枪声中长大，虽然[PAWN_possessive]童年把时间花在完班卓琴和机械方面的维修工作，但是[PAWN_pronoun]异于常人的智力让[PAWN_pronoun]想学得更多。\n\n20岁时[PAWN_pronoun]终于如愿以偿进入了医学院。</desc>
   </HillbillyProdigy60>
   
   <HiredAssassin37>
-   <!-- EN: hired assassin -->
+    <!-- EN: hired assassin -->
     <title>被雇佣的刺客</title>
     <!-- EN: assassin -->
     <titleShort>刺客</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Axle was a master thief, working mostly for organized crime. Over time, he made a name for himself and shifted his business into the paid "removal" of human threats. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a master thief, working mostly for organized crime. Over time, [PAWN_pronoun] made a name for [PAWN_objective]self and shifted [PAWN_possessive] business into the paid "removal" of human threats. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个老练的小偷，主要工作就是组织犯罪。随着时间的推移，[PAWN_pronoun]把自己的业务转向为其他人有偿的“去除”威胁。</desc>
   </HiredAssassin37>
   
@@ -2868,7 +2862,7 @@
     <title>失事的雇佣枪手</title>
     <!-- EN: hired gun -->
     <titleShort>枪手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] always wanted to prove [PAWN_pronoun] could make a living without [PAWN_possessive] parents' help. [PAWN_pronoun] did shady jobs that often involved pointing guns at innocent people.\n\nHe eventually made enough money to board a cheap freighter. He discovered why it was so cheap when it crashed. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] always wanted to prove [PAWN_pronoun] could make a living without [PAWN_possessive] parents' help. [PAWN_pronoun] did shady jobs that often involved pointing guns at innocent people.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] eventually made enough money to board a cheap freighter. [PAWN_pronoun] discovered why it was so cheap when it crashed. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]总是想证明自己没有父母也能活得很好。[PAWN_pronoun]干了些拿枪指着无辜平民的勾当。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]最终攒了足够钱买了一架便宜的战机。坠毁的时候, [PAWN_pronoun]才明白这架飞机为什么这么便宜。</desc>
   </HiredGun70>
   
@@ -2877,7 +2871,7 @@
     <title>凶残的雇佣打手</title>
     <!-- EN: hired thug -->
     <titleShort>打手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Knowing what life on the streets was truly like, [PAWN_nameDef] slipped into police work. However, a particularly disturbing case ended with him beating the perpetrator to death.\n\nDishonorably discharged from his duties, he used his contacts and skills to find work as a thug for hire. -->
+    <!-- EN: Knowing what life on the streets was truly like, [PAWN_nameDef] slipped into police work. However, a particularly disturbing case ended with [PAWN_objective] beating the perpetrator to death.\n\nDishonorably discharged from [PAWN_possessive] duties, [PAWN_pronoun] used [PAWN_possessive] contacts and skills to find work as a thug for hire. -->
     <desc>深知贫穷的滋味，[PAWN_nameDef]选择作为警察混日子。然而，一个棘手的案子以[PAWN_pronoun]将嫌疑人殴打致死而告终。\n\n那次事件后，[PAWN_nameDef]因背弃职责而名誉扫地，同时被解雇。之后[PAWN_pronoun]利用人脉和技能重新上岗，成为一名雇佣打手。</desc>
   </HiredMuscle5>
   
@@ -2926,7 +2920,7 @@
     <title>人形计算机</title>
     <!-- EN: computer -->
     <titleShort>计算机</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] turned out to have an excellent memory and a gift for performing complex calculations in [PAWN_possessive] head. A midworld dictator decided to employ [PAWN_nameDef] to keep track of [PAWN_possessive] state's finances and expenditure, since electrical computers were too susceptible to hacking. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] turned out to have an excellent memory and a gift for performing complex calculations in [PAWN_possessive] head. An industrial-world dictator decided to employ [PAWN_nameDef] to keep track of [PAWN_possessive] state's finances and expenditure. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]天生具备极强的记忆力并且表现出进行复杂心算的天赋。一个中寰世界的独裁者决定雇佣[PAWN_nameDef]来记录[PAWN_possessive]国家的资产和经费状况，因为电子计算机太容易被攻破了。</desc>
   </HumanComputer83>
   
@@ -2935,19 +2929,19 @@
     <title>人口贩子</title>
     <!-- EN: trafficker -->
     <titleShort>人贩子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] stole children from their homes to sell them to interested buyers.\n\nOver time, he lost what little moral sense he had left. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] stole children from their homes to sell them to interested buyers.\n\nOver time, [PAWN_pronoun] lost what little moral sense [PAWN_pronoun] had left. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]偷走小孩并卖给需要的买家。\n\n久而久之, [PAWN_pronoun]已经没有任何道德底线。</desc>
   </HumanTrafficker35>
   
   <Hunter73>
-   <!-- EN: hunter -->
+    <!-- EN: hunter -->
     <title>大师级猎人</title>
     <!-- EN: hunter -->
     <titleShort>猎人</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Hawke was a master hunter.\n\nHe learned to track and trap any animal in the most dangerous of places, and had deep knowledge of many ingenious methods for taking down specific large animals. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a master hunter.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned to track and trap any animal in the most dangerous of places, and had deep knowledge of many ingenious methods for taking down specific large animals. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一个大师级猎手。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]学会了在最危险的地方狩猎, 尤其善于捕猎大型动物。</desc>
   </Hunter73>
-  <!-- NEW !!!-->
+  
   <Hunter74>
     <!-- EN: hunter -->
     <title>猎手</title>
@@ -2962,11 +2956,11 @@
     <title>王国的猎手</title>
     <!-- EN: pest guard -->
     <titleShort>猎杀者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was forced to protect his colony in the name of the king after a mysterious outbreak of murderous genetically-modified wildlife.\n\nDespite his best efforts, his kingdom was destroyed. [PAWN_nameDef] developed PTSD, a hatred of animals and a bad case of technophobia. [PAWN_pronoun] was named for the place they found him. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was forced to protect [PAWN_possessive] colony in the name of the king after a mysterious outbreak of murderous genetically-modified wildlife.\n\nDespite [PAWN_possessive] best efforts, [PAWN_possessive] kingdom was destroyed. [PAWN_nameDef] developed PTSD, a hatred of animals and a bad case of technophobia. [PAWN_pronoun] was named for the place they found him. -->
     <desc>当一场瘟疫导致基因改造动物开始对人类大开杀戒时[PAWN_nameDef]被国王选中保护[PAWN_possessive]殖民地。\n\n尽管[PAWN_pronoun]尽了最大的努力，[PAWN_possessive]王国还是被发疯的基因生物毁灭，[PAWN_nameDef]因此患上创伤症候群，[PAWN_pronoun]仇恨动物和恐惧基因工程技术。救援队把找到[PAWN_possessive]地方以[PAWN_possessive]名字命名。</desc>
   </HunterOfTheKing53>
   
- <HunterScavenger64>
+  <HunterScavenger64>
     <!-- EN: hunter scavenger -->
     <title>猎人拾荒者</title>
     <!-- EN: scavenger -->
@@ -2985,16 +2979,16 @@
   </HypnocultLeader61>
   
   <IcePlanetChild95>
-   <!-- EN: ice planet child -->
+    <!-- EN: ice planet child -->
     <title>冰冻星球少年</title>
     <!-- EN: ice child -->
     <titleShort>冰冻少年</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Growing up on the frozen wastes of an ocean moon, [PAWN_nameDef] only had animals and a few hard-bitten sailors as companions.\n\nThe lack of social interaction made him develop a interest in engineering - but he never developed any great fondness for humans. -->
+    <!-- EN: Growing up on the frozen wastes of an ocean moon, [PAWN_nameDef] only had animals and a few hard-bitten sailors as companions.\n\nThe lack of social interaction made [PAWN_objective] develop a interest in engineering - but [PAWN_pronoun] never developed any great fondness for humans. -->
     <desc>在一个冰冻海洋卫星的垃圾场中长大, [PAWN_nameDef]只有动物和几个久经风霜的水手陪伴\n\n过少的社会交往让他对工程学产生兴趣 - 但是从来对人类没有什么兴趣。</desc>
   </IcePlanetChild95>
   
   <IceworldSurvivor75>
-   <!-- EN: iceworld survivor -->
+    <!-- EN: iceworld survivor -->
     <title>冰雪世界幸存者</title>
     <!-- EN: iceborn -->
     <titleShort>冰雪之子</titleShort>
@@ -3007,12 +3001,12 @@
     <title>理想中的军校学生</title>
     <!-- EN: cadet -->
     <titleShort>军校生</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Raised in the military traditions of his forefathers, [PAWN_nameDef] was taught from a young age that he would be a great leader and the hero of the Dichter family.\n\nHe excelled at his studies and graduated from the academy with honors. -->
+    <!-- EN: Raised in the military traditions of [PAWN_possessive] forefathers, [PAWN_nameDef] was taught from a young age that [PAWN_pronoun] would be a great leader and the hero of [PAWN_possessive] family.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] excelled at [PAWN_possessive] studies and graduated from the academy with honors. -->
     <desc>成长于一个军人世家，[PAWN_nameDef]从小就被教导成为领袖和迪希特家族的英雄。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]表现优异，并满载荣誉地从学院毕业。</desc>
-</IdealisticCadet64>
+  </IdealisticCadet64>
   
   <IllegalShipwright76>
-      <!-- EN: illegal shipwright -->
+    <!-- EN: illegal shipwright -->
     <title>非法造船工</title>
     <!-- EN: shipwright -->
     <titleShort>船匠</titleShort>
@@ -3021,11 +3015,11 @@
   </IllegalShipwright76>
   
   <ImperialGeneral27>
-  <!-- EN: imperial general -->
+    <!-- EN: imperial general -->
     <title>帝国将军</title>
     <!-- EN: general -->
     <titleShort>将军</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s thirst for power defined [PAWN_objective]. [PAWN_pronoun] quickly rose through the military ranks and soon attained the rank of general.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was given with the most challenging task - conquering distant and unexplored rim worlds. Victory here could even position [PAWN_objective] as a successor to the emperor. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s thirst for power defined [PAWN_objective]. [PAWN_pronoun] quickly rose through the military ranks and soon attained the rank of general.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was given the most challenging task - conquering distant and unexplored rimworlds. Victory here could even position [PAWN_objective] as a successor to the emperor. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]对权力的渴望明确了[PAWN_possessive]目标。[PAWN_pronoun]迅速晋升并很快获得了将军的军衔。\n\n然后，[PAWN_pronoun]被授予了最有挑战性的任务——征服遥远的、无人涉足的边缘世界。假如能取得胜利，[PAWN_pronoun]甚至能成为皇位继承人的有力争夺者。</desc>
   </ImperialGeneral27>
   
@@ -3052,7 +3046,7 @@
   </ImperialPriest24>
   
   <ImperialStudent49>
-      <!-- EN: imperial student -->
+    <!-- EN: imperial student -->
     <title>帝国学生</title>
     <!-- EN: student -->
     <titleShort>学生</titleShort>
@@ -3068,7 +3062,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] never knew [PAWN_possessive] parents. [PAWN_possessive] earliest memories were of drudgery in the mines and workhouses of [PAWN_possessive] industrial world.\n\nBecause of this, [PAWN_pronoun] never received a proper education. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从来不知道自己的父母是谁。[PAWN_pronoun]最早的记忆就是[PAWN_pronoun]所在工业星球上的劳动救济所与矿山中的苦差事。\n\n因此, [PAWN_pronoun]从未接受过任何正规教育。</desc>
   </IndustrialOrphan13>
-
+  
   <IndworldUrchin73>
     <!-- EN: indworld urchin -->
     <title>工业世界流浪儿</title>
@@ -3079,11 +3073,11 @@
   </IndworldUrchin73>
   
   <Infantry99>
-   <!-- EN: infantry -->
+    <!-- EN: infantry -->
     <title>嗜血的步兵</title>
     <!-- EN: infantry -->
     <titleShort>步兵</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Lenka was raised on a world wracked by war.\n\nAt an early age, she was shown how to use guns and cruelty to project her will. She later distinguished herself by committing atrocities with more enthusiasm than anyone else. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was raised on a world wracked by war.\n\nAt an early age, [PAWN_pronoun] was shown how to use guns and cruelty to project [PAWN_possessive] will. [PAWN_pronoun] later distinguished [PAWN_objective]self by committing atrocities with more enthusiasm than anyone else. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一个饱受战争摧残的世界长大。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]在很小的时候就被教育如何用枪械和残忍来展现自我意志。以至于后来[PAWN_pronoun]比任何人都热衷于通过暴行让自己出名。</desc>
   </Infantry99>
   
@@ -3124,13 +3118,13 @@
   </InformationBroker77>
   
   <IntelligenceAgent10>
-     <!-- EN: intelligence agent -->
+    <!-- EN: intelligence agent -->
     <title>失踪的情报间谍</title>
     <!-- EN: agent -->
     <titleShort>前特工</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Because of his hacking skills, Wedge was recruited by his home planet's governing body to serve as an intelligence agent. The government trained him in combat, but he prefers psychological warfare.\n\nGovernment rules proved too strict for him, so he went rogue. His current activities are unknown. -->
+    <!-- EN: Because of [PAWN_possessive] hacking skills, [PAWN_nameDef] was recruited by [PAWN_possessive] home planet's governing body to serve as an intelligence agent. The government trained [PAWN_objective] in combat, but [PAWN_pronoun] prefers psychological warfare.\n\nGovernment rules proved too strict for [PAWN_objective], so [PAWN_pronoun] went rogue. [PAWN_possessive] current activities are unknown. -->
     <desc>因为黑客技术高超，[PAWN_nameDef]被星球管理机构招募成为一名情报人员。政府对[PAWN_pronoun]进行战斗训练，但[PAWN_pronoun]更喜欢心理战。\n\n由于政府规则过于严苛，[PAWN_pronoun]悄悄溜出来。[PAWN_possessive]行踪无人可知</desc>
-   </IntelligenceAgent10>
+  </IntelligenceAgent10>
   
   <IntelligenceAgent21>
     <!-- EN: intelligence agent -->
@@ -3142,11 +3136,11 @@
   </IntelligenceAgent21>
   
   <IntimateAssassin35>
-     <!-- EN: intimate assassin -->
+    <!-- EN: intimate assassin -->
     <title>贴心的刺客</title>
     <!-- EN: assassin -->
     <titleShort>刺客</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a professional assassin. She was sadistic, calculating, and appeared utterly harmless.\n\nShe preferred using intimate means to dispatch her targets. This fulfilled both her contracts and her own personal desire for control. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a professional assassin. [PAWN_pronoun] was sadistic, calculating, and appeared utterly harmless.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] preferred using intimate means to dispatch [PAWN_possessive] targets. This fulfilled both [PAWN_possessive] contracts and [PAWN_possessive] own personal desire for control. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名职业刺客，也是一个诡计多端的虐待狂，但看上去似乎人畜无害。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]更喜欢用贴心的手段了结[PAWN_possessive]目标。这既不违背契约，又满足了[PAWN_objective]个人的控制欲。O</desc>
   </IntimateAssassin35>
   
@@ -3160,11 +3154,11 @@
   </Inventor6>
   
   <InvoluntaryHermit24>
-     <!-- EN: involuntary hermit -->
+    <!-- EN: involuntary hermit -->
     <title>被迫隐居的人</title>
     <!-- EN: hermit -->
     <titleShort>独居者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]’s escape pod was jettisoned onto an unexplored region of a frontier world. She eked out a lonely existence with only a herd of muffalo for company.\n \nLater, she was spotted clad in pygmy wombat furs, discussing the importance of hoof hygiene with a group of elderly muffalo. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]’s escape pod was jettisoned onto an unexplored region of a frontier world. [PAWN_pronoun] eked out a lonely existence with only a herd of muffalo for company.\n \nLater, [PAWN_pronoun] was spotted clad in pygmy wombat furs, discussing the importance of hoof hygiene with a group of elderly muffalo. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的休眠仓被抛弃到边缘世界一个蛮荒地带。[PAWN_pronoun]过着只与野牦牛群为伴的孤独生活。\n\n几十年后，人们发现穿着小袋熊皮衣服的[PAWN_nameDef]，正和一群老牦牛讨论用蹄卫生的话题。</desc>
   </InvoluntaryHermit24>
   
@@ -3177,7 +3171,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的大部分人生都在监狱中度过，在那里[PAWN_pronoun]被安排在厨房里工作。[PAWN_pronoun]有打架的习惯，并养成充满侵略性的说话方式。</desc>
   </Jailbird40>
   
-   <JoywireAddict76>
+  <JoywireAddict76>
     <!-- EN: joywire addict -->
     <title>乐丝成瘾者</title>
     <!-- EN: addict -->
@@ -3185,7 +3179,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s wealthy parents provided everything [PAWN_pronoun] ever wanted. After discovering joywires, [PAWN_pronoun] became obsessed. Once [PAWN_possessive] parents realized what happened, they cut [PAWN_objective] off.\n\nUncaring and often violent, [PAWN_pronoun] sought [PAWN_possessive] next joywire fix by any means possible. -->
     <desc>无论[PAWN_nameDef]想要什么，[PAWN_possessive]有钱的父母都会买给他。在发现乐丝芯片后，[PAWN_pronoun]开始沉迷。[PAWN_possessive]父母终于意识到发生了什么后，他们将[PAWN_objective]的芯片摘除。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]变得对任何事都漠不关心并非常暴躁，为了得到乐丝芯片，可以不择手段。</desc>
   </JoywireAddict76>
-
+  
   <JoywireArtist8>
     <!-- EN: joywire artist -->
     <title>乐丝程序开发员</title>
@@ -3196,11 +3190,11 @@
   </JoywireArtist8>
   
   <JungleKid31>
-   <!-- EN: jungle kid -->
+    <!-- EN: jungle kid -->
     <title>丛林里的孩子</title>
     <!-- EN: jungle kid -->
     <titleShort>丛林小子</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was abandoned as a newborn, and grew up among the animals of [PAWN_possessive] homeworld’s dense jungles.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was a teenager, a traveling doctor found [PAWN_objective] injured near a road, hissing and meowing. He rescued [PAWN_objective] and took [PAWN_objective] on as an apprentice. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was abandoned as a newborn, and grew up among the animals of [PAWN_possessive] homeworld’s dense jungles.\n\nWhen [PAWN_pronoun] was a teenager, a traveling doctor found [PAWN_objective] injured near a road, hissing and meowing. [PAWN_pronoun] rescued [PAWN_objective] and took [PAWN_objective] on as an apprentice. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]刚出生就被遗弃，童年与动物们相伴，丛林就是[PAWN_possessive]家。\n\n十几岁的时候，有一天[PAWN_pronoun]受伤倒在路边，发出动物般的哀叫。一位旅行的医生发现并救了[PAWN_objective]，并把[PAWN_objective]收为学徒。</desc>
   </JungleKid31>
   
@@ -3209,16 +3203,16 @@
     <title>垃圾场的修理工</title>
     <!-- EN: mechanic -->
     <titleShort>技工</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Left for dead at a young age, [PAWN_nameDef] was rescued by an old man who ran an urbworld junkyard. The old man forced [PAWN_nameDef] to do dangerous, demanding work. \n\n[PAWN_nameDef] became very familiar with machines, but [PAWN_pronoun] grew up with almost no other experiences. -->
+    <!-- EN: Left for dead at a young age, [PAWN_nameDef] was rescued by an old man who ran an urbworld junkyard. The old man forced [PAWN_nameDef] to do dangerous, demanding work.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] became very familiar with machines, but [PAWN_pronoun] grew up with almost no other experiences. -->
     <desc>年轻的时候，奄奄一息的[PAWN_nameDef]被下层世界一位经营垃圾场的老人救活。老人强迫[PAWN_objective]从事危险而又吃力的工作。 \n\n这样的经历使[PAWN_nameDef]对机械非常熟悉，但几乎没有其他方面的经验。</desc>
- </JunkyardMechanic51>
+  </JunkyardMechanic51>
   
   <KidScientist53>
     <!-- EN: kid scientist -->
     <title>儿童科学家</title>
     <!-- EN: scientist -->
     <titleShort>科学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born into an influential family, [PAWN_nameDef] received the best education money could buy. Her intellect soon proved to be superior to many. However, her lack of empathy quickly put her at odds with her teachers and her parents. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born into an influential family, [PAWN_nameDef] received the best education money could buy. [PAWN_possessive] intellect soon proved to be superior to many. However, [PAWN_possessive] lack of empathy quickly put [PAWN_objective] at odds with [PAWN_possessive] teachers and [PAWN_possessive] parents. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生于一个极具影响力的家庭中，[PAWN_pronoun]接受了通过金钱所能获得的最好的教育。[PAWN_possessive]智力被证明在各方面都非常卓越。缺乏同情心使[PAWN_pronoun]很快变得与教师们和父母格格不入。</desc>
   </KidScientist53>
   
@@ -3227,25 +3221,25 @@
     <title>嗜血的杀手</title>
     <!-- EN: killer -->
     <titleShort>杀手</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a bloodlusting child. Villagers thought her the product of a snake demon and human coupling.\n\nAfter watching how her human father betrayed and murdered her mother, she longed to see how many more humans she could get to fall into her hands. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a bloodlusting child. Villagers thought [PAWN_objective] the product of a snake demon and human coupling.\n\nAfter watching how [PAWN_possessive] human father betrayed and murdered [PAWN_possessive] mother, [PAWN_pronoun] longed to see how many more humans [PAWN_pronoun] could get to fall into [PAWN_possessive] hands. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]从小就是个嗜血的小孩, 村民们认为[PAWN_pronoun]是人和蛇精杂交的产物。\n\n目睹了父亲将母亲杀害之后, [PAWN_pronoun]想看到更多人死在自己手中。</desc>
   </Killer41>
   
   <KingOfPirates25>
-   <!-- EN: king of pirates -->
+    <!-- EN: king of pirates -->
     <title>海盗之王</title>
     <!-- EN: pirate -->
     <titleShort>海贼王</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: As a self-proclaimed king of pirates, [PAWN_nameDef] was ruthless. Manipulative in nature, [PAWN_pronoun] was not afraid to sacrifice the people around [PAWN_objective] in service of [PAWN_possessive] own goals. [PAWN_pronoun] was a good shot, but even more skilled with a sword, and [PAWN_pronoun] loved the adrenaline rush of close combat. -->
     <desc>作为一个自称为海盗之王的人，[PAWN_nameDef]冷酷无情。[PAWN_pronoun]予取予求，为达目的不惜牺牲周围的人。[PAWN_pronoun]是个不错的射手，但更擅长用剑，[PAWN_pronoun]喜欢近身搏命刺激肾上腺素的感觉。</desc>
- </KingOfPirates25>
+  </KingOfPirates25>
   
   <LabGrownChild22>
-   <!-- EN: lab-grown child -->
+    <!-- EN: lab-grown child -->
     <title>实验室出生的小孩</title>
     <!-- EN: lab-grown -->
     <titleShort>实验室小孩</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born in a laboratory as part of a altruistic but failed attempt to create a new class of human.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] childhood was filled with books and one-on-one tutoring. He was awkward, shy, and naive to the true nature of humanity. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was born in a laboratory as part of a altruistic but failed attempt to create a new class of human.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] childhood was filled with books and one-on-one tutoring. [PAWN_pronoun] was awkward, shy, and naive to the true nature of humanity. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]生在一个失败的创造新人类的实验中。\n\n[PAWN_possessive]童年全是书和一对一辅导。他奇怪, 害羞, 不了解人类阴暗的一面。</desc>
   </LabGrownChild22>
   
@@ -3254,9 +3248,9 @@
     <title>孤儿营孤儿</title>
     <!-- EN: orphan -->
     <titleShort>孤儿</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] lost her parents in an industrial accident and grew up in an orphans' labor camp. The camp overseers worked their charges mercilessly - but at least she was clothed and fed. -->
+    <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] lost [PAWN_possessive] parents in an industrial accident and grew up in an orphans' labor camp. The camp overseers worked their charges mercilessly - but at least [PAWN_pronoun] was clothed and fed. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在一次工伤事故中失去了双亲，在孤儿营里长大。营地收费监督员的工作让他至少有衣物和食物。</desc>
- </LaborCampOrphan91>
+  </LaborCampOrphan91>
   
   <Landworker98>
     <!-- EN: landworker -->
@@ -3267,7 +3261,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在[PAWN_possessive]所效忠的皇室内担任土地管理一职。[PAWN_pronoun]负责管理皇室的土地和其上的资源，包括农产和矿物。\n\n虽然[PAWN_pronoun]不会亲自去操作这些生产设备, 但管理这些资源产业同样需要大量的农业和矿业经验。</desc>
   </Landworker98>
   
-<LanguageAnalyst27>
+  <LanguageAnalyst27>
     <!-- EN: language analyst -->
     <title>语言分析师</title>
     <!-- EN: linguist -->
@@ -3275,7 +3269,7 @@
     <!-- EN: After war broke out on [PAWN_possessive] homeworld, [PAWN_nameDef] was conscripted as a linguist. [PAWN_pronoun] spent [PAWN_possessive] days in a space station, decoding enemy communications and tending the hydroponic crops.\n\nAfter a meteorite damaged the station, [PAWN_pronoun] was forced to enter cryptosleep and hope for rescue. -->
     <desc>母星的战争爆发后，[PAWN_nameDef]应征入伍并成为一名语言学家。[PAWN_pronoun]的日子都在空间站度过。在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]负责破译敌人的通讯信息和照料水培作物。\n\n后来空间站因为陨石撞击而受损，[PAWN_pronoun]被迫进入休眠仓等待救援。</desc>
   </LanguageAnalyst27>
-
+  
   <LazyProgrammer3>
     <!-- EN: lazy programmer -->
     <title>懒惰的程序员</title>
@@ -3313,9 +3307,9 @@
   </Logger16>
   
   <LogicalChild2>
-      <!-- EN: Logical child -->
+    <!-- EN: logical child -->
     <title>擅长逻辑思维的孩子</title>
-    <!-- EN: Logic kid -->
+    <!-- EN: logic kid -->
     <titleShort>逻辑儿童</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_pronoun] preferred logical activities like computers and was completely useless at art.\n\nBeing awkward in social situations, [PAWN_possessive] friends were few but close. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]喜欢需要逻辑思维的活动，比如使用计算机，同时完全没有艺术天分。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]不善于社交，朋友很少，但都非常亲密。</desc>
@@ -3349,11 +3343,11 @@
   </LoreKeeper51>
   
   <LostMarine81>
-     <!-- EN: lost marine -->
+    <!-- EN: lost marine -->
     <title>失踪的陆战队长官</title>
     <!-- EN: traitor -->
     <titleShort>叛国者</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Shortly after being promoted to a respected position in his planet's military, [PAWN_nameDef] disappeared without a trace.\n\nLater, he reappeared at the head of his own military force. No one knows why he became who he was. -->
+    <!-- EN: Shortly after being promoted to a respected position in [PAWN_possessive] planet's military, [PAWN_nameDef] disappeared without a trace.\n\nLater, [PAWN_pronoun] reappeared at the head of [PAWN_possessive] own military force. No one knows why [PAWN_pronoun] became who [PAWN_pronoun] was. -->
     <desc>在其所在星球军队中被提拔到高位后不久，[PAWN_nameDef]就消失得无影无踪。\n\n后来，[PAWN_pronoun]再次出现，变成了拥有私人军事力量的首领。没有人知道[PAWN_pronoun]为什么要这样做。</desc>
   </LostMarine81>
   
@@ -3367,7 +3361,7 @@
   </LostSoldier13>
   
   <LowWageWorker7>
-     <!-- EN: Low-wage worker -->
+    <!-- EN: low-wage worker -->
     <title>低薪工人</title>
     <!-- EN: grunt -->
     <titleShort>工人</titleShort>
@@ -3384,7 +3378,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾在伟大的陛下身边担任禁卫一职，相比其他人员，[PAWN_pronoun]感到更多责任感，并且愿意穷其一生来承担这份重任</desc>
   </LoyalJanissary59>
   
- <MachineCollector55>
+  <MachineCollector55>
     <!-- EN: machine collector -->
     <title>机器收藏家</title>
     <!-- EN: collector -->
@@ -3401,8 +3395,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was adept at dealing with mechanical problems, as long as the problem didn't involve the kitchen.\n\nAfter a life spent around dangerous machinery and flammable chemicals, [PAWN_pronoun] learned how to patch [PAWN_objective]self up pretty well. Despite the pain, [PAWN_pronoun] never learned to dislike fire. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]善于处理机械问题，只要问题不涉及厨房。\n\n在危险的机械和易燃化学品之中生活，他学会如何使自己过好。 尽管痛苦，他从来没有学会不喜欢火。</desc>
   </MachineFixer31>
-  <!-- part 3 end now follow part 4-->
-     
+  
   <Machinist56>
     <!-- EN: machinist -->
     <title>机械师</title>
@@ -3505,7 +3498,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was in a planetary marine cadet program.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was kicked out for shooting an officer. It was never established whether this was an accident. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾经在行星陆战队预备役中训练。\n\n因为击中了教官而被开除。无从确认这是否是一起事故。</desc>
   </MarineCadet73>
-
+  
   <MasterChef48>
     <!-- EN: master chef -->
     <title>被陷害的顶级厨师</title>
@@ -3532,7 +3525,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] did mathematical research at a university.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] spent much of [PAWN_possessive] spare time immersed in shooting simulations, though [PAWN_pronoun] was frequently ridiculed by other players for [PAWN_possessive] terrible aim. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]曾经在一所大学中从事数学研究。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]将大部分业余时间花费在仿真射击游戏中，虽然[PAWN_pronoun]经常因为瞄准水平非常糟糕而被其他玩家嘲笑。</desc>
   </Mathematician6>
-
+  
   <MechanicsEngineer64>
     <!-- EN: mechanics engineer -->
     <title>机械工程师</title>
@@ -3541,7 +3534,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] loved solving problems and, with [PAWN_possessive] steady hands and a reputation for quality work, earned a job as a mechanical engineer. [PAWN_pronoun] built and redesigned devices of all shapes and sizes.\n\nEventually, [PAWN_pronoun] was able to pick and choose [PAWN_possessive] corporate clients. [PAWN_pronoun] made several wealthy friends, as well as a few powerful enemies. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]喜欢解决问题，[PAWN_pronoun]凭着良好的声誉和稳健的双手找到了一份机械工程师的工作。[PAWN_pronoun]重新设计和制造了各种大小的设备。\n\n慢慢的，[PAWN_pronoun]已经达到了可以选择自己客户的境界。[PAWN_pronoun]交了富有的朋友，也和有权的人结了仇。</desc>
   </MechanicsEngineer64>
-
+  
   <MechanoidHacker93>
     <!-- EN: mechanoid hacker -->
     <title>机械生命体黑客</title>
@@ -3550,7 +3543,7 @@
     <!-- EN: The only son of a well respected mechanoid inventor, [PAWN_nameDef] had access to the materials to subvert and modify [PAWN_possessive] father's creations.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] used drugs to increase [PAWN_possessive] productivity. Unfortunately, the side-effects included persistent delusions of being mechanized, which limited [PAWN_possessive] social life. -->
     <desc>一个机械生命体工程师的独子, [PAWN_nameDef]有机会修改父亲的作品。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]用药来提高[PAWN_possessive]效率，但是过度用药导致他以为自己是一个机械生命体。</desc>
   </MechanoidHacker93>
-
+  
   <MechanoidNerd10>
     <!-- EN: mechanoid nerd -->
     <title>人型机器迷</title>
@@ -3604,7 +3597,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Born into a long line of doctors, [PAWN_nameDef] was tutored in all fields of medicine, from herbal ointments to the modern synthetic drugs. [PAWN_pronoun] also picked up a healthy disdain for lower class work. -->
     <desc>由于出生医生世家，[PAWN_nameDef]学习了各种医学领域的技能，从草药软膏到现代合成药物的制作。[PAWN_pronoun]同时蔑视低级的工作。</desc>
   </MedicalStudent38>
-
+  
   <MedicalStudent96>
     <!-- EN: medical student -->
     <title>医科学生</title>
@@ -3631,7 +3624,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] worked as a doctor on a medieval planet. [PAWN_pronoun] firmly believes that most ailments can be cured with a little bloodletting.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was also a master anaesthetist, developing a specialty technique that involved a heavy blow to the head. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是中世纪星球上的一名医生。[PAWN_pronoun]坚定地认为大多数小病小痛都可以用一个小小的放血疗法来治愈。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]也是一名麻醉专家，开发出一种特殊的麻醉方式——给脑袋狠狠一击。 </desc>
   </MedievalDoctor40>
-
+  
   <MedievalFarmOaf58>
     <!-- EN: medieval farm oaf -->
     <title>中世纪农奴</title>
@@ -3680,7 +3673,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a traveling entertainer on a medieval world.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] could always be found telling stories or singing songs, and is capable of protecting [PAWN_objective]self from the dangers of the road. However, [PAWN_pronoun] was always conspicuously absent whenever there was hard labour to be done. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是位封建星球上的旅行艺人。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]总是能够找到故事或歌唱的题材，并有能力在危险的旅途中保护自己。然而每当有重活要干时，[PAWN_pronoun]总是会缺席。</desc>
   </MedievalMinstrel95>
-
+  
   <MedievalPlower14>
     <!-- EN: medieval plower -->
     <title>中世纪农民</title>
@@ -3713,7 +3706,7 @@
     <title>逃跑的中世纪奴隶</title>
     <!-- EN: slave -->
     <titleShort>前奴隶</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Born into slavery, Soren never knew his parents. He eventually escaped from his masters and boarded a military cargo ship, where he was pressed into military service. -->
+    <!-- EN: Born into slavery, [PAWN_nameDef] never knew [PAWN_possessive] parents. [PAWN_pronoun] eventually escaped from [PAWN_possessive] masters and boarded a military cargo ship, where [PAWN_pronoun] was pressed into military service. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]一出生就是奴隶和孤儿，[PAWN_pronoun]从来不知道父母是谁。最终，[PAWN_pronoun]从奴隶主那里成功逃脱，登上一艘军用星际运输舰。[PAWN_pronoun]被收编入军队服役。</desc>
   </MedievalSlave50>
   
@@ -4040,7 +4033,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] managed to secure an important position in the government of a minor glitterworld. [PAWN_pronoun] got used to the opulence, while attempting to keep [PAWN_possessive] citizens content. [PAWN_pronoun] had ample time for pleasure and indulgence – though [PAWN_pronoun] never forgot how to do hard work. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]成功在一个小型闪耀世界的政府中确保了关键职位。[PAWN_pronoun]习惯富裕的生活，并试图让公民们满意。[PAWN_pronoun]有充足的时间享受财富和生活——虽然[PAWN_pronoun]从没忘记如何做基本的工作。</desc>
   </Minister88>
-
+  
   <Missionary99>
     <!-- EN: missionary -->
     <title>传教士</title>
@@ -4067,7 +4060,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] modelled clothes and jewellery for advertisers, and was also used as a physical blueprint for characters in virtual reality simulations. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名服装和珠宝广告的模特，还是虚拟现实中某个人物的原型。</desc>
   </Model99>
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+  
   <MuffaloResearcher67>
     <!-- EN: muffalo researcher -->
     <title>野牦牛研究员</title>
@@ -4112,7 +4105,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was greatly affected by a traumatic event early in [PAWN_possessive] life. For many years [PAWN_pronoun] refused to speak to people, preferring instead to play with [PAWN_possessive] household's numerous pets. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]深受幼年时所受的创伤影响。多年以来[PAWN_pronoun]拒绝与人说话，宁愿与家中无数的宠物为伴。</desc>
   </Mute34>
-
+  
   <MutinousCaptain52>
     <!-- EN: mutinous captain -->
     <title>叛变的船长</title>
@@ -4193,7 +4186,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was fascinated with combat. [PAWN_possessive] parents traveled often, so [PAWN_pronoun] was able to sample many different fighting styles, from 76th-wave jujutsu to the infamous 'urbworld-style' karate.\n\nA polite child, most fighters accepted [PAWN_possessive] requests for training - but moving around often without finishing a tutelage made [PAWN_objective] lazy. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]很喜欢格斗术。由于父母经常外出远行，[PAWN_pronoun]也因此学到了不同风格的格斗术，从七十六式柔道到臭名昭彰的都市空手道。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]是一个非常有礼貌的小孩，大多数格斗家都会接受请求，对[PAWN_pronoun]进行训练——但缺乏监护的乱逛让[PAWN_objective]变得懒惰，不愿做简单的劳动。</desc>
   </NewAgeDuelist27>
-
+  
   <NinjaAssassin31>
     <!-- EN: ninja assassin -->
     <title>讨厌植物的忍者</title>
@@ -4265,7 +4258,7 @@
     <!-- EN: When the government declared that it would strengthen its military defenses, [PAWN_nameDef] was drafted and trained.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was stationed on an orbital base, manning the defense systems and, in dire situations, descending in a dropship to the surface. -->
     <desc>政府宣布加强军事防御后，[PAWN_nameDef]被征召入军队训练。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]驻扎在轨道基地，操纵防御系统，并在极端情况下通过登陆舰空投到地面。</desc>
   </OrbitalReservist22>
-
+  
   <OrganFarm67>
     <!-- EN: organ farm -->
     <title>器官牲畜</title>
@@ -4366,7 +4359,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s job was to respond rapidly to medical emergencies. [PAWN_pronoun] is used to dealing with severe injuries with only limited medical supplies.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] treated so many gunshot wounds over the years that even seeing a gun made [PAWN_objective] uncomfortable. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的工作是快速响应紧急抢救。[PAWN_pronoun]经常需要在仅有有限的医疗物资的情况下处理严重的伤情。\n\n多年以来[PAWN_pronoun]处理了不计其数的枪伤，以至于如今一看到枪就会感到不适。</desc>
   </Paramedic45>
-
+  
   <ParamilitaryAgent11>
     <!-- EN: paramilitary agent -->
     <title>军事间谍</title>
@@ -4393,7 +4386,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent most of [PAWN_possessive] childhood tending the animals [PAWN_pronoun] had bought or rescued.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] saw beauty in natural things more than fabricated objects, and chose the company of [PAWN_possessive] animals over that of [PAWN_possessive] peers. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]童年的大部分时间都在照料买来或是救助的动物。\n\n相对于制造品，[PAWN_pronoun]从自然生物中体会到更多的美丽。于是[PAWN_pronoun]选择和[PAWN_possessive]动物在一起，而不是同类。</desc>
   </PetKeeper7>
-
+  
   <Philosopher82>
     <!-- EN: philosopher -->
     <title>哲学家</title>
@@ -4402,7 +4395,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a student on a glitterworld. [PAWN_pronoun] had a hard time in school, since the other kids thought [PAWN_objective] rather strange.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] always maintained a distance from these events, being continuously surprised by the many interesting and awkward ways life can go. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是闪耀世界的一名学生。[PAWN_pronoun]有一段艰难的校园时间，因为其他孩子觉得[PAWN_objective]很古怪。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]和这些事件保持一贯距离，不断地对许多有趣的事情和生活的艰难感到惊奇。</desc>
   </Philosopher82>
-
+  
   <Philosopher97>
     <!-- EN: philosopher -->
     <title>善于思考的人</title>
@@ -4537,7 +4530,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Born on a world wracked by plague, both of [PAWN_nameDef]'s parents were doctors. \n\n[PAWN_nameDef] was raised in reverse-quarantine, under the Hippocratic oath. [PAWN_pronoun] experienced little social interaction. However, [PAWN_pronoun] gained a lot of medical experience assisting in treatments. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生于被瘟疫摧毁的世界，[PAWN_possessive]父母都是医生。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]在逆转隔离区长大，进行了希波克拉底宣誓（医生保证遵守医生职业道德的誓言）。[PAWN_pronoun]在社交方面的经验很少，但在协助治疗中获得了大量医疗方面的经验。</desc>
   </PlagueChild44>
-
+  
   <PlagueDoctor31>
     <!-- EN: plague doctor -->
     <title>瘟疫医生</title>
@@ -4564,7 +4557,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] watched as a mysterious plague spread through [PAWN_possessive] town, killing [PAWN_possessive] family and friends.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] learned some medicine from watching the plague doctors, but was mentally scarred by the ordeal. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]见证了一场在城镇中急剧扩散的诡异的瘟疫。这场可怕的瘟疫带走了[PAWN_possessive]亲朋好友。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]从鸟嘴医生那里学到了一些医药知识，但苦难的经历长久地留在[PAWN_possessive]心中，挥之不去。</desc>
   </PlagueSurvivor39>
-
+  
   <PlanetaryDiplomat7>
     <!-- EN: planetary diplomat -->
     <title>星际外交官</title>
@@ -4694,7 +4687,7 @@
     <!-- EN: As a private eye, sharp wits and a silver tongue were [PAWN_nameDef]'s greatest tools. [PAWN_pronoun] often spent [PAWN_possessive] nights working cases that ranged from uncovering affairs and learning trade secrets to solving murder cases and infiltrating criminal organizations. There wasn't a case [PAWN_pronoun] wouldn't accept for the right price. -->
     <desc>作为一名私家侦探，聪明的头脑和如簧的巧舌就是[PAWN_nameDef]的武器。[PAWN_pronoun]夜晚的时间基本花在处理案件上，从揭露外遇和调查商业机密到解决谋杀案和渗透犯罪组织。只要有合适的价格，没有什么案子是[PAWN_pronoun]不接手的。</desc>
   </PrivateDetective66>
-
+  
   <PrivilegedChild86>
     <!-- EN: privileged child -->
     <title>特权子弟</title>
@@ -4757,7 +4750,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] used [PAWN_possessive] talent for prosthetics to 'advance' others by replacing limbs and organs with metal and electronics. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]运用[PAWN_pronoun]在假肢方面的才能，使用以金属和电子器件制作的替代肢体和器官来使他人变得更“先进”。</desc>
   </ProstheticSurgeon0>
-
+  
   <ProstituteIdol28>
     <!-- EN: prostitute idol -->
     <title>娼妓偶像</title>
@@ -4766,7 +4759,7 @@
     <!-- EN: After [PAWN_possessive] father was deposed, [PAWN_nameDef]'s beauty led [PAWN_objective] to be forced into pornography to survive.\n\nOver years of difficult treatments, [PAWN_possessive] body was remodeled to appear temporarily ageless. Sold to an orbital brothel, [PAWN_pronoun] became popular, with a steady stream of clients from all over the planet. -->
     <desc>父亲被辞退后，为了维持生计，[PAWN_nameDef]凭借自身的美丽进入色情行业。\n\n经过多年高难度的医学改造，[PAWN_possessive]身体变得暂时不会衰老，之后被卖到一家轨道妓院。在那里，[PAWN_pronoun]受到热捧，来自全球各地的客户络绎不绝。</desc>
   </ProstituteIdol28>
-
+  
   <PsychiatricPatient94>
     <!-- EN: psychiatric patient -->
     <title>精神病患者</title>
@@ -4793,7 +4786,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent his childhood selling knockoff cigarettes to 15-year-olds. The cigarettes were often full of grass clippings. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的童年在“向15岁少年兜售塞满草屑的香烟”中度过。</desc>
   </Punk30>
-
+  
   <PyroAssistant82>
     <!-- EN: pyro assistant -->
     <title>喜欢纵火的助理</title>
@@ -4802,7 +4795,7 @@
     <!-- EN: On an industrial world, [PAWN_nameDef] learned early that if [PAWN_pronoun] wanted to eat, [PAWN_pronoun] had to work. So work [PAWN_pronoun] did. Kids fit in places adults can't, and where [PAWN_pronoun] was from, the safety laws were quite flexible.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was always a bit of a pyromaniac, and was banned from the kitchen after an unfortunate incident. -->
     <desc>在工业世界长大，[PAWN_nameDef]明白想要活下去就得工作。于是[PAWN_pronoun]有了工作，虽然都是少儿不宜类，未成年保护法给[PAWN_pronoun]带来很多便利。\n[PAWN_nameDef]是个纵火狂。在一场事故后，[PAWN_pronoun]被禁止进入厨房。</desc>
   </PyroAssistant82>
-
+  
   <Pyromaniac18>
     <!-- EN: pyromaniac -->
     <title>纵火狂患者</title>
@@ -4811,7 +4804,7 @@
     <!-- EN: From an early age, [PAWN_nameDef] had an unhealthy fascination with fire. [PAWN_pronoun] would set refuse heaps ablaze and become so entranced by the flames [PAWN_pronoun] would absent-mindedly burn [PAWN_objective]self.\n\nOne day while playing with matches, [PAWN_pronoun] carelessly burned down [PAWN_possessive] home. -->
     <desc>从小时候起，[PAWN_nameDef]就对火有一种病态的着迷。[PAWN_pronoun]会把垃圾堆点燃，然后痴痴地看着火焰，直到自己被烧伤。\n\n一天玩火柴的时候，[PAWN_pronoun]不小心把[PAWN_possessive]家给烧了。</desc>
   </Pyromaniac18>
-
+  
   <QuietNerd97>
     <!-- EN: quiet nerd -->
     <title>安静的书呆子</title>
@@ -4840,13 +4833,14 @@
   </Rancher43>
   
   <Ranger6>
+    <!-- EN: ranger -->
     <title>独行的护林人</title>
     <!-- EN: ranger -->
     <titleShort>护林人</titleShort>
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] lived alone, deep in a forest. [PAWN_pronoun] protected the wildlife against poachers, and learned to satisfy [PAWN_possessive] own material needs without outside help. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]一个人住在森林深处。[PAWN_pronoun]保护野生动物免受偷猎者袭击，并学会了在没有外界帮助的情况下满足自己的物质需要。</desc>
   </Ranger6>
-
+  
   <RangerChild57>
     <!-- EN: ranger child -->
     <title>丛林中的孩子</title>
@@ -4945,7 +4939,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was part of an revered order of martial artists, infamous both for their skill in combat and for their practice of refusing to treat their wounded.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] travelled [PAWN_possessive] homeworld, judging the young people [PAWN_pronoun] met to determine if they might be suitable for training. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是令人畏惧的武术家团体的一份子，这些人以其惊人的战斗力和不死不休的作风而恶名昭彰。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]在[PAWN_possessive]母星四处旅行，审视[PAWN_pronoun]遇到的年轻人是否适合接收训练。</desc>
   </Recruiter4>
-
+  
   <ReEducatedYouth23>
     <!-- EN: re-educated youth -->
     <title>再教育青年</title>
@@ -5008,8 +5002,7 @@
     <!-- EN: After leaving [PAWN_possessive] parents' vineyard, [PAWN_nameDef] traveled across much of known space, and learned many skills along the way.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] spent most of [PAWN_possessive] time researching and interacting with reptile species. [PAWN_pronoun] was renowned for making several breakthroughs, and for discovering the "Thorny Devil". -->
     <desc>离开父母的葡萄园后，[PAWN_nameDef]在宇宙中旅行，走遍了大部分已知的空间，沿途学到了许多技能。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]花费大量时间研究爬行动物物种，在学术领域取得多项突破，并以发现“棘魔蜥”而闻名。</desc>
   </ReptileResearcher37>
-  <!-- PART 5 ORIGINAL 5000 -> 5999 -->
-    
+  
   <RichBoy9>
     <!-- EN: rich boy -->
     <title>有钱人的孩子</title>
@@ -5042,7 +5035,7 @@
     <title>机器人学家</title>
     <!-- EN: roboticist -->
     <titleShort>机器人学家</titleShort>
-    <!-- EN: Sailors often died on the dangerous waters of [PAWN_nameDef]'s ocean planet. [PAWN_pronoun] created robots to replace them.\n\nOver time, he collected a small crew of robots to do his bidding. [PAWN_pronoun] became proficient at mechanics and engineering, but lost the taste for manual labor. -->
+    <!-- EN: Sailors often died on the dangerous waters of [PAWN_nameDef]'s ocean planet. [PAWN_pronoun] created robots to replace them.\n\nOver time, [PAWN_pronoun] collected a small crew of robots to do [PAWN_possessive] bidding. [PAWN_pronoun] became proficient at mechanics and engineering, but lost the taste for manual labor. -->
     <desc>由于水手在海洋行星的损失率很大，[PAWN_nameDef]制造了机器人来替代他们。\n\n久而久之, [PAWN_pronoun]攒了足够的机器人。[PAWN_pronoun]变得精于工程, 但不再愿意进行手工劳动。</desc>
   </Roboticist1>
   
@@ -5144,7 +5137,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] spent [PAWN_possessive] childhood escaping grunt work to go digging through wrecks and ruins for treasures. [PAWN_possessive] natural curiosity got [PAWN_objective] into a lot of trouble, but it also yielded many interesting finds. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在小时候为了逃避繁重的工作，而去各种废墟和残骸中挖掘寻宝。[PAWN_possessive]好奇天性给[PAWN_objective]惹来了许多麻烦，但也有很多有趣的发现。</desc>
   </Scavenger22>
-
+  
   <Scavenger62>
     <!-- EN: scavenger -->
     <title>末世拾荒者</title>
@@ -5274,7 +5267,7 @@
     <!-- EN: When the monsters of fire came from the sky, [PAWN_nameDef] was called upon by [PAWN_possessive] tribe to guide them into battle.\n\n[PAWN_nameDef] made use of medicines and rituals to inspire and lead the warriors of many tribes against the invaders. The pirates were forced to retreat without capturing a single slave. -->
     <desc>当那些带着火焰的盒子从天而降，[PAWN_nameDef]被[PAWN_possessive]部落召唤，加入战争。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]用草药和仪式激励部落的勇士们团结起来应对入侵。最终，海盗们落败而逃，毫无收获。</desc>
   </ShamanOfShadows47>
-
+  
   <ShelterChild50>
     <!-- EN: shelter child -->
     <title>庇护所里的孩子</title>
@@ -5283,7 +5276,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up in a shelter deep beneath a toxic world. [PAWN_pronoun] received a comprehensive education, but had no opportunity to do physical labour. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在剧毒星球上一个深处地底的庇护所中长大。[PAWN_pronoun]接受了非常全面的教育，但从来没有机会进行体力劳动。</desc>
   </ShelterChild50>
-
+  
   <Sheriff52>
     <!-- EN: sheriff -->
     <title>城镇治安官</title>
@@ -5453,7 +5446,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef]'s family never fit in. They were oddballs who couldn't conform to their regimented society. Because of this, they were forced into cryptosleep and sent to different rimworlds, never to see each other again. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的家人无法适应社会。他们是无法遵循社会条条框框的怪人。正因如此，他们被强制送入休眠舱并被送到不同的边缘世界，永远无法见面。</desc>
   </SocialPariah3>
-
+  
   <SoftwareDeveloper84>
     <!-- EN: software developer -->
     <title>软件开发者</title>
@@ -5462,7 +5455,7 @@
     <!-- EN: After [PAWN_pronoun] gained the ability to use automation to remove tedium, [PAWN_nameDef] could no longer tolerate traditional education and employment. -->
     <desc>在获得自动消除无趣状态的能力后，[PAWN_nameDef]无法继续容忍传统的教育和就业。</desc>
   </SoftwareDeveloper84>
-
+  
   <SoldierExperiment50>
     <!-- EN: soldier experiment -->
     <title>士兵实验体</title>
@@ -5606,7 +5599,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was recruited into the security forces of an off-planet corporation.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] defended their ships against pirates and engaged in private space warfare contracts. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]被一个边缘行星企业招入，成为安全部队一员。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]履行签署的合同，保卫公司的飞船，打击海盗并从事私人太空战。</desc>
   </SpaceMarine51>
-
+  
   <SpaceMarine9>
     <!-- EN: space marine -->
     <title>精锐星际陆战队员</title>
@@ -5615,7 +5608,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a member of an elite imperial space warrior unit. Subjected to intense training, [PAWN_pronoun] developed remarkable combat skills.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] unit's quasi-religious ceremonies and beliefs helped [PAWN_objective] stay more-or-less sane through the horrors of the war. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是精英帝国太空战士部队的一员。通过高强度的训练，[PAWN_pronoun]获得了非凡的战斗技巧。\n\n[PAWN_possessive]部队的准宗教仪式和信仰能够帮助[PAWN_objective]在战争的恐怖中或多或少地保持理智。</desc>
   </SpaceMarine9>
-
+  
   <SpaceMarine94>
     <!-- EN: space marine -->
     <title>帝国星际陆战队员</title>
@@ -5624,7 +5617,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was a warrior in an Imperial navy.\n\n[PAWN_possessive] job was to punch into enemy starships, gun down the crew, and capture the ship intact. And [PAWN_pronoun] was good at it. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是帝国海军的一名战士。[PAWN_possessive]任务是攻入敌人星舰，射杀所有乘员，然后完整地捕获舰船。[PAWN_pronoun]是这方面的专家。</desc>
   </SpaceMarine94>
-
+  
   <SpaceMarineMedic10>
     <!-- EN: space marine medic -->
     <title>星际陆战队医生</title>
@@ -5651,7 +5644,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] served several tours as a doctor on one of the few warships defending [PAWN_possessive] homeworld. [PAWN_pronoun] learned combat skills while fighting occasional pirate boarding parties, and became an expert at treating gruesome combat wounds. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]多次在一个拥有少数战舰的巡逻队中以医生的身份服役来保护[PAWN_possessive]家园。[PAWN_pronoun]藉由偶尔参与入侵海盗船舰的机会，学到了战斗技巧。[PAWN_pronoun]成为了处理严重作战创伤的专家。</desc>
   </SpaceNavyDoctor72>
-
+  
   <SpaceNavyTech12>
     <!-- EN: space navy tech -->
     <title>太空海军技术官员</title>
@@ -5660,7 +5653,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was in a space navy for the the most powerful planet in the local star group. [PAWN_pronoun] developed skills in maintenance, electronic systems, radar and imaging, and logistics management.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] served with pride and patriotic love for [PAWN_possessive] planet. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]在本地星群中最强大的行星直属的太空海军服役。[PAWN_pronoun]培养了设备维护、垫子系统、雷达和成像，以及物流管理方面的技能。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]热爱[PAWN_possessive]星球，并为能够贡献自己的力量而感到自豪。</desc>
   </SpaceNavyTech12>
-
+  
   <SpaceNerd97>
     <!-- EN: space nerd -->
     <title>太空呆子</title>
@@ -5669,7 +5662,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] just wanted to be cool like [PAWN_possessive] favorite superhero All-Might. [PAWN_pronoun] dreamed of going on space adventures and exploring new worlds. [PAWN_pronoun] also dreamed of chocolate... space chocolate. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]梦想参加太空探险，探索新世界，当然年幼的[PAWN_pronoun]这么做只是希望自己能像[PAWN_pronoun]最喜欢的超级英雄——欧尔麦特一样酷。 [PAWN_pronoun]也梦想巧克力……太空巧克力。</desc>
   </SpaceNerd97>
-
+  
   <SpacePirate55>
     <!-- EN: space pirate -->
     <title>星际海盗</title>
@@ -5813,7 +5806,7 @@
     <!-- EN: Born in a rich family, [PAWN_nameDef] was given everything, and never developed basic work ethic or the foundations of a non-dependent personality.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] was expected to become one of the best doctors in the world. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]出生在一个富裕的家庭，家人都对[PAWN_pronoun]十分溺爱，完全没有培养出基本的职业道德和独立的人格。\n\n[PAWN_pronoun]被期望成为世界上最好的医生。</desc>
   </SpoiledBrat59>
-
+  
   <SpoiledChild33>
     <!-- EN: spoiled child -->
     <title>被宠坏的孩子</title>
@@ -5822,7 +5815,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] grew up the child of an industrious colony manager. In this position, most manual and dangerous tasks were forbidden by [PAWN_possessive] parents, but on the rim everyone has to dirty their hands. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]的双亲都是殖民地的管理阶层，工作努力。[PAWN_possessive]父母禁止[PAWN_pronoun]进行任何体力劳动或危险的工作——那些在边缘世界每个人都会做的事情。</desc>
   </SpoiledChild33>
-
+  
   <SpoiledChild80>
     <!-- EN: spoiled child -->
     <title>被宠坏的动物迷</title>
@@ -5831,7 +5824,7 @@
     <!-- EN: [PAWN_nameDef] was the child of an industrious space engineer. [PAWN_possessive] parents forbade most manual and dangerous tasks, so [PAWN_pronoun] learned art and music instead.\n\n[PAWN_pronoun] loved animals, but [PAWN_possessive] parents never let [PAWN_objective] have a pet - though [PAWN_pronoun] played with other people's pets a lot. -->
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]是一名忙碌的太空工程师的孩子。[PAWN_possessive]父母基本不让[PAWN_objective]做体力劳动和危险的任务，取而代之的是学习绘画和音乐。\n\n[PAWN_nameDef]非常喜爱动物，[PAWN_possessive]父母不同意[PAWN_objective]养宠物，于是[PAWN_pronoun]常常和别人的宠物玩耍。</desc>
   </SpoiledChild80>
-
+  
   <Spy58>
     <!-- EN: spy -->
     <title>政府间谍</title>
@@ -5921,7 +5914,7 @@
     <!-- EN: While other passengers pass the years between star systems in cryptosleep sarcophagi, [PAWN_nameDef] had to wake up at periodic intervals to perform inspections, check the navigation systems, and to oil the mechanoids. -->
     <desc>当其他乘客在低温休眠舱度过星系间的数年旅途时，[PAWN_nameDef]会被定期唤醒，进行例行检查，检查导航系统并为机器人上油。</desc>
   </StarshipJanitor33>
-
+  
   <StarSquire9>
     <!-- EN: star squire -->
     <title>星际扈从</title>
@@ -6003,8 +5996,7 @@
     <desc>[PAWN_nameDef]游历世界来讲述[PAWN_pronoun]研究出来的传说故事。经过一次改变遗传基因的实验后，[PAWN_possessive]皮肤开始长出鳞片。[PAWN_pronoun]非常喜悦，因为[PAWN_pronoun]希望能与传说故事里的生物一样。</desc>
   </Storyteller63>
   
-  <!--PART 6 ORIGINAL 5999 -> EOF-->
-   <StoryWriter67>
+  <StoryWriter67>
     <!-- EN: story writer -->
     <title>小说作家</title>
     <!-- EN: writer -->