update with comment fix.

DefInjected/InstructionDef/Instructions.xml

@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
 
   <UndraftAll.text>不错不错！将你的殖民者解散吧。\n\n他们会回归到正常工作当中去。</UndraftAll.text>
 
-  <ChooseStoryteller.text>教程到此就结束了！\n\n还有许多东西需要学习，比如如何管理囚犯，如何狩猎，如何贸易，但是你已经掌握了所有的基础知识。\n\n在教程模式中，所有的随机事件都已经被禁止，如果您想开启一场真正的游戏\n\n1. 请点击屏幕右下角的「菜单」按钮\n2. 选择「选项」\n3. 选择「故事叙述者」」\n4. 选择一个适合你的难度和故事讲述者。\n祝你好运！有更多的疑问可以前往官方维基rimworld.huiji.wiki查阅资料，享受游戏吧！</ChooseStoryteller.text>
+  <ChooseStoryteller.text>教程到此就结束了！\n\n还有许多东西需要学习，比如如何管理囚犯，如何狩猎，如何贸易，但是你已经掌握了所有的基础知识。\n\n在教程模式中，所有的随机事件都已经被禁用，如果您想开启一场真正的游戏\n\n1. 请点击屏幕右下角的「菜单」按钮\n2. 选择「选项」\n3. 选择「故事叙述者」」\n4. 选择一个适合你的难度和故事讲述者。\n祝你好运！有更多的疑问可以前往官方维基rimworld.huiji.wiki查阅资料，享受游戏吧！</ChooseStoryteller.text>
   <ChooseStoryteller.rejectInputMessage>请选择一个正常的游戏难度并结束教程</ChooseStoryteller.rejectInputMessage>
 
 

DefInjected/JobDef/Jobs_Misc.xml

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
   <ClearSnow.reportString>除雪。</ClearSnow.reportString>
   <Vomit.reportString>呕吐。</Vomit.reportString>
   <Flick.reportString>按开关。</Flick.reportString>
-  <TradeWithPawn.reportString>和TargetA进行贸易。</TradeWithPawn.reportString>
+  <TradeWithPawn.reportString>和TargetA进行交易。</TradeWithPawn.reportString>
   <FleeAndCower.reportString>正在逃跑。</FleeAndCower.reportString>
 
 

DefInjected/KeyBindingDef/KeyBindings.xml

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
   <!-- Selection special -->
 
   <CommandTogglePower.label>开关电力</CommandTogglePower.label>
-  <CommandItemForbid.label>禁止/取消禁止</CommandItemForbid.label>
+  <CommandItemForbid.label>禁用/解禁</CommandItemForbid.label>
   <CommandColonistDraft.label>征召/解散</CommandColonistDraft.label>
 
 

DefInjected/NeedDef/Needs_Misc.xml

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 <LanguageData>
 
   <Mood.label>心情值</Mood.label>
-  <Mood.description>心情值表示一个人是多么快乐或紧张。如果心情值太低，他们可能会精神崩溃。好的心情还能提高工作效率。</Mood.description>
+  <Mood.description>心情值表示一个人是多么快乐或紧张。当心情值太低时，他们可能会精神崩溃。好的心情还能提高工作效率。</Mood.description>
 
   <Food.label>饮食值</Food.label>
-  <Food.description>饮食值表示了一个生物最近吃下的营养物的多少。如果食物值为零，生物会因为饥饿而营养不良甚至死亡。</Food.description>
+  <Food.description>饮食值表示了一个生物最近吃下的营养物的多少。当食物值为零时，生物会因为饥饿而营养不良甚至死亡。</Food.description>
 
   <Rest.label>休息值</Rest.label>
   <Rest.description>休息值表示生物最近有多少睡眠。休息不足不但会让殖民者头脑不清，还会会严重影响心情。</Rest.description>

DefInjected/RulePackDef/RulePacks_Art_DescriptionRoot.xml

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.18>artextra_clause->一个拟人手法的[concept][idle_verb_progressive][side_position]</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.18>
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.19>artextra_clause->一个[side_position][animal]似乎象征着[concept]</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.19>
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.20>artextra_clause->一群[quantity_adjphrase][outlander][side_position][idle_verb_progressive]</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.20>
-  <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.21>artextra_clause->如果你眯着眼睛，[composition]画面变成了一个[animal]的轮廓</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.21>
+  <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.21>artextra_clause->当你眯着眼睛时，[composition]画面变成了一个[animal]的轮廓</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.21>
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.22>style_clause->画面似乎表达了[concept]</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.22>
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.23>style_clause->这个作品传达了[concept]的主题，并且以[artstyle_adj]风格所作</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.23>
   <ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.24>style_clause->这个作品暗示了[concept]</ArtDescriptionUtility_Global.rulePack.rulesStrings.24>

DefInjected/TaleDef/Tales_DoublePawn.xml

@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
   <KilledColonyAnimal.label>殖民地动物被杀害</KilledColonyAnimal.label>
   <KilledMajorColonyEnemy.label>杀死殖民地大敌</KilledMajorColonyEnemy.label>
 
-  <TradedWith.label>进行贸易</TradedWith.label>
+  <TradedWith.label>进行交易</TradedWith.label>
   <TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.0>tale_noun->[seller_fullName]与[buyer_fullName]之间的交易</TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.0>
   <TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.1>image->[buyer_nameFull]从[seller_nameFull]出购买了一些东西，[circumstance_group]</TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.1>
   <TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.2>image->[seller_nameFull]向[buyer_nameFull]卖了一些商品， [circumstance_group]</TradedWith.rulePack.rulesStrings.2>

Keyed/Dialogs_Various.xml

@@ -8,23 +8,23 @@
   <!-- Game updated to new version -->
   <GameUpdatedToNewVersionInitial>Rimworld已有版本更新{0}，{1}\n\n升级可能会对Mod使用造成影响。</GameUpdatedToNewVersionInitial>
   <GameUpdatedToNewVersionNonSteam>对于DRM-免费的游戏拷贝，您可以在不同的文件夹下安装两次，因此可以同时游玩旧版和新版。</GameUpdatedToNewVersionNonSteam>
-  <GameUpdatedToNewVersionSteam>您可以在STEAM的「beta」选项中选择使用旧版进行游戏。\n\n  1. 在STEAM游戏库中右击RimWorld.\n  2. 点击「属性」\n  3. 选择Beta标签\n  4. 在下拉菜单中选择你想进行游戏的版本。\n\n旧版可能最终被移除。\n\n注意MOD作者如果升级了MOD有可能导致无法在旧版本中运行，您可以通过禁止自动更新来避免这一问题。</GameUpdatedToNewVersionSteam>
+  <GameUpdatedToNewVersionSteam>您可以在STEAM的「beta」选项中选择使用旧版进行游戏。\n\n  1. 在STEAM游戏库中右击RimWorld.\n  2. 点击「属性」\n  3. 选择Beta标签\n  4. 在下拉菜单中选择你想进行游戏的版本。\n\n旧版可能最终被移除。\n\n注意Mod作者如果升级了Mod有可能导致无法在旧版本中运行，您可以通过禁止自动更新来避免这一问题。</GameUpdatedToNewVersionSteam>
 
   <!-- Recovered from errors caused by mods -->
-  <RecoveredFromErrorsDialogTitle>恢复不兼容或损坏的MODS错误</RecoveredFromErrorsDialogTitle>
+  <RecoveredFromErrorsDialogTitle>恢复不兼容或损坏的ModS错误</RecoveredFromErrorsDialogTitle>
-  <RecoveredFromErrorsText>当前激活的这些MOD之间有冲突错误的隐患。\n\n它们彼此之间不兼容，可能版本不同或已经损坏。\n\n所有的MOD已被禁用，可以在MOD菜单中重新激活。</RecoveredFromErrorsText>
+  <RecoveredFromErrorsText>当前激活的这些Mod之间有冲突错误的隐患。\n\n它们彼此之间不兼容，可能版本不同或已经损坏。\n\n所有的Mod已被禁用，可以在Mod菜单中重新激活。</RecoveredFromErrorsText>
 
   <!-- Errors during loading -->
   <ErrorWhileLoadingAssetsTitle>载入资源时出错</ErrorWhileLoadingAssetsTitle>
   <ErrorWhileLoadingAssets>载入游戏资源时发生错误。查看错误日志以了解更多信息。</ErrorWhileLoadingAssets>
-  <ErrorWhileLoadingAssets_ModsInfo>当前游戏载入了自定义的MOD -它们可能会引起这些问题。</ErrorWhileLoadingAssets_ModsInfo>
+  <ErrorWhileLoadingAssets_ModsInfo>当前游戏载入了自定义的Mod -它们可能会引起这些问题。</ErrorWhileLoadingAssets_ModsInfo>
   <ErrorWhileGeneratingMapTitle>生成地图时出错</ErrorWhileGeneratingMapTitle>
   <ErrorWhileGeneratingMap>生成新地图时发生错误。查看错误日志以了解更多信息。</ErrorWhileGeneratingMap>
   <ErrorWhileLoadingMapTitle>载入地图时出错</ErrorWhileLoadingMapTitle>
   <ErrorWhileLoadingMap>载入地图时出现错误。查看错误日志以了解更多信息。</ErrorWhileLoadingMap>
 
   <!-- Unloaded mod with an assembly -->
-  <ModWithAssemblyWasUnloaded>游戏无法从未激活的MOD中载入完整的修改代码，因此未被激活的MOD可能依然会生效。\n\n我们推荐您退出并重启游戏，以正确的载入MOD。</ModWithAssemblyWasUnloaded>
+  <ModWithAssemblyWasUnloaded>游戏无法从未激活的Mod中载入完整的修改代码，因此未被激活的Mod可能依然会生效。\n\n我们推荐您退出并重启游戏，以正确的载入Mod。</ModWithAssemblyWasUnloaded>
 
   <!-- Missing Steam -->
   <SteamClientMissing>无法初始化Steam API。可能原因：\n\nSteam未运行。\n在Steam之外启动，且无法载入steam_appid.txt。\n通过和Steam客户端不同的权限启动（比如「管理员身份」）。\n\n在大部分时候，重启你的电脑即可解决这个问题。\n\n游戏本版本需要Steam才可运行，现在将会退出。</SteamClientMissing>
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
   <WorldFileVersionMismatch>世界生成版本为{0}，当前运行游戏版本为{1}。\n\n 载入这个世界很可能会造成游戏崩溃或产生游戏BUG。建议你重新生成一个新世界。</WorldFileVersionMismatch>
   <FileIncompatibleWarning>保存该文件的游戏版本为{0}。\n当前运行游戏版本为{1}\n\n载入该文件可能导致错误或崩溃。</FileIncompatibleWarning>
   <ModsMismatchWarningTitle>Mod不匹配</ModsMismatchWarningTitle>
-  <ModsMismatchWarningText>存档的Mod激活设定和当前游戏运行的设定不同，你改动了Mod，根据Mod的内容有可能发生问题，也有可能正常。\n\n存档的Mod激活设定是（按照顺序）：\n\n{0}\n\n当前运行的MOD激活设定是（按照顺序）：\n\n{1}</ModsMismatchWarningText>
+  <ModsMismatchWarningText>存档的Mod激活设定和当前游戏运行的设定不同，你改动了Mod，根据Mod的内容有可能发生问题，也有可能正常。\n\n存档的Mod激活设定是（按照顺序）：\n\n{0}\n\n当前运行的Mod激活设定是（按照顺序）：\n\n{1}</ModsMismatchWarningText>
 
   <!-- Resolution change dialog -->
   <ConfirmResolutionChange>你已经改变了你当前的分辨率。目前游戏显示是否正常？\n\n将在{0}秒后恢复原始设置……</ConfirmResolutionChange>
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
   <YourTradeableSilverTip>你只能使用轨道交易信标附近的白银进行交易。</YourTradeableSilverTip>
   <TraderHasNoMore>贸易商没有货物了。</TraderHasNoMore>
   <ColonyHasNoMore>殖民地没有货物了。</ColonyHasNoMore>
-  <TraderWillNotTrade>交易商不想交易这种商品。</TraderWillNotTrade>
+  <TraderWillNotTrade>贸易商不想交易这种商品。</TraderWillNotTrade>
   <NegotiatorTalkingImpaired>你的谈判人员{0}由于健康原因而无法谈判。\n\n这将影响到贸易价格.\n\n考虑用一个健康殖民者来谈判。</NegotiatorTalkingImpaired>
   <ConfirmTraderShortFunds>贸易商没有足够的白银支付这次交易，继续么？</ConfirmTraderShortFunds>
   <SortBy>排序方式</SortBy>

Keyed/Enums.xml

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   <PriceTypeCheap>便宜</PriceTypeCheap>
   <PriceTypeNormal>一般</PriceTypeNormal>
   <PriceTypeExpensive>昂贵</PriceTypeExpensive>
-  <PriceTypeExorbitant>极度昂贵</PriceTypeExorbitant>
+  <PriceTypeExorbitant>非常昂贵</PriceTypeExorbitant>
 
   <!-- Storage priority labels -->
   <StoragePriorityUnstored>不储存</StoragePriorityUnstored>
@@ -34,9 +34,9 @@
   <FoodTypeFlags_AnimalProduct>畜产品</FoodTypeFlags_AnimalProduct>
   <FoodTypeFlags_Plant>植物</FoodTypeFlags_Plant>
   <FoodTypeFlags_Tree>树木</FoodTypeFlags_Tree>
-  <FoodTypeFlags_Meal>烹调食物</FoodTypeFlags_Meal>
+  <FoodTypeFlags_Meal>烹调食品</FoodTypeFlags_Meal>
-  <FoodTypeFlags_Processed>加工食物</FoodTypeFlags_Processed>
+  <FoodTypeFlags_Processed>加工食品</FoodTypeFlags_Processed>
-  <FoodTypeFlags_Liquor>酒</FoodTypeFlags_Liquor>
+  <FoodTypeFlags_Liquor>酒类</FoodTypeFlags_Liquor>
   <FoodTypeFlags_Kibble>动物饲料</FoodTypeFlags_Kibble>
 
   <!-- Quality category -->
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
   <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusInvalid>无效</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusInvalid>
   <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusPreparingConfig>准备配置数据</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusPreparingConfig>
   <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusPreparingContent>准备内容文件</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusPreparingContent>
-  <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingContent>上传内容</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingContent>
+  <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingContent>上传内容文件</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingContent>
   <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingPreviewFile>上传预览文件</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusUploadingPreviewFile>
   <EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusCommittingChanges>提交变更</EItemUpdateStatus_k_EItemUpdateStatusCommittingChanges>
 
@@ -93,16 +93,16 @@
 
   <!-- Trainable intelligence -->
   <TrainableIntelligence_None>无</TrainableIntelligence_None>
-  <TrainableIntelligence_Simple>简单</TrainableIntelligence_Simple>
+  <TrainableIntelligence_Simple>低级</TrainableIntelligence_Simple>
   <TrainableIntelligence_Intermediate>中级</TrainableIntelligence_Intermediate>
   <TrainableIntelligence_Advanced>高级</TrainableIntelligence_Advanced>
 
   <!-- Medical care category -->
   <MedicalCareCategory_NoCare>无医生照顾</MedicalCareCategory_NoCare>
-  <MedicalCareCategory_NoMeds>有医生照顾，但没有药物供给</MedicalCareCategory_NoMeds>
+  <MedicalCareCategory_NoMeds>有医生照顾，无药物</MedicalCareCategory_NoMeds>
-  <MedicalCareCategory_HerbalOrWorse>提供草药或以下的药物</MedicalCareCategory_HerbalOrWorse>
+  <MedicalCareCategory_HerbalOrWorse>提供草药等级及以下的药物</MedicalCareCategory_HerbalOrWorse>
-  <MedicalCareCategory_NormalOrWorse>提供普通药物或以下的药物</MedicalCareCategory_NormalOrWorse>
+  <MedicalCareCategory_NormalOrWorse>提供普通药物等级或以下的药物</MedicalCareCategory_NormalOrWorse>
-  <MedicalCareCategory_Best>提供最好的医疗照顾</MedicalCareCategory_Best>
+  <MedicalCareCategory_Best>提供最高等级的医疗照顾</MedicalCareCategory_Best>
 
   <!-- Hostility response mode -->
   <HostilityResponseMode_Ignore>无视</HostilityResponseMode_Ignore>
@@ -129,12 +129,12 @@
 
   <!-- Pawn generation context -->
   <PawnGenerationContext_All>所有角色</PawnGenerationContext_All>
-  <PawnGenerationContext_PlayerStarter>玩家开始角色</PawnGenerationContext_PlayerStarter>
+  <PawnGenerationContext_PlayerStarter>玩家初始角色</PawnGenerationContext_PlayerStarter>
   <PawnGenerationContext_NonPlayer>NPC</PawnGenerationContext_NonPlayer>
 
   <!-- Animal name display mode -->
   <ShowAnimalNames>显示动物名称</ShowAnimalNames>
-  <AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameNamed>驯服（仅已命名的）</AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameNamed>
+  <AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameNamed>驯服（已命名）</AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameNamed>
   <AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameAll>驯服（所有）</AnimalNameDisplayMode_TameAll>
 
   <!-- Temperature -->
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
   <Kelvin>开尔文</Kelvin>
 
   <!-- Spoil reason -->
-  <SpoilReason_Freezing>因低温而变质</SpoilReason_Freezing>
+  <SpoilReason_Freezing>因低温而变质。</SpoilReason_Freezing>
-  <SpoilReason_HighTemperature>因高温而变质</SpoilReason_HighTemperature>
+  <SpoilReason_HighTemperature>因高温而变质。</SpoilReason_HighTemperature>
 
 </LanguageData>

Keyed/FloatMenu.xml

@@ -6,48 +6,48 @@
   <CannotUseSolarFlare>无法使用（太阳耀斑）</CannotUseSolarFlare>
   <CannotUseNoPower>无法使用（没有电力）</CannotUseNoPower>
   <CannotUseNoPath>无法使用（没有路径）</CannotUseNoPath>
-  <CannotUseReserved>无法使用（被预留）</CannotUseReserved>
+  <CannotUseReserved>无法使用（已被预留）</CannotUseReserved>
-  <CannotUseFull>无法使用（满了）</CannotUseFull>
+  <CannotUseFull>无法使用（已满）</CannotUseFull>
 
   <FireAt>射击{0}</FireAt>
 
   <OutOfRange>超出射程</OutOfRange>
   <CannotHitTarget>无法击中目标</CannotHitTarget>
-  <IsIncapableOfViolenceLower>{0}无法从事暴力</IsIncapableOfViolenceLower>
+  <IsIncapableOfViolenceLower>{0}无暴力能力</IsIncapableOfViolenceLower>
   <IsNotDraftedLower>{0}尚未被征召</IsNotDraftedLower>
-  <CannotOrderNonControlledLower>不能命令非控制单位</CannotOrderNonControlledLower>
+  <CannotOrderNonControlledLower>无法命令非控制单位</CannotOrderNonControlledLower>
 
   <OrderManThing>操纵{0}</OrderManThing>
 
   <MeleeAttack>近身攻击{0}</MeleeAttack>
-  <MeleeAttackToDeath>近身攻击{0}直到杀死</MeleeAttackToDeath>
+  <MeleeAttackToDeath>近身攻击杀死{0}</MeleeAttackToDeath>
   <NoPath>没有路径</NoPath>
 
-  <ForbiddenLower>禁止的</ForbiddenLower>
+  <ForbiddenLower>已禁用</ForbiddenLower>
-  <ForbiddenOutsideAllowedAreaLower>在允许活动区域之外</ForbiddenOutsideAllowedAreaLower>
+  <ForbiddenOutsideAllowedAreaLower>位于活动区外</ForbiddenOutsideAllowedAreaLower>
-  <SociallyImproperLower>不得体的社交</SociallyImproperLower>
+  <SociallyImproperLower>不礼貌</SociallyImproperLower>
   <PrisonerRoomLower>囚犯房间</PrisonerRoomLower>
   <BurningLower>燃烧中</BurningLower>
-  <NoEmptyPlaceLower>没有可用的空地来放置它</NoEmptyPlaceLower>
+  <NoEmptyPlaceLower>需要正确配置的空储存区</NoEmptyPlaceLower>
-  <AlreadyFilledLower>已经装满了</AlreadyFilledLower>
+  <AlreadyFilledLower>已装满</AlreadyFilledLower>
   <MissingMaterials>需要材料</MissingMaterials>
-  <MissingSkill>技能太低</MissingSkill>
+  <MissingSkill>技能过低</MissingSkill>
-  <NoEmptyGraveLower>没有空闲的坟墓来安葬它</NoEmptyGraveLower>
+  <NoEmptyGraveLower>需要正确配置的空坟墓</NoEmptyGraveLower>
-  <AnimalInteractedTooRecently>动物最近已经互动过了</AnimalInteractedTooRecently>
+  <AnimalInteractedTooRecently>动物互动过于频繁</AnimalInteractedTooRecently>
-  <NoUsableFood>没有可用的食物</NoUsableFood>
+  <NoUsableFood>缺少可用食物</NoUsableFood>
-  <NoFood>没有食物</NoFood>
+  <NoFood>缺少食物</NoFood>
-  <AnimalsSkillTooLow>驯兽技能太低</AnimalsSkillTooLow>
+  <AnimalsSkillTooLow>驯兽技能过低</AnimalsSkillTooLow>
   <NoComponentsToRepair>需要零部件</NoComponentsToRepair>
   <NoFuelToRefuel>需要{0}</NoFuelToRefuel>
   <NoWort>需要麦芽汁</NoWort>
 
   <ConsumeThing>享用{0}</ConsumeThing>
 
-  <CannotGoNoPath>无法走到目标（没有路径）</CannotGoNoPath>
+  <CannotGoNoPath>无法到达（没有路径）</CannotGoNoPath>
   <GoHere>走到这里</GoHere>
 
   <Arrest>拘捕{0}</Arrest>
-  <TryToArrest>尝试拘捕 {0}</TryToArrest>
+  <TryToArrest>尝试拘捕{0}</TryToArrest>
   <CannotArrest>无法拘捕</CannotArrest>
 
   <Capture>俘虏{0}</Capture>
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@
   <CarryToCryptosleepCasket>把{0}送入低温休眠舱</CarryToCryptosleepCasket>
   <CannotCarryToCryptosleepCasket>无法送入低温休眠舱</CannotCarryToCryptosleepCasket>
 
-  <NoCryptosleepCasket>没有可用的低温休眠舱。</NoCryptosleepCasket>
+  <NoCryptosleepCasket>缺少可用的低温休眠舱。</NoCryptosleepCasket>
-  <NoPrisonerBed>牢房缺少空床铺，或无法到达。</NoPrisonerBed>
+  <NoPrisonerBed>牢房缺少空床铺，或无法到达，或未在室内。</NoPrisonerBed>
   <NoNonPrisonerBed>缺少空床铺，或无法到达。</NoNonPrisonerBed>
-  <NoAnimalBed>缺少空的动物窝铺，或无法到达。</NoAnimalBed>
+  <NoAnimalBed>缺少空动物床铺，或无法到达。</NoAnimalBed>
   <Reserved>已预留给其他人。</Reserved>
-  <ReservedBy>预留给了{0}。</ReservedBy>
+  <ReservedBy>已预留给{0}。</ReservedBy>
-  <IsReservedBy>{0}被预留给了{1}。</IsReservedBy>
+  <IsReservedBy>{0}已被预留给{1}。</IsReservedBy>
 
   <Incapable>无法胜任</Incapable>
   <IncapableOfCapacity>无法胜任{0}</IncapableOfCapacity>
@@ -73,15 +73,15 @@
   <MinSkill>最低技能</MinSkill>
 
   <Equip>装备{0}</Equip>
-  <EquipWarningBrawler>（格斗者的心情会降低）</EquipWarningBrawler>
+  <EquipWarningBrawler>（格斗者会不高兴）</EquipWarningBrawler>
   <CannotEquip>无法装备{0}</CannotEquip>
 
   <ForceWear>强制穿上{0}</ForceWear>
   <CannotWear>无法穿上{0}</CannotWear>
-  <CannotWearBecauseOfMissingBodyParts>缺失身体部位</CannotWearBecauseOfMissingBodyParts>
+  <CannotWearBecauseOfMissingBodyParts>身体部位缺失</CannotWearBecauseOfMissingBodyParts>
 
-  <Strip>脱下{0}</Strip>
+  <Strip>脱光{0}</Strip>
-  <CannotStrip>无法脱下{0}</CannotStrip>
+  <CannotStrip>无法脱光{0}</CannotStrip>
 
   <Deposit>将{0}放置到{1}</Deposit>
   <CannotDeposit>无法将{0}放置到{1}</CannotDeposit>
@@ -94,8 +94,8 @@
   <NotInjured>没有受伤</NotInjured>
   <SomeoneElseSleeping>已被占用</SomeoneElseSleeping>
 
-  <TradeWith>和{0}贸易</TradeWith>
+  <TradeWith>和{0}交易</TradeWith>
-  <CannotTrade>不能贸易</CannotTrade>
+  <CannotTrade>无法交易</CannotTrade>
 
   <!-- Specific thing interactions -->
   <EnterCryptosleepCasket>进入低温休眠舱</EnterCryptosleepCasket>
@@ -105,18 +105,18 @@
   <CannotGenericWork>无法{0}{1}</CannotGenericWork>
 
   <!-- e.g. Already GERUND OBJECt, Already repairing wall, already hauling metal, etc-->
-  <CannotMissingHealthActivities>无法优先当前任务（健康问题：{0}）</CannotMissingHealthActivities>
+  <CannotMissingHealthActivities>无法优先（健康问题：{0}）</CannotMissingHealthActivities>
 
   <CannotGenericAlreadyAm>已经在{0}{1}中</CannotGenericAlreadyAm>
 
-  <CannotPrioritizeWorkTypeDisabled>无法优先当前任务（从来不做：{0}）</CannotPrioritizeWorkTypeDisabled>
+  <CannotPrioritizeWorkTypeDisabled>无法优先（从来不做：{0}）</CannotPrioritizeWorkTypeDisabled>
 
-  <CannotPrioritizeNotAssignedToWorkType>无法优先当前任务（未指派工作：{0}）</CannotPrioritizeNotAssignedToWorkType>
+  <CannotPrioritizeNotAssignedToWorkType>无法优先（未指派工作：{0}）</CannotPrioritizeNotAssignedToWorkType>
 
-  <CannotPrioritizeResearch>无法优先当前任务（研究是一项长期的工作）</CannotPrioritizeResearch>
+  <CannotPrioritizeResearch>无法优先（研究为长期工作）</CannotPrioritizeResearch>
 
-  <CannotPrioritizeForbidden>无法优先当前任务（{0}是禁止的）</CannotPrioritizeForbidden>
+  <CannotPrioritizeForbidden>无法优先（{0}已被禁用）</CannotPrioritizeForbidden>
-  <CannotPrioritizeForbiddenOutsideAllowedArea>无法优先当前任务（{0}在允许活动区域之外）</CannotPrioritizeForbiddenOutsideAllowedArea>
+  <CannotPrioritizeForbiddenOutsideAllowedArea>无法优先（{0}位于活动区外）</CannotPrioritizeForbiddenOutsideAllowedArea>
 
   <!-- e.g. Prioritize GERUND OBJECT, Prioritize repairing wall, prioritize hauling metal, etc-->
   <PrioritizeGeneric>优先{0}{1}</PrioritizeGeneric>

Keyed/GameplayCommands.xml

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   <CommandClearPrioritizedWorkDesc>清除任何你指定的优先任务。该角色将根据自身工作优先度自行选择工作。</CommandClearPrioritizedWorkDesc>
 
   <CommandCancelConstructionLabel>取消</CommandCancelConstructionLabel>
-  <CommandCancelConstructionDesc>取消建造该建筑。</CommandCancelConstructionDesc>
+  <CommandCancelConstructionDesc>取消建造命令。</CommandCancelConstructionDesc>
 
   <CommandGetOutOfBedLabel>起床</CommandGetOutOfBedLabel>
   <CommandGetOutOfBedDesc>离开当前的床。</CommandGetOutOfBedDesc>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 
   <!-- Door -->
   <CommandToggleDoorForbid>允许通行</CommandToggleDoorForbid>
-  <CommandToggleDoorForbidDesc>当此门禁止通行时，殖民者和友方派系不会通过此门。但不影响敌对派系及动物的行动。</CommandToggleDoorForbidDesc>
+  <CommandToggleDoorForbidDesc>此门的通行状态。殖民者不会通过禁止通行的门，但不影响其他派系的人。</CommandToggleDoorForbidDesc>
   <CommandToggleDoorHoldOpen>保持敞门</CommandToggleDoorHoldOpen>
   <CommandToggleDoorHoldOpenDesc>启用时，殖民者将不会关闭这道门，并保持一直敞开的状态。\n\n门敞开时任何人或动物都能通过，包括敌人。</CommandToggleDoorHoldOpenDesc>
 
@@ -119,11 +119,11 @@
 
   <!-- Trap -->
   <CommandAutoRearm>自动重置</CommandAutoRearm>
-  <CommandAutoRearmDesc>如果启用，该陷阱会在触发后自动被指派重置工作。</CommandAutoRearmDesc>
+  <CommandAutoRearmDesc>启用时，该陷阱会在触发后自动被指派重置工作。</CommandAutoRearmDesc>
 
   <!-- Animal control -->
   <CommandReleaseAnimalsLabel>辅助进攻</CommandReleaseAnimalsLabel>
-  <CommandReleaseAnimalsDesc>如果启用，受驯的动物可以上前攻击远处目标。如果禁用，它们则在身边保护主人。</CommandReleaseAnimalsDesc>
+  <CommandReleaseAnimalsDesc>启用时，经过训练的动物可以上前攻击远处目标。禁用时，它们则在身边保护主人。</CommandReleaseAnimalsDesc>
 
   <!-- Squad attack -->
   <CommandSquadAttack>攻击</CommandSquadAttack>

Keyed/Incidents.xml

@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
   <LetterBuildingBrokenDown>一台机器（{0}）损坏了。在一名从事修理工作的殖民者去修复它之前它都将无法工作。</LetterBuildingBrokenDown>
 
   <!-- Ransom demand -->
-  <RansomDemand>{1}发来通讯信号。他们绑架了殖民者{0}并索要赎金。\n\n从他们手里赎回HIM需要{2}白银。</RansomDemand>
+  <RansomDemand>{1}发来通讯信号。他们绑架了殖民者 {0} 并索要赎金。\n\n从他们手里赎回HIM需要{2}白银。</RansomDemand>
   <RansomDemand_Accept>同意</RansomDemand_Accept>
   <RansomDemand_Reject>拒绝</RansomDemand_Reject>
 

Keyed/Letters.xml

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
   <!-- Generalized letter labels -->
   <LetterLabelRelationsChangeGood>关系改善</LetterLabelRelationsChangeGood>
   <LetterLabelRelationsChangeBad>关系恶化</LetterLabelRelationsChangeBad>
-  <LetterLabelShortCircuit>电线短路</LetterLabelShortCircuit>
+  <LetterLabelShortCircuit>淋雨短路</LetterLabelShortCircuit>
   <LetterLabelMentalBreakdown>精神崩溃</LetterLabelMentalBreakdown>
 
   <!-- Bonded animals -->

Keyed/Misc_Gameplay.xml

@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@
   <MarriageSpotNotUsable>无法使用：{0}。</MarriageSpotNotUsable>
   <MarriageSpotNotStandable>被阻塞</MarriageSpotNotStandable>
   <MarriageSpotDangerous>对{0}太危险</MarriageSpotDangerous>
-  <MarriageSpotForbidden>对{0}禁止的</MarriageSpotForbidden>
+  <MarriageSpotForbidden>对{0}已禁用</MarriageSpotForbidden>
   <MarriageSpotReserved>已被预留</MarriageSpotReserved>
   <MarriageSpotUnreachable>对{0}无法到达</MarriageSpotUnreachable>
   <MarriageSpotInPrisonCell>位于监狱中</MarriageSpotInPrisonCell>